Originally posted by: sizzlingsis
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Originally posted by: sizzlingsis
nice ff thankssss........😳
tooo gud cont soon surely....😊add me in ur pm list surely......😊
oh so sad but dont worry take care
ya everything is fine....its just that i'm not feeling well & doctor adviced me to rest & not give exams......
hey hii..
m anu.had read ur ff a few weeks back n commented..ff is amazing n truly a gripping story...now w8ing for you to update...do add me to ur pm list...tc...hope you recover soon !
Originally posted by: fariaa70
Hi pinky,
how r u dear?
whats about ur health?
U r updting na?
so where is ur update.
Waiting 4 it.
RECAP:
Nups-inspector confrontation.Its revealed gunjan was not raped before murder.Gang plans to catch the murderer.Mayu proposes nupur on their 10th anniversary.
PART 20:
Ma: I'm sorry nupur….
Nu: kis baat ke liye?
Ma: woh….actually main tumhe sabke saamne propose karna chahta tha…main humaari 10th anniversary sabke saath manaana chahta tha….main jaanta hu tum chahti thi ki main tumhe sabke saamne propose karu par jo gunjan ke saath hua uske baad humaari anniversary manaane ko dil nahi karta….kitna galat lagega agar hum aaj ke din ka jashna manaaye aur wahaan humaare dost udaas aur tension main hai….unhe kitna bura lagega…
Someone opened the door saying "bilkul theek kahaa tumne…."
Mayur turned around to see.They were surprised it was samrat followed by the entire gang.
Ma: tum log yahaa?
Sa: bilkul theek kaha tumne….humme bahut bura lagaa…..par jaante ho bura kis baat ka lagaa??ki tum humme apna dost sirf ghum baatne ke liye maante ho…humse khushi share nahi kar sakte….
Ma: aisi baat nahi hai sam…woh….jo kuch bhi hua uske baad khushi manaane ka mann nahi karta…
Sa: tum jaante ho gunjan ko iss baat ka kitna bura lag raha hoga???woh humme kahin se dekh rahi hogi….usse lag raha hoga uski wajah se uske dost apni khushi bhi khulkar nahi manaa sakte…
Dia: humme lagaa hum khushi aur ghum dono baat-te hai….par tum toh kuch aur hi karte ho….jab mann kiya khushi baat li aur jab mann kiya ghum baat liya….
RV: tumne humme iss khushi mein shaamil na karke humme bahut dukhi kiya hai….
Sonia: tumne hi toh kahaan tha hum sab ko aage badhna hai…aur aaj jab ek mauka milla apne ghum bhulkar kuch pal ke liye khushi manaane ka toh tum woh bhi apne doston se cheen-na chahte ho?
Ma: I'm sorry guys…main tumhe hurt nahi karna chahta tha…mujhe bas lagaa gunjan ke jaane ke baad iss tarah khushiyan manaana theek nahi hoga…I'm sorry….
Sa: gunjan ke jaane ka dukh hum sab ko hai aur sabse zyaada mujhko….par main jaanta hu gunjan kabhi nahi chahegi ki uske dost uski wajah se dukhi ho…
Ma: sorry yaar…ab toh main kaan pakad ta hu….
Dia: its ok by the way happy anniversary….
Mayur: thanksss….
The entire gang wished them.They had a small party.Sam went to his room & stood in balcony looking at the stars.He had tears in his eyes.He removed gunjan's photo & looked at it.
Sam(to gunjan's photo): main jaanta hu gunjan tum mujhe dekh rahi ho….aur aaj maine jo kiya usse tumhe apne samrat par garv hoga…I hope mayank-nupur humaari tarah alag na ho…I miss you…I love you….(saying this he started crying more).
LAST DAY:
MORNING TIME:
Nupur was late today.Actually she hadn't slept properly last night.After the small party was over all the thoughts came back to her.She tried to get some proper sleep but couldn't.She was wondering what the next day had in store for her.And today since she got up in the morning & looked at the calendar wondering if it would be last day of her life or will she survive unlike other girls.She had confidence in her friends & knew they wouldn't let anything happen with her but she didn't trust her luck.'Luck' yes her lucky charm mayank was with her & till her lucky charm is there nothing can go wrong with her.Just then someone started knocking the door impatiently.Wondering who wanted to talk to her so impatiently she opened the door.Dia was standing there totally out of breath as if she had run miles.She looked fully tensed.
Nu: dia kya hua??sabkuch theek toh hai????
Dia: nupur woh…woh mayank….
Nu: kya hua mayank ko?
Dia: woh….police mayank ko le jaane aayi hai….unka kehna hai ki mayank hi serial killer hai….
Nu(shocked): KYA??
Without listening to any other word nupur started running down.She broke a flower vase on floor.Her dupatta got stuck near the stairs but she didn't wait to take it.She ran & ran.She was nearly approaching mayank.She saw police had made mayank sit in the jeep.She screamed mayank's name.Mayank looked at her.He had tears in his eyes.Nupur missed few steps & fell down on the floor.Her head began bleeding.Her foot hurt badly.She wanted to get up & run towards mayank but she couldn't.Mayank tried coming out of jeep to look at nupur but the police force didn't allow him.Their eyes met for few seconds.Nupur's eyes told him'I trust you completely' while mayank's eyes told her 'I'm not the killer….everything will be fine'.Nupur became unconscious taking mayank's name while mayank's jeep was out of view.
IN THE HOSPITAL:
Nu(was blabbering in sleep): mayank…mayank….
She opened her eyes slowly to find RV,dia & sonia around her.
Nu: mayank….mayank kahaa hai???
Dia: nupur tumhe aaraam karne ki zaroorat hai….
Nu: dia mayank ne kuch nahi kiya…mujhe usse bachaana hoga….
RV: nupur shaant ho jao…doctor ne kahaa hai tumhe aaraam ki zaroorat hai….
Nu: par mujhe mayank ke paas jaana hai…tum log toh jaante ho mayank ne kuch nahi kiya…mayank kabhi aisa kuch kar nahi sakta….tum logon ne mayank ko jaane kyu diya?
Dia: humaare haath mein kuch nahi hai….police ke paas proofs hai….unke paas court ke orders hai…hum kuch nahi kar sakte…
Nu: kaise proofs?
RV: ek toh inspector ka kehna hai ki mayank har baar uss jagah par paaya gaya hai jahaan murder hua hai….
Nu: jaanti hu uski yeh theory….par uske kehne se mayank killer nahi ban jaanta…
Inspector enters.
In: nupur iss theory ko saabit karne ke liye mere paas bahut saare proof's hai…ek toh mayank ke shoes ka number uss killer ke saath match hota hai….tumne killer ka jo description diya woh mayank se match hota hai….iske alaawa kuch aur saboot humaare haath lage hai….(removing a bracelet) iss bracelet ko toh aap pehchaanti ho????
Nupur looked at the bracelet.It was the one mayank had gifted her & bought for him as well.It had 'N' written over it.
Nu: yeh toh mayank ka hai…
In: exactly….yeh bracelet humme gunjan ke baal mein phasaa hua milla tha…aur kal raat humne chupke se Mr.Mayank ke kamre ki talaashi li aur jaanti ho humme kya milla?
Nu: kya?
In(removing something from his wallet): yeh sim card….yeh kissi Private Number ka sim card hai…
Nu: toh kya hua?ho sakta hai mayank ko fasaane ke liye kissi ne uske kamre mein rakha ho…
In: aur bracelet?
Nu: aise bracelet koi bhi khareed sakta hai….
In: aap abhi tak nahi maanti ki mayank hi killer hai…humaare paas ek aur proof hai….jo handwriting humne testing ke liye bheje the unke reports aa gaye hai…..uss killer ke handwriting mayank se match karte hai…ab iss baat ko aap kaise jhoothla sakti hai?
Nu: aap chahe jitney saboot de par mayank par se mera vishwaas kabhi kum nahi hoga….mujhe abhi bhi mayank par poora bharosa hai….mayank ko jail mein daal kar aapko lagta hai sab theek ho gaya hai par aap galat hai….aapne mere liye musibat aur badhaa di hai….aaj woh killer mujhpar hamla karega aur iss baar koi police nahi hai usse rokne ke liye…shayad mere marne ke baad aapko yakeen ho jaayega mayank killer nahi hai…
In: aapko humaara shukriya karna chahiye ki humne aapki jaan bachaa li….humne saabit kar diya humaari police kaafi efficient hai…
Nu(sarcastically): woh toh aapko aaj raat hi pata chalega….aap wahaan mayank ko killer maanlo aur yahaan aaj raat killer mujhe maar dega….agar aaj mujhe kuch hua toh yeh sirf aapki galati hogi….
Inspector went away in frustration.
Nu(getting up): mujhe mayank ke paas jaana hai…usse milna hai…
Dia: nahi nupur tumhaari haalat theek nahi hai….tumhe aaraam ki zaroorat hai….
Nu: par iss waqt mayank ko meri zaroorat hai….
RV: tum mayank se nahi mil sakti….usse milna kissi ko allowed nahi….
Nu: tum log toh jaante ho na mayank nirdosh hai????
RV: haan nupur humme poora bharosa hai…mayank aisa kuch nahi kar sakta…..
Dia: aur gunjan ke saath toh woh aisa kuch karne ki soch bhi nahi sakta….
Nu: gunjan….samrat kahaa hai??woh yahaan kyu nahi aaya??
The 3 of them exchanged tensed looks.
Nu: kya samrat ko lagta hai mayank ne gunjan ko maara?
So: aisi baat nahi hai nupur…..actually samrat bahut confused hai….
Nu: confused???Confusion kiss baat ki????samrat aisa soch bhi kaise sakta hai ki mayank kissi ko maar sakta??
Dia: samrat aaj raat ki flight se India jaa raha hai….mayank ke khilaaf jo proofs mille usse dekhne ke baad samrat ko kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai…woh nahi jaanta kya sahi hai aur kya galat….woh decide nahi kar paa raha ki mayank killer ho sakta hai ya nahi….isiliye usne decide kiya woh yeh sab chod ke aaj raat ko hamesha ke liye hum sab se dur chalaa jaayega….
Nu: woh aisa kaise soch sakta hai???humme usse rokna hoga….usse samjhaana hoga….
RV: koi faayda nahi…maine bahut koshish kii….woh kissi se koi baat nahi karna chahta…..ek taraf usse lagta hai mayank kabhi aisa kuch nahi kar sakta toh dusri taraf usse gunjan ka khyaal aata hai aur police ke diye hue proofs yaad aate hai…..woh apne dimaag aur dil ke beech itna confused hai ki usne decide kiya woh yeh sab sochna chod kar aaj raat hi India jaa raha hai….
Nu: job hi ho….usse jo samajhna ho samjhe….main mayank ko zaroor bachaogi….main usse milne zaroor jaogi…..
Dia: par tum wahaa nahi jaa sakti…kissi ko bhi mayank se milna allowed nahi hai…aur iss waqt tumhe bachaane ki zyaada zaroorat hai….ab sirf hum teen hai tumhe bachaane ke liye….raat tak hum mein se koi na koi tumhaare saath rahega….hum koi risk nahi le sakte….raat ko show mein hum sab saath rahege aur show khatam hote hi hum mayank ko bachaane ka koi tareeka dhoondhe ge…..
Nu: main iss show mein participate nahi karoogi…
RV: tum pagal ho gayi ho kya?tum jaanti ho tum kya keh rahi ho????akele rehna matlab maut ko daawat dene ke baraabar hai…
Nu: iss fashion show ne mere mayank ko itni musibat mein daala hai….main yeh show nahi karoogi…aur mayank ke bina toh hargeez nahi karoogi…uss manager ko jo karna hai woh kare…
So: par nupur tum jaanti ho hum teeno show mein hoge…tumhaare saath raat ko koi nahi hoga….woh killer tum par zaroor attack karega….
Nu: I don't care….usse jo karna tha usne kar diya….jab tak woh mujhpar attack nahi karega mayank begunaah saabit nahi hoga….mujhe mayank ke liye itna toh karna hi padhega….aur please mujhe force mat karo…main decision le chuki hu….please mujhe thodi der ke liya akela chod do…
3 of them left her alone.As soon as they went nupur started crying.She kissed her bracelet.
Nu(crying): mayank tum fikar mat karo….agar mere marne se tum innocent prove hote ho toh main haste-haste mar jaogi….aur mujhe humaare pyaar par pura vishwaas hai….agar humaara pyaar sachaa hai toh mujhe kuch nahi hoga….
OUTSIDE THE ROOM:
Dia: ab kya kare??nupur kuch samajhne ko tayyaar hi nahi hai…
So: agar kissi tarah mayank yahaan aa jaaye usse bachaane?
RV: par yeh kaise hoga?mayank se milna bhi allowed nahi hai…toh hum usse baahar kaise laayenge?
So: main mayank se mil sakti hu….
Dia: tum?
So: haan actually mere dad ke bahut contacts hai…..woh commissioner ko bhi jaante hai….mujhe mayank se ek baar milne ki permission toh aasaani se dilla sakte hai….
RV: great toh tum jaakar mayank ko saari situation samjhao….ab woh hi kuch kar sakta hai…
IN THE PRISON:
Sonia easily got the permission to meet mayank.Mayank was expecting nupur but was slightly depressed on seeing sonia.
Ma: nupur kaisi hai???kya usse mujhpar bharosa hai???maine kuch nahi kiya…..woh mujhse milne kyu nahi aa rahi?
So: don't worry nupur ek dum theek hai….woh actually yahaan aane ki permission kissi ko nahi hai….main yahaan apne dad ke wajah se aa paayi ho….mayank mujhe tumse bahut zaroori baat karni hai….
Ma: kya?
So: hum jaante hai tum killer nahi ho…par tumhe nirdosh saabit karne ke liye nupur ek paagalpan kar rahi hai….woh apni jaan khatre mein daal rahi hai taaki sabko pataa chal jaaye ki woh killer koi aur hai….
Ma: woh pagal ho gayi hai kya???usse samjhao aisi bewakoofi na kare…usse kuch ho gaya toh main waise bhi jee nahi paoga….
So: humne usse samjhaane ki bahut koshish ki….par woh samajh hi nahi rahi…..woh raat ko fashion show ke dauraan bilkul akeli hogi….i'm sure woh killer uss waqt nupur par attack karega…ab sirf tum nupur ko bachaa sakte ho…
Ma: par main toh yahaan hu…main kaise nupur ko bachaa paoga?
So: tumhe yahaan se nikalna hoga mayank….tumhe iss jail se kuch pal ke liye bhaagna hoga….
Ma: par maine kuch nahi kiya toh yahaan se bhaag kaise sakta hu?inhe yakeen ho jaayega ki main hi serial killer hu isliye main yahaan se bhaag gaya….
So: iss waqt nupur ko bachaana zyaada zaroori hai aur woh sirf tum hi kar sakte ho….police bhi usse koi protection nahi degi kyunki unhe lagta hai unhone serial killer pakad liya hai…..ab tum decide karo tumhaare liye nupur ki jaan zyaada zaroori hai ya khud ki begunaahi…
Ma: tum theek keh rahi ho…agar nupur mere liye apni jaan khatre mein daal sakti hai toh usse bachaane ke liye main itna toh kar sakta hu….par main yahaan se niklooga kaise?
So: uska plan maine soch liya hai…yahaan ki police khaane ka bahut shauk rakhti hai….ek inspector mera dost hai…woh mere kehne par raat ko sabko aisa khaana khilaayega ki khaate hi sab kuch ghanto ke liye so jaayege….tab woh tumhe yahaan se baahar nikaal dega….aur tum nupur ko bachaane seedhe hotel pahunch jaana….
NIGHT TIME:
The show was about to begun.Backstage there was lot of commotion as the models were getting ready.Front stage also audience was totally excited.Press was eagerly waiting to start the shoot.Last minute changes were made.Since Mayank-Nupur were not doing the show RV-Dia were made the show-stopper.RV,Dia & sonia were more worried for nupur than for the show.Sonia told them how she had planned to help mayank run from the prison & save nupur.They were all now counting on mayank.Mayank could be here anytime to save nupur.Upstairs samrat was packing his bags.He didn't know what he was doing was right or wrong but still he decided to carry on with his plan of going away from here.In other room nupur was sitting all alone.Yes she was scared.She knew now anytime anything could happen.She was unaware of the fact that mayank has broken the prison to save her.She sat there holding the bottle of poison.She had decided if the killer attacks her she would die drinking the poison rather than being his victim.Just then she heard some noise.Some one was trying to open the door.With a BANG!!!!someone opened the door.Nupur stood there shocked & then relief spread over her as she saw mayank standing there.She quickly hugged mayank.
Nu: thank god mayank tum aa gaye…main jaanti thi tum mujhe kuch nahi hone doge….
But something strange happened.When mayank hugged her back she didn't feel the protection she always felt.She broke from the hug.He was smiling at her but the smile was not the charming one.It was cunning & evil.She looked in his eyes & saw no love.There was only lust.Something was wrong.
Ma: mujhe toh aana hi tha nupur….afterall maine tumse promise jo kiya tha….aaj 30 days khatam hue…aaj main tumhaare saamne khadaa hu…tumhaara SERIAL KILLER….
Nupur stood there shell shocked.Everything around her was moving.His words were ringing in her ears.No this can't be true.But this wasn't a joke.There was no kidding.She could read his eyes.He was telling the truth.It was him.Mayank is the serial killer.She couldn't digest this fact.
Okay finally done.I guess this is long enough.
Now coming to the part I'll just say 2 words 'JUST CHILL'…I know many here are ready with their chappals to beat me up but please wait for the next part….Wait till you know what are the circumstances & what is the entire truth….😉
Still if you want to beat me than first catch me coz I'm running away…😆
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