SaJan SS: Different But The Same Epilogue :Pg76 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: gina87

wow!!...girl that was some update!!..👏👏..this scene has a heck of a punch!!.😉...great job!..god why cant the creatives come up with this stuff???...or the least they can do is read it and copy it.....the only thing that has kept me from going insane after watching today's mjht is your ss...so thanx hon!



gina gal that is simply darling of u to say that 🤗🤗

heck i wont mind if d creatives use word by word of my scene yaar too i gladly give away d copyright to 'em 4 free too 😆😆

if that's the way at least they let us have some SG romance yaar

i know last night's MJHT kinda made my heart sink 4 MaYur 😭😭 & esp with seeeing adha-raj in d beginning i was mad 😡😡

aur kitna wait CV" we r losing patience here 😡😡😡
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVEBARBIE

thanks yaar i am wating for it thanks yaar



thx hon 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyashika

Oh god pls i mean ppl say to me n dolly that both of u stop at turning points but aahana aaj u have broken all our records...oh god how can u?????i mean yaar meri heartbeats uper neeche ho rahi hain...n u !!!!
how can u stop at this moment????pls continue otherwise i will die out of excitement n what a passionate yet so eternally touching update.U rock aahana...but dont think i am any less angry...i still cant beleive u stopped like at sajan's kiss...urghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!



so sorry Malli Jaan 😳

yaar bahar jaana tha mujhe as i said

well aage i hope i dont disappoint u 😳

par phir bhi thx 4 ur compliments jaan 🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sajan4Ever

That was AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! add me to the pm list please!



sure hon will PM ya thx 4 joinin 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vital123

Waiting patiently for ur next update aahana. I think CV's shud read ur story n get some inspiration.

Rabia.



Thx Rabia 😃 thats really generous of u 2 say that 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dreamer2305

Awww! Cho chweet!! U write great Aahana! I luvd it! But now I'm so sad! Why'd u stop it there??? Want to read more!! Plz plz plz plz update soon!!! And thx for the PM!!



thx darlin 🤗🤗

u r welcome 4 d PM hon & thx 4 ur comments here as well as in d PM 2
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kajol95

oh wow..........really great part please continue soon.........and pm me when u do so...........thanks for the pm for this part.........


i really felt it in my heart the words samrat said!



thx Kajol glad u liked d part & found d words so real 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

awesome



thanx 4 the pm




update soon


KAmal




thx Kamal 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

heyy i really love your part 5 and 6 plzz contuied soon



thx Shafoo 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

They were about to have that kiss just when the phone rang & SG jumped outta their skin thus ending d moment

S: damn it... 4 d love of god... mere saath hi aisa kyun hota hai???

G couldn't help but laugh while S glared at her & went to pick up the phone

S: hello (sort of yelled)'. Nahi wrong number & he slammed d phone hard....idiot abhi hi call karna tha isse dekh kar dial nahi kar sakta tha

S: tum hasna band karo Chashmish..... mujhe lagta hai kissi ne 1 kiss ke liye itna wait nahi kiya hoga aur yaha 1 mahina hone wala hai main jab bhi tumhe kiss karne wala hota hu kuch hota hai ..... kabhi koi aa jaata hai, kabhi koi bulata hai kabhi ye stupid phone bajta hai ya tum mujhe aankh marke niche gira deti ho

Now G had a fit of laughter with Samrat' last words while Suhaani came to see what happened

S: tum hasna band karo Chashmish

Su: bhai kya hua itna gussa kispe kar rahe ho?

G: kuch nahi Suhaani

Su: toh phir kya problem hai?

S: kuch nahi ho raha yehi toh problem hai & later S realized what he blurted out while G looked at him like what are u saying

To cover Samrat' goof up she said woh Samrat se yah kuch nahi ho raha aur cook gayi isliye woh thoda gussa hai she kinda smiled as she said that & S was a bit annoyed & embarrassed at it

Su: koi baat nahi bhai tum baitho hum dekh lete hai kya hua gunjan tum has kyun rahi ho

G in a naughty way: kuch bhi toh nahi hua....Suhaani & she reigned herself in while suhaani was confused

S was now really angry at her having teased him this time & he left

A few minutes later dinner was served as all started enjoying it while Samrat was still a bit miffed with his Chashmish so he sat beside Mayank while GunUr sat across the table as the rest sat around too.

G continued to smile in between at Samrat which was not good at all, it got him angrier but she enjoyed it as it made him look like a cute li'l kid who was refused his fav candy.

While this was on Samrat suddenly felt something...

Someone was tickling him... But from beneath the table, he felt a leg slide under his pair of jeans going a bit up.

4 a sec he was jolted but them looked at G who smiled at him mischievously again, now angry as he was he still felt good that gunjan was trying to flirt here thou he was a bit smug & again started eating.

Now again it happened so he was like ok 2 can play at that & with his other leg he started his own moves too responding back, this li'l game of footsie went 4 a while now Mayank Nupur too had their moments of stolen looks & smiles.

After 5 minutes MaJan were done while SaNu too had almost finished, so MaJan got up to wash their hands shocking SaNu as both saw MaJan leaving while feeling someone's foot on their own & to their utter horror, shock & embarrassment they now knew who their footsie partner was & Nupur kinda yelled: nahi a bit loudly while both took their feet away from 1 another.

MaJan came running while all others too were shocked everyone asked Nupur what happened except Samrat who looked like if someone just dug a hole here he would gladly jump in it.

Nupur too was feeling awkward about this weird game she thought she was playing with Mayank all the while & looked at Samrat while 4 an instant their eyes met & they both saw how embarrassed they felt & looked away.

To calm everyone down N just said: nahi woh main shahrukh ke marne ka scene yaad kar rahi thi aur bas bolne wali thi mat maro mere shahrukh ko, after which Mayank kinda got annoyed & Gunjan was a bit amused & confused this the scene went to normal again 4 others while SaNu kept quiet 4 d evening keeping a distance as they still felt weird.



Note : Ok Guys pls pls dont be mad at me after u read this part 😳

i know we r dying for that SG kiss that's like long overdue but i have a even more spl scene in my mind that will allow us to witness SaJan's first kiss

so YES there is a kiss but it'll be a bit later so pls pls stay with me until then 😳😳

i know this was a tense point but i wanted SaJan' first kiss to be something more than just a spur of the moment thing hence the delay

pls be with me till then this SS will be over in a few more parts as i cant write beyond my conceived idea at this point till then pls be on this journey with me 😳😊

Edited by aahana86 - 15 years ago

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