DECEPTION (KYPH)...Pt 17/pg86, May28 - Page 4

yay! another blockbuster from my fav AK writer can't wait for the updates di, and I'm so glad you stuck to AK instead of doing a multi-starrer. not that it would have been any less brilliant but I maintain that no one quite does AK like you. you OWN them! do pm me if possible when you update next

Originally posted by: aarora

hey..this is the first time um commenting for FF other than that of ARs..i only read AR FF or say used to..but read
Bhalobasha/ Love n Ami Je Tomar n loved them really AMAZING..have no words..now this new FF..will love to read..nice intro..continue soon..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

Thanks aarora and ur welcome! Imglad u loved Bhalobasha and AJT! Keep reading and commenting! 😃 Ive included AR in my other FF Chori Chori.

Originally posted by: sonakap1

Hey Pallavi,

Great to see you have started a new story. Have just finished reading Ami Je Tomar and Simply loved it. Will be starting on your all others very soon.

Hugs

Sona

Thanks Sona!
Keep reading this story and my old ones! 😳

Originally posted by: bhavana2692

thanx 4 the PM!<br>wow!fabulous beginning........the title of this ff is interesting[reminds of a Dan Brown novel, 'deception point'].....continue soon di.....<br>

Thanks bhavana! I guess the title is very common in fiction....but this plot is totally original, suggested by Shelina. 😃

QUOTE=ammy_furor] Di...a gripping concept as usual...dilip seems a good character here....*rollin eyes*[his hangover from AJT is still fresh in my mind..lets c kab tak]....already made me hooked as i love suspense..! Count me in di.... And yea can u put an index in da 1st cc of godfather.... Pls...

Thanks Dear!
dilip is good guy here...😆 I love suspense too.
Index for Godfather is there in beginning of Part 2. But if u want I can copy paste it in part 1 also provided Part 1 hasnt been locked yet.

Originally posted by: spvd

wow the starting scene was nice...........suspense................wonder who the person was.............and the scene description was so well described................and the char intro is also very nice................dilip looks like a good person here..................cont soon di..................cant wait to read more.................and thanks for the pm................<br>

Thanks Deepa and ur welcome! This whole story is based on mystery and suspense. Kind of edge of the seat I hope. 😃

Originally posted by: teri_susan

Thanks for the PM😊.All the best for ur new fanfiction👍🏼Nice introduction of the characters😊.Deception was top in my list.I liked the concept much😃.The introduction of the story is starting with a accident😉,well who is the one,that got into the accident? Does the sharmas and Khannas are connected to each in anyway?😃Hope Dadi's wish is fulfilled😉.

Thanks susan and ur welcome!
Dadi's wish fulfilled? Only time will tell....Sharmas and Khannas only connected thru their kids getting married.

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey awesome concept <br>loved it a lot'<br><br>i am reallly a big ak fan<br>thanks for pm <br>waiting for next update soon<br>

Thanks sanju and ur welcome! Im glad to see so many AK fans, their fan club lives on! Im still crazy abt them! 😳

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Hey Pallavi.. Another AK FF !! Wow ! Sounds promising and am so glad Angads mommy is not alive to do something evil. Am waiting to see what the deception and the accident is all about and of course waiting for AK to meet and the sparks to fly !

Thanks bhuvana!
Angad's mommy is dead and she was very nice too. Lets find out who is the deceiver and who the deceived. AK have already met, theyre getting married. 😳

Originally posted by: QueenHinna12

this sounds awesome:D when will u start it???<br>hmmm so kripa is a laadli and the only child, i cant wait to see what her reaction would be after she gets deceived by angad!<br>and Thank God mishti is already married...hehe<br>but noooo prithvi....he better stay away from AK:@<br>

Thanks Hinnu! 😃
Mishti is married but shes still catty in this one. 😆 Prithvi is a stalker as usual. 😉

Originally posted by: kripa12345

Wow Di,

Great start 😛

but i wonder who got into the accident i hope its not Angad or Kripa 😕

anyway r u going to post Indicent proposal aswell? hope to read it soon

and thankyou for the pm

Thanks dear and ur welcome!
I will post Indecent Proposal preview on Monday night.

Originally posted by: janu1610

<P align="center"><FONT color="#3366cc"><FONT size="5"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Pallavi another ff on AK.</FONT></FONT></FONT>👏<FONT color="#3366cc"><FONT size="5"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Introduction is nice .</FONT></FONT></FONT></P><P align="center"><FONT color="#3366cc"><FONT size="5"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Angad</FONT></FONT></FONT><FONT color="#3366cc"><FONT size="5"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">'s mother is no more alive so no evil spirit is there to harm her.😉</FONT></FONT></FONT></P><P align="center"><FONT color="#3366cc">[EM]<FONT size="5"><FONT face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">well i know one leading member is there but itna to manage karna padega...

Thanks Ritu!
Yes, Im starting 2 new AK ffs, updates wont be that regular but I didnt want to delay them anymore.
😆 Yes, its a relief Angad's mom isnt there to mess things up. 😃

Originally posted by: ria92

wow dii sounds really interestin nd mysterious,

i wonder wt the accident has to do with this story, i guess we'll find out in time!

do cont soon

ritika

Thanks ritika!
We will soon find out what is what...its a mystery suspense thriller.

Originally posted by: Live.Laugh.Love

Hey Pallavi,

Another AK ff, I am sure it will be amazing just like the rest of them.

Update soon, I will be waiting for it 😊

Thanks Dear! Keep reading! And plz do comment if u can. 😃

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey di..nice intro..

Whatever happened in the beginning was sad...i wonder who was in the car..n who was watching...but was someone the reason behind all that?

the character sketch seems intresting..will Kripa get married bcuz of her daadi?..i hope so..n NOT to Prithvi!

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-aish

Thanks aish!
Kripa loves Angad but theyre getting married in a hurry becuz of Dadi. No not to Prithvi for sure. 😉

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

great preview di

opening scene has already left me in suspence..

i think most of the characters seem nice

waitin for u to start

Thanks megha! 😳
Like the poem said har chehrey ke peechhey ek aur chehra chhupa rehta hai....u never can tell.

Originally posted by: karipa

interesting

Thanks! Do keep reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: annu127

hello pallavi!😊<br><br>

In the intro every character seems to be simple and focused... but
ofcoarse, most of them are double faced.

darshan
family would deceive angad, as angad
would do to kripa, what would be their reactions… we have to look for.

I hope, prithvi would get a little promotion, aur wo kabaab mein
huddi banney ke alawaa bhi kuchh aur karta dikhaai de. it
seems, kartik is going to play an important negative role
here. loved him in KYPH😳

opening scene looked quite interesting, U penned it down brilliantly
…
It
could be kartik

<br>

Thanks annu!
Im glad u liked the intro! And ur right, everyone is not as they seem.
Prithvi may be grey character too. 😉 Kartik was really good at being bad in KYPH wasnt he? 😆

Originally posted by: ShelDev

Hey Pallavi:

Wow what a great start to this.......I was so waiting for you to start this FF......As usual you have me gripped already...
Thank you once again for writing this special FF........i can't wait for you to continue......Characters are so well defined. The starting scene was penned down fabulously,,,,,Awesome....Please continue soon.

thanks

Thanks Shel!
I knew u would be awaiting this FF. It was ur idea and a brilliant one at that, hope I can do justice to it! 😃

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Wowowoowo Another From Pallavi Thank You so much for pm Pallavi now i am back and going to read all your FF . awesome preview , waiting for 1st part . Take your time Dear.<br>

Thanks monu! 😃 and ur welcome!

Originally posted by: AKForever

Hey Pallavi great preview... continue soon <br><br>thanks for the pm..<br>

Thanks AKForever! I will continue soon.

pallavi

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

wow di good treat 2 all AK fans 😊
start with an accident 😔
nice character intro
cant wait 4 d story 2 start
cont soon

Thanks Dear! Im glad u liked the intro, keep on reading. I promise lots of dhamaka and suspense!

Originally posted by: ashwini_k

nice intro, pl let me know when u update 1st part<br>

Thanks ashwini! 😃 I think ur already in my pm list, if not I will add u.

Originally posted by: akrock

m glad u started wid new AK ff...der r hardly any AK ff's on dis forum now :(

start with an accident :(

bt who was involved i wonder....

liked d char intro...

cont soon

Thanks akrock!
Yes, many AK fans have moved on to new fav jodis but Im stuck on these 2... 😳
Cant let them go 😆
Im doing 3 AK FFs at the same time, will start Indecent Proposal soon. 😆

Originally posted by: love_ks

waiting to read part 1i am sure it is gonna be as good as others

Thanks ks! Thanks for ur confidence in me! I will strive to live up to it! 😳

Originally posted by: vallanki

Nice start.

Eager to know hoe AK meet. Dadi lives for 2 more months, so not much role of hers.

Only Prithvi is available to compete with Angad!! Less twists...lol

Who were involved in the accident? Is it just accident or planned??

Long waiting!!

Thanks vallu!
Dadi is the reason theyre rushing the marriage. They have met only 12 times in 6 months... 😉
Wait for the twists, they will be mindboggling.... 😆 U will find out soon.... 😉

Originally posted by: angadkripa_fan

i like it please pm me when you update please😭<br>

Thank u Dear! I did pm u but ur pm box was full, plz empty it! 😊 Ur already in my pm/buddy list.

Originally posted by: Angadzgirl

Awww di i liked the concept so much....👏

n beautiful introduction of the characters😊😛

nwaiting for 1st part....di continue soon...

Thanks Sweta!
Im glad u liked it! Will post once every week.

pallavi