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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Dpkavasudeva
hey i love your writing style

plz give us more
more
more stuff....
i m carving read your written stuff
plz do write more

Thanks a ton!

I will do. You can read my FFs you want:

Links:

Days To Remember (MayUr FF) Part 12: Pg 92 [3/27]

Yaadein-Memories Forever [MN FF] #2 PROMO: PG 49

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#152

Originally posted by: charming.angel
loved it... not only bcz of ur way of writng ....... bt smthng else
its like it had deep emotions n thy were soo very true........ depicted d real emotions
at least of nupur (grls POV)....

awesome !!

Thank you so much Dear!

Well I agree it was kind of real!

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#153

Hey guys!

I am back with another OS but I know none of you going to like it as it's too real!

Reality is bitter and my OS will prove that too 😳

I don't know what your reaction going to be like but I guess I am ready for it!

Sometimes it's important to show the reality to everyone and that's what I am doing.

Sincerely hope that you like this!

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"Neha, listen to me, please!" A lady in mid 35 said to her 16 years old daughter, who was sitting across on the sofa. "No mum, you listen to me. How long are you going to suffer like this, on your own?" Neha snapped back, rather rudely to her mother. Her mother, Nupur Bhushan.

Nupur lived in London, with her daughter Neha since last 17 years. She gave birth to Nupur when she was only 18 years old. A little mistake of her costs her with punishment of loneliness for a lifetime. A guy, whom she loved more than her life, left her when she needed him the most. Mayank Sharma – a boy in her college. They both loved each other in the college days. Nupur was modern girl but believed in love strongly. When Mayank purposed her she was over the moon. She surrendered herself completely to him with a trust that he will stand by her no matter what happens. But obviously, when he got to know about Nupur's pregnancy he was freaked out. He didn't know what to do. They both were only 18 years old and Nupur's pregnancy was too much to digest with the studies.

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"Mayank, let's get married!" Nupur said in a happy tone after getting to know about her pregnancy. She was scared at first but thinking of Mayank made her feel secure and safe. She knew that Mayank will stand by her and will support her throughout.

"What? Are you out of your mind?" Mayank said angrily. He meant to be getting angry. It was the age for them to study and have fun. Marriage was nowhere near next 10 years.

"Mayank we have to because…."

"Because…."

"I am pregnant" Nupur said. She thought Mayank would be more than happy to know about her pregnancy.

"What?" Mayank literally shouted over the phone.

"Yes, it's our baby, our baby!!" The happiness was flowing from her eyes in the form of tears.

"Nupur what are you saying? That can't be my baby." Mayank said immediately after Nupur's reply. He just couldn't believe what he heard.

"What do you mean Mayank? How could you say that?" Nupur cried in pain.

"Listen Nupur! I don't know who's baby is it? So I guess it's better that we split." Nupur was shocked at his reply. Before Mayank could continue with his allegations Nupur passed out.

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That was the last time Nupur had ever talked to Mayan After that conversation, Nupur ran away from the house because she knew if she stayed there she will be compelled to abort the child. And how could she abort an innocent life? That was the only symbol of their love, their story.

She came to London where she knew no one except her friend Shalini who helped her throughout the journey of her struggle.

Now she was a successful fashion Designer and owns her own company named The Neha.. She was happy about her decision of giving birth to her daughter. She was a proud single mother. Her daughter was strong and independent but at the same time carried the values and teaching of her mother.

"Neha, you are too young to think about all these. I am happy the way I am and more happy because I have you in my life. I am not lonely." Nupur replied to her 16 year, who was speaking about Nupur getting married or dating someone. It was weird and strange but that was reality. And reality is always bitter. It is always wise to accept it and move on in life.

"Mum, I never asked you anything about my dad, but today I want to know who my father is?" Neha asked something which Nupur was trying forget since past 17 years. She was trying to forget Mayank and her love but forgetting isn't easy as saying.

"Neha, you promised that you are not going to ask this to me. Ever!" Nupur replied getting up from the seat and walking towards her room.

"Mum please. I want to know the person's name, for whom you cry every night. The person who is responsible for your pains and sorrows. The person who you love more than your life. Pleaseeeeee mum." Neha cried.

"Neha, NO!" Nupur literally shouted out.

"Ok then, just say that you don't love him and I'll shut up." Neha laid a bet, looking straight into her eyes. Nupur was shocked at the way the teenage was behaving these days. I don't love him, I don't love him, I don't love him, She kept chanting in her mind. She knew she loved him and will always do but it was important to put some sense into her daughter's brain.

"I don't love him, OK?" Nupur said, strictly avoiding Neha's gaze on her. She could never lie to her. Neha knew her too well.

"Good because that bas**** does not deserve to be loved by you." Neha snapped at Nupur purposely and used a word which she would not use, not even in her wildest dream. Nupur was stunned to hear her daughter swear and that to Mayank. Neha was looking at her, but soon her gaze fell down as she received a tight slap from Nupur.

"How dare you swear, Neha? How dare you swear at him?" Nupur burst out something she was trying hide from years. Neha didn't feel hurt at all because she was right. Nupur still loved him and can't hear anything against him.

"Thank you Mum. Thank you!" Neha replied hugging her mother tightly. Nupur regretted her action and hugged her back saying sorry. "I am sorry sweet heart!"

"Mum, you still love him. You can't deny the fact." Neha said, breaking the hug. Nupur felt she was right, she couldn't deny the fact that she loves Mayank and will always do.

"His name was Mayank." Nupur said with a smile and a blush crept on her cheek as she took his name after years.

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"Hi, how are you? Oh I had a great day really though didn't do much. How's life treating you then? Not really, she is keeping fine but you know, just like her mother she worries a lot." Nupur was talking to someone wasn't present in that room. Someone who left her long back and didn't bother to return or contact her. But Nupur's love was strong. Her love for Mayank didn't vanish within few years but it grown stronger and stronger each second. She knew he didn't worth the love but she couldn't help herself.

Yet again today, she was talking to his picture. Old habits die hard. Nupur was used to now, with the habit of talking to Mayank's picture... sorry picture. She only had one picture of him.

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It has another part which I'll post only you want me to!

I am ready for any kind of comment 😃

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Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago

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Shamsa aka Sam

@Shamsaaa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

am damn sorry for not editin this but urghh just read it nowww lovee loveeee loveeed ittt to core! how dare Mayankk to be rude towards Nupur like this!😡

wannaa next part of it!😃😳

Edited by -Arjunlicious- - 14 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#155

hey! yeh to wahi waala hai na jo maine padha tha?

u gave me half! 😔

but now i can read it! 😃

awesome oneshot jaan......

ab iska next part tu kab update karegi?

i wanna know where it went wrong......

i wanna know why he said that......

loved it till now.......

do continue soon zoah!

and its bitter, but its truth.......u can't stop loving a person whom you loved a lot more than yourself.....even if that person did something bad.....or cheated u even!

and jaan, maine kal hi woh poem likh li thi......its ready.....but i am being lazy enough to type it on pc also especially now when my pc got formatted and everything of mine got lost! ❓ [i really dont know what to feel].....but ya, that poem is two pages long!!!!!!! i wud type that up in the morning.....

love ya,
Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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315925

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

OMG Zoah...sadist eh? 😆

But awesome story!! So beautiful!!!

I felt Nupur's feelings very much!

Please do continue soon!!

And PLEASE get them together!

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#157

its a real nice OS Zoah :)
loved Nupur and neha here (y neha though 🤣 )

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#158

nice os dear..poor nupur yaar...

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#159

Awesome shot zoah
i feel really bad for nups
but she is a strong girl
the way she took the decision to birth her child was awesome
hats off to her
i loved nups too much
but i hate maynk like anything
now me waiting for ur next part.
try to post next part soon
take care