DECEPTION (KYPH)...Pt 17/pg86, May28

MeethiMirchii

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

this sounds awesome:D when will u start it???
hmmm so kripa is a laadli and the only child, i cant wait to see what her reaction would be after she gets deceived by angad!
and Thank God mishti is already married...hehe
but noooo prithvi....he better stay away from AK:@

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kripa12345

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Wow Di,

Great start 😛

but i wonder who got into the accident i hope its not Angad or Kripa 😕

anyway r u going to post Indicent proposal aswell? hope to read it soon

and thankyou for the pm

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ria92

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

wow dii sounds really interestin nd mysterious,

i wonder wt the accident has to do with this story, i guess we'll find out in time!

do cont soon

ritika

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SK

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hey Pallavi,

Another AK ff, I am sure it will be amazing just like the rest of them.

Update soon, I will be waiting for it 😊

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

hey di..nice intro..

Whatever happened in the beginning was sad...i wonder who was in the car..n who was watching...but was someone the reason behind all that?

the character sketch seems intresting..will Kripa get married bcuz of her daadi?..i hope so..n NOT to Prithvi!

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-aish

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megha sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

great preview di

opening scene has already left me in suspence..

i think most of the characters seem nice

waitin for u to start

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Anila

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

hello pallavi!😊

In the intro every character seems to be simple and focused... but ofcoarse, most of them are double faced.

darshan family would deceive angad, as angad would do to kripa, what would be their reactions… we have to look for.

I hope, prithvi would get a little promotion, aur wo kabaab mein huddi banney ke alawaa bhi kuchh aur karta dikhaai de. it seems, kartik is going to play an important negative role here. loved him in KYPH😳

opening scene looked quite interesting, U penned it down brilliantly … It could be kartik

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Shelina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Hey Pallavi:

Wow what a great start to this.......I was so waiting for you to start this FF......As usual you have me gripped already...
Thank you once again for writing this special FF........i can't wait for you to continue......Characters are so well defined. The starting scene was penned down fabulously,,,,,Awesome....Please continue soon.

thanks

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monika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Wowowoowo Another From Pallavi Thank You so much for pm Pallavi now i am back and going to read all your FF . awesome preview , waiting for 1st part . Take your time Dear.

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