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basket_101

@basket_101

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Hi ishika!
i really like the concept of it..
i would love to keep reading it...
do send me a pm when you update... =)
HiNaL

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Ravz.

@Ravz.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

do continue very interesting :)

add me to your pm list please will be waiting for next UD

Ravviiee.xx

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Nice Start...plzz Pm me when u update....!!

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Ultrachic

@Ultrachic

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

character sketches r awesome ishika.......continue soon and add me in your pm list.

thanks

arushi

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ishika shergil

@ishika_sajan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

hi guyzz..........thanku 4 all the super sweet comments..n also 4 waitin this much really appreciate ur comments....guyzz im still a lil bizzy....so will post the new part in an hour or two...........hope u understand....thanks😊

love

ishika

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Sajan_Ekta

@Sajan_Ekta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Loved it completely! Continue soon!

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ishika shergil

@ishika_sajan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

hi...i know all of u are ready to throw your shoes on me........i said ill post in an hour n now its been a day!!!soo srry but know finally im posting it... so therzz the plot the story continues from the after mega episode after the song and samani hug(only till that' suhaani never cried after the hug)..but a few changes that are that samrat didnt had an accident abd he alwayzz lived with suhaani(jab se he came to india)his parents live in paris and samrat hates his parents....and no one is drunk exept gunjan...and varun(adhiraj) is there in the show 4rm the starting...he is the son of princi... ..bendia are a couple.. and haan ill add nihaal after a lil bit time.....he is in london at the time.... ill start in the next post😊

Edited by lovable00sneha - 15 years ago

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ishika shergil

@ishika_sajan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

so samrat and gunjan are in the canteen and all the others are in the party hall...........acha haan guyzz one more thing all the thin gs that gunjan said are in a really childish manner as she is drunk ........

Gunjan(holding samrat into a tight hug):SAMRAT!!!i...love...u....

samrat:i love u too chashmish..

gun(really cutely):and i love u 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10....umm..aage...aage bhool gayi

samrat:(smiles)kuch nahi hota princess..(sees the gang cuming)par ab control...pura gang aa raha hai!!

gun:arre..tum tou aise keh rahe ho jaise tum saaaaaaab ke saaamne mere saat flirt bahi karte!!!!! and she makes an annoyed face...

samrat puts his hands around her waist and says:acha baba srry!!!ab khush????

gun:sho shweeet!!!!my cutooo!!!!

just then the whole gang enters the canteen....seeing this gunjan runs towards nupur....

gunjan:DIIIII!!!!i love u.....tum kahan thi??i missed u so much!!

nupur(happy and shocked)samrat!!!tumhe meri behen ke saath kya kiya????woh aise kyu behave kar rahi hain???

gun:(hugging her 4rm the back):meri pyaari di...tum samrat ko kyu daant rahi ho????daantna hai tou naa...apne devar to daanto!!!apka utmost pyaara dodo!!!usne hi tou mere juice mein drink mix kar di.....

uday:woh..actually...main..woh..haan!!benji ne daala tha.......

dia:dodo!!!!!benji poori party mein mere saath tha....

gun:hawww!!!uday!!jhoota.....katti!!!

uday:par........

dia:(hitting him on his arm):shut up dodo!!!

gunjan(stands on the table)shh!!sab chup!!!hamesha sab bolte rehte hain aur main chup rehti hu.....aaj main boloon gi aur sab sune ge..

she steps down and heads towards nupur...

gun:di...tum hamesha mujhse poochti thi naa keh tum kaisi ho??aaj main tumhe saaaaaaaaaaaaaab bataungi...sab se pehle tou na tum mayank se itnaa zyaasa gussa mat hua karo!!!wohkitna cutoo hai!!!!(n pulls mayanks cheeks,at which samrat feels really jealous n mayank feels awrward)

then gunjan moves on to benji

gun:hi benji!!!tum theek to ho naa???yaa ohir se dia se pit ke aaye hoo....arre haan...riya kaisi hai!!tumhe mili naa???woh ek red rose le kar tumhe dhoond rahi thi!!

benji:kya??sach!!thankyou bhagwan gii..itni hot girl mujhe dhoondh rahi thi...(sings)ek din tou yeh honaa hii thaaaaaaa.....

dia:benji!!tum chalo mere saath!!!aaj hain tumhe bataati hu..

benji(scared):mummy...(and runs away, and dia runs after him and both gone)

gun:UDAY!!!!tumhe pata hai.......tum bohat acche ho!!!tumhare dimaag ki tarah naa..tumhara dil bhi bilkul saaf hai!!

uday:thanks!!

gun moves on to suhaaani

gun:suhaani...tum na.......bilkul apne bhai ki tarah bohat cute hoo.........(at which samani both smile)lekin tumhara boyfriend...

moves to varun.........

gun:ek min(and drags a chair and stands in front of him)hmm...ab main tumhare jitni ho gayi...lekin main kya bol rahi thi??🥱

uday:(happily)suhaani ka boyfriend...

gun:haan..thanku....tou suhaani tumhara boyfriend...itna arrogant..saru..akru...jo sirl self corcerned hai....(mimiKing varun)suhaani!!!tumhara bhai hamesha apne bakwas plans se meri naak mein dum kar deta hai....usne mere saath bura kiya...meri feeling ko hurt kiya...tou main bhi use hurt karounga!!!!

all laugh.............

so thats the first part and hope u like it......i know its very late par plzz understand!!!!i will wait 4 your comments and pms...

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jyotika

@-Jyotika-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

awesomeeeeeee update..
it ws fabulous.. mindblowing..
awwwwwww... gunji..!!! 😍
luved it..
pllzzzzzzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika