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Posted: 15 years ago
sorry for late,I'll post next part soon.pls wait.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry for late reading the first part of ur fic yaar, nice one.
So now Naina is back in his husband's life and all problem b/w them has been sorted out.
Naina bhi na bilkul stupid hai, na jaane kaise doosron ki baat pe bharosa kar leti hai aur Raj ki ek bhi nahi sunti.


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry for late reading the first part of ur fic yaar, nice one.
So now Naina is back in his husband's life and all problem b/w them has been sorted out.
Naina bhi na bilkul stupid hai, na jaane kaise doosron ki baat pe bharosa kar leti hai aur Raj ki ek bhi nahi sunti.


it's ok dear.
thanks dear for loving the update.yes, now all prblm between raj and naina solved.
sahi naina bilkul raj ke baat nehi sunti par aab sunegi.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 2:-

Here raj and naina chatted with each other; raj didn't want not a single moment to, loss to talk with naina.

Dono ek doosre se baat kar rehe hain .after some days, raj discharged from the hospital but still he cannot move for one months because of his legs are fractured and his one of the hand also fractured.

One day Raj lay on his bed and naina came and said raj…

Raj:-bolo naina…

Naina:-oh aaone kahatha kuch file tha aapke sath toh uss din mere hath mein toh sirf aapke wallet and watch dia aur kuch nehi,mein pucha baki sab se aur oh bhi kaha oh log jante nehi kaun aaya tha iya aayithi, par meine kuch nurse se baat ki aur unhone kaha…

Raj complete her sentence ek lerki aayithi aur kaha oh mere behen hain sherry usne legaya.iye toh.

Naina:-aapko kaise pata.

Raj:-meine pucha tha and they said me this.

Naina:-oh tabhi oh log mujhe bola ke koi pucha tha, dekhiye they didn't remember this how could they?

Raj:-naina relax it's not important/

Naina:-oh yes, aap relax raho par mein nehi. Waise iye sherry jisse aap aapne behen ki tarah dekhte hain oh kyuon aisa kar rehe hain aapke sath…

Raj:-naina oh sherry nehi hain, infact lalajee jante nehi this time sherry kaha hain,oh sirf mein aur huda aur Alekh jante hain.

Naina shocked to hear this and said kaya ?par oh dono kaise?

Raj: - humara shaadi ke baad iyaad hain jis din mere birthday tha, humara jhagra hua…

Naina:-I'm sorry, oh mein …

Raj: - come here and sit here.

Naina still stand there.

Raj: - lt. Sekhawat come here,it's an order.

Naina look at raj then goes near to him and sit besides him.

Raj smiles and said lagta hain naina abhi bhi m ein tumhara sirf mentor hoon, dost nehi aur pati toh abhi bhi nehi …

Naina look at him and said raj ,meine maana galati, bahut bara galati kia par aap iss tarah mujhe kyuon dant rehe hain, iss tarah kyuon bol rehe hain aap, isse aacha hota toh hum chale jate

Raj:- naina don't say this again and think this thing, are mein toh majak kar raha tha thora light karne ke liye …aur mein uss din ki baat isliye bola kyuon tumhe iyaad hoga uss din mein achanak chala gaya tha , ek phone aane ki baad ,oh phone sherry ka tha usne mujhe contact karna chaha but fails then he somehow Alekh no and call him and that time both Alekh and huda wait for me for a mission and they call me and inform me and I go there to meet them and find still that day sherry aapne ghar ko chor dia tha after lala je caught , oh rehene lagi ek relative ke ghar but uha bhi lala ke log paunch gaye toh usse uha se jana para par uha sherry ko na dekh ke ghar ke logo ko maar dia then sherry move to a hotel then to ladies hostel and keep changing and at last she try to call me but fails then she try to contact u , shalini but fails again . then she again and again tried and fails and then that day she called them and …anyway, then I go there and meet them and un dono ko bola sherry kahi chupane ko kyuon ki, tab mein usse iha bhi nehi aasakta that oh meine usse un dono ka sath bhej dia and then meine tumhe batana chaha par haar baat problem ho jata tha. Aur phir time hi nehi paya and now u know everything.

Naina:-itna sab ho gaya aur mujhe kuch pata , aur aur sherry bechare ke sath kitna kuch hua aur mein ,iye lala aisa kyuon hain sherry ke sath bhi…. then again said app sherry ko iha bula lijiye.

raj:-thik hain...
Raj:-Naina, lala jaise log kisike aapne nehi hote, usse toh hum dekhenge jarur but now tell something …

Naina:-kaya?

Raj:- aaj tumne jab cooking nehi kia toh mein kaya ek cooking ek log ..ahhh, mar kyuon rehe ho, mein toh baas majak kar raha tha.

Naina give him angry glances and said aap badal gaye…

Raj :- accha…oh toh badal gaye, pehele sirf tumhara mentor tha, dost tha aur aab pati ho gaya, par kaya jamana hain aaj major Sekhawat ko maar khane par raha hain aapne patni ,aapne officer se, aapne ….Cadet ah. Singh se…

Naina:-jaiye mein aapse baat nehi karti…

Raj:- oh…but naina's mom came and said kyuon aabtujhe raj bete ka kaunsa burai saamne aagaya jot u baat nehi karegi kehe rehe hi hain…

Naina:-oh ma….

Naina's mom:-mein tujhse baat karne nehi aayi, then rajveer:-beta, mujhe wapas jana hoga, tumhara papa ko uha ekele meremasi jee ke paas hain…

Raj:-it's ok ma, aap jaiye, papa bhi bahut din aapne office chor ke iha rehe the ,

Naina:-par,ma…aap ekele jayenge kaise?

Naina's mom:-oh tumhe sochna nehi hain. tum sirf aapne ek duniya mein reho.

Huda came and said May I come in Sir?

Raj looks at huda and said yes,

Huda:-Sir,

Raj:- wait then ali agar free ho toh usse kehe do ma ko chor de par sabdhani se…

Huda nodded in positively and then said ok sir.

Raj:-after this u and others come here .

Naina's mom:-ok beta mein , kitchen mein jati hoon…

Raj smiles and said ma,naina gayi hain uha, don't worry she'll handle this….u take some rest.

Naina's mom smiles and said ok beta.

Here in the kitchen naina continuously crying.She thinks it's all her fault, everybody hates her now.

Pooja:-are tu iha hain,mein tujhe sharukh ke room mein matlab tum dono ke room mein dhoond ne gayithi..are tu ro rehi hain ?

Naina:- nehi toh oh toh baas , aise hi bol kaya hua, kuch chaiye?

Pooja:-nehi, oh tujhe help karne aayi hoon..

Naina smiles and said aacha, mere toh sara work ho gaya,

Pooja:-toh mein kaya karu?

Naina:-kuch nehi baas sab ko bol de khana laga rehi hoon 5mins mein iha chale aaye.

Pooja:-ok madam jee.

Naina smiles and then jaldi khana laga dia sab ka after that she take one plate for raj and goes to her room and said raj sona mat khana kha lijiye.

Raj :- mein so nehi raha tha,baas kuch soch raha tha…

Naina:-oh bhi baad mein karna,pehele khana kha lo…

Raj:-par mein kaise?

Naina:-ha,mujhe pata hain,mein hoon, chaliye…

Raj:- u forgot something.

Naina:-kaya?

Raj:-memory loss….

Naina:-humm , chaliye then naina take first bite and then give it to raj aisse don one khana kha liya ….

Then raj have some meeting with huda and others .

After this naina gave him medicine and every time raj makes face.

Naina:- aap baccho ki tarah zid mat kijiye….

Raj:-accha,mein baccho ki tarah zidd karta hoon iya tum…

Naina:- raj….chaliye so jaiye…

After sometime raj lay and naina patter his head lovingly.and soon raj dose off to deep sleep.

Naina smiles to him sleeping peacefully and then she also lay besides him and dose off to sleep.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry for late updating and short update.
Pls read it and comment it.
ur comments inspired me lots.
all my slient readers pls press the liked button also.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiiii rakhi 😛
how r u?

the update was really nice ⭐️
really loved raj-naina's part
the way raj was teasing naina was great 👏
raj-naina love each other so much
really liked their part

m feeling sad for sherry.and i just hate that laala 😡
waitingg for sherry's entry

naina's mother still hate her .really sad for her
hope everything got better soon for her

continue soon
is baar itni wait mat karvana
take care dear
luv preet 🤗
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow rakhi ! nice update!!!
Ab sab kuch theek ho raha hai !
Feeling bad about Sherry ...this Lala is a moron !😡
Aur yeh Naina ki mom abhi bhi Naina se nafrat karti hai???😕
Naina lovingly fed Raj...so sweet...
Update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
wonderful
too good
very well written
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Rakhi
it was very cute....
D way Raj teases Naina, their sweet bond evrything is very sweet
waiting for sherry's entry
plz ud asap
thnx fr d pm
love
sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
HI Rakhi...

Nice update.👏 👏 👏 It was really beautiful.
Poor Sherry!!!😭 Aur kitna bhugtegi wo...
Aur ye Lala😡 😡 😡 Disgusting pest. Raj ke kuch karne se pehle toh mai hi usse maar dalungi. Huh!
Kya Naina ki Maa ab bhi naraz hai usse? Poor Naina, kitna ro rahi thi.😭
The sccene between Raj and Naina were beautiful, especially the feeding one. I'm glad ki inn dono ke bich ki galatfehmi dur ho gayi hai.
Cont soon...
Take care...

Love
Guglu

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