mayur ff Pyaar Ka Angle part 9 pg 31 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great part dear...........
good job.👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: surbhi123

Great part dear...........

good job.👏👏👏

thnx a lot u guys comments encourage me alot
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
fantastic part dear
so now mayur r friends 😃
thats gr8
plzzzzzzzzz make the next part a bit long
cont. soooooooooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome part!!!! mayur are friends nw!!!!Yiepieeee!!!please update soonpm me!!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey.. awesome update...

luvd it .. finally mayur r frnds...
thnx a lot..pls continue soon.. 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice story i just read it plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 4
it's been a month since mayur were friends. it's sunday nd no college nupur is at home studying and she is having a lil problem concentrating(usually she doesn't has problem concentrating) she waz thinking abt mayank how dey had becum friends.
how he had given her a supporting shoulder when after what seemed like 4ever time she had fell weak.
N:(to herself angry) what's wrong wid me!!!!! y in the world can't i concentrate?
NM:nupur
N:(calms down listening to her mother's voice) yes maa
NM:beta i heard u shouting sab theek to hai na
N:yes maa sub theek hai(turns back to her book)
NM:beta
N:yes maa
NM:i'm going to the cinema. care 2 join me?
N:nahi maa aap jao
NM:ok den take care
N:bye maa
her mom leaves
BHUSHAN MANSION
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mayank is studyin and he can't understand sumthing
M: i'll ask nupur 2 clear my doubts
he calls nupur. nupur iz studyin and she hears the phone ringing she goes to answer the phone
N:hello
M:hi nupz it's me mayank
N:haan mayank bolo
M:actually i hav some doubts
N:i won't understand on de phone come over 2 my house
M:ok
mayank reaches nupur's house he rings de bell nupur opens de door
M:hi nupur
N:hi mayank come on in
dey go in and nupur iz explaining and mayank iz shocked 2 see how much he learned
nupur screams
N:aaaahhh!!
M:(concerned) kya howa
N:kuch nahi bas chota sa paper cut hai
M:nupz tum bhi na dekh k koi kaam nahi karsakti
N:lag gaya to main kya karsakti hoon
mayank toook her hand and sucked away de blood her pain seemed 2 vanish
as soon as her fingers touched his sweet mouth
N:thnx mayank
M:ur welcome
N:ummm... would u like coffee
M:sure i'll make it
N:mayank u r de guest and u r in my house
M:no nupur u alwayz say dat u don't waste time in any stuff to tumhari coffee bhi
baqwas hogi mana mujhe coffee banani nahi aati par tumse buri to nahi banaonga na............
nupur waz getting a headache listening to his continuos radio f.m
N:oh shut up
M:(shocked)kya howa
N:sorry i didn't mean to say this but u speak so much ab chup chaap beth jao
mai coffee lekar aati hoo
M:ok
she goes to make coffee(guyz she has hidden talents) she thinks of taking some
biscuits she takes a knife to cut the pack she iz continously thinking of a subject
where she learnt dat how one person can change ur life completely her own scream of
unbearable pain bought her back 2 her senses
N:aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
she looked down to see blood oozing out of her wrist she had accidentally cut her main vein
she looked up to see mayank rushing towards her he picked her up be4 she fell and
rushed out to de hospital in the hospital
M:doctorrr!!!! where de hell iz the doctor
D:yes oh no emergency nurses take her to the I.C.U
mayank had to stay back unwillingly tears well up in his eyes. doctor comes out
M:doctor is she alright
D:not exactly she has lost a lot of bloodhe blood group is B-
if anyone wid b-
M:im o+ i'm universal take my blood
mayank gave nupur 3 bottles of blood after the process of blood-giving
mayank goes into the ward and takes nupur's hand
M:plz nupur wake up u hav 2 see alot in dis world u have to live
plzzz wake up saying so his eyes close
NUPURS POV
i woke up to find myself in a hospital ward wid my one hand in mayank's
hand he was looking weak but as usual he waz looking really cute
and not to 4get dashing i stirred a little 2 get up up and his
eyes blinked open and he stopped me from moving

M:no nupur u need to rest
N:wh.. what.... hap.... happened
M:(sarcastically)u landed here after ur carelessness (lingering on carelessness)
N:(ignoring his sarcasticness) sorry
M:aah......
N:kya howa?
M:thora sa headache(he gave three bottles of blood)
N:tum theek to ho?
M:(trying to recover) ummmm... yea i'm fine i'll get u a juice
N:par..
M:i'll be back
Doctor comes in 2 check nupur blood pressure
D:ur lover loves u a lot. i'm so happy 2 see dat such love is still there in the world!!
N:what do u mean?
D:gosh didn't he tel u he gave u 3 bottles of blood
N:(with moist eyes) dat's why he looks so weak
D:take care of urself i am leaving
Mayank comes in to find tears in nupurs eyes. he rushes toward her
M:kya howa nupur
N:why didn't u tell me???
M:tell u what
N:dat u gave me blood
M:wo.. u urgently needed blood soo.....
N:oh no
M:ab kya howa
N:u have a mobile
M:haan but y?
N:maa ko phone karna hai
M:here he gives her the phone
N:(on the phone) hi maa
NM:hi beta kya howa phone kaisay kiya
N:maa aap abtak ghar nahi pohanchy
NM:main bas raaste main hoon kyoon koi problem hai
N:nahi wo aap aate howe meray liye kuch stationary le aati ho
NM:god nupur ladkiyan hoti hain maa meray liye gloss yaan make-up
le aana aur meri beti hai ki maa aate howe stationary leti aana
N:maa main aap ki beti jo hoon
NM:acha theek hai phir mujhe ghanta aur lage ga
N:ok bye
NM:bye
N:(to mayank)tum ne kuch khaya
M:nahi main tumhare uthne ka wait karraha tha
nupur gets up and hugs him tight.mayank hugs her back. they could
literally feel each other's heartbeat. nupur could feel the
heat radiating from his body. his hands seem to comfort her as he
caressed her back. nupur felt so safe so warm so secure in his
mascular arms. neither of them were willing to break the hug

that's it 4 2day guyz
i made a long(and boring)update to make up 4 soo long
plzzz comment/critisize
silent readers de like tab iz all yours

NOTE: u guyz i won't be able 2 handle sajan at de same time mayur so i'll just say dat sajan fell in luv and got engaged and after dat i'll show sum romance 4 sajan iz dis fine or do i hav 2 make a storyline 4 sajan
Edited by mjhtian - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Hi,
first one to comment.
sorry for delay.
it was wonder full part.
just too good.
fantastic.
loved mayur a lot.
mayuank was so concern 4 nups.
he took her to the hospital and then gave hre 3 bottles blood.
oh mayank is just a perfect guy.
loved him so much.
rocking update sweety.
keep updating.


Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey
i loved ur story
plz do add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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