SaJan SS: Different But The Same Epilogue :Pg76 - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sarahh-

Awesome update yet again Aahana!😃

the dialogues you write suit the characters soo much!😃
great job!👏
aww my... SG cookin scene coming up=D
plz do continue soon !



that's so nice of u Sarah 😃
i was a li'l worried abt d lines so thx a ton 4 these sweet words 😳


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lucario

loved the nupsi and suhani scene.........really shahrukh pe mar mite hai dono......liked how sayank behaved due to this............thy seriously got irritated specially mayank...but loved it...........and most fav scene...........SRK ka autograph.......nupur's reaction was awesome...........liked SG in the end.........continue soon



😆😆

well SRK madness is a phenomenon
my bro too gets annoyed like SaYank so i knew how that works😆😆😆
thx again avi 4 ur kind words 😳😃

Edited by aahana86 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lucario


ya di..........me too want old masti....original charm of mjht........which got faded due to this adhani track



tell me abt it ven my bro who isnt a regular was with me d other day & he asked hey u quit ur fav show as he too was surprised at an almost eentire episode of adhaani

i kinda let my steam off on him saying get lost like these 2 stop annoying me 😆😆
😆😆
Edited by aahana86 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 6:

In the kitchen Samrat as gunjan asked him to got busy with preparing the bowls & plates along with other cutlery, here gunjan too was taking care of the veggies as they were being done on the gas.

S was looking at her all the while as he doing his work as how she was working as ever plus he remembered their talk also seeing how she took over when it came to letting the cook leave he was pleased & smiled to himself.

Gunjan always knew what to do but what was more vital that she was always there for him he wondered how had he managed without her for so long & what would have become of him had she left due to Dia' plans or by his bet or when she went to Morena & hadn't returned in his life, to him, for him.

Thinking this he dropped the plates he was taking out of the shelf, gunjan went to help him

G: Samrat tum thik ho na?

S: ha Chashmish I m fine woh bhul se plates gir gayi

G: koi baat nahi hota hai & she smiled at him

She was busy assembling the plates when their hands touched while they went on to pick the same plate & SG had a li'l eye-lock, for a few moments they froze in time but then g looked away & smiled getting up o check the food on the gas & s too smiled & placed the plates beside her on the counter.

S: thx Chashmish

G: isme thx ki kya baat hai Samrat plates hi toh uthayi hai

S: plate's ke liye nahi Chashmish

G: toh khane ke liye Samrat sach thx ki koi baat nahi tum bhi na

S took her hand as she was mixing the veg & held it looked her in the eyes & said: thx 4 being thr 4 me thx 4 being mine Chashmish

The way he said that gunjan was just lost in his eyes & smiled shyly, S went on

S: mujhe bahut achha laga Chashmish aaj jaise tumne itne haq se cook se kaha jaane ko aur yaha aa gayi,

G: isme kya tha Samrat emergency thi toh

S: ha pata hai par .... He entangled their fingers just like he did on their first date & went closer to her

She was abt to speak but then he looked at her again in a way that made her quiet

S: mujhe achha laga Chashmish ki tum ab is ghar par bhi apna haq samajti ho aur isliye mere kehne se pehle tumne meri baat cook se keh di

She flushed at this g never looked at it this way but it was true, in her heart this was now her home too as it belonged to Samrat who in turn belonged to her as she did to him.

Slowly he went even closer to her allowing li'l space between their faces & placed her hand on his heart she got even more shy at this

she slowly whispered his name while she stammered s...s.....Samrat

S: shhh..... he placed a finger over her lip to quiet her down.

In hushed whispers now engrossed in her he went on lost in the depths of those deep brown eyes

S: aur isse bhi zyada pata hai mujhe kya achha laga?

She gulped but spoke in hushed whispers too: kya?

S: tumhare mere room ko apna samjna, usse hamara room kehna

Gtried to look down but he held her chin & made her look up again to face him, slowly he traced small circles on her cheek with his thumb moving his hand ahead a bit as he cupped her face while her other hand was still near his heart feeling it beat wildly while he was so close to her face now that they felt their breaths on each other.

S: main tumhe samjha bhi nahi sakta Chashmish ki main abhi kya feel kar raha hoon, aaj se pehle koi mere itne close nahi tha aur na kabhi hoga aaj jab tumne hamare room kaha toh maine pehli baar tumhe apne saamne hote hue bhi tumhe miss kiya

She was puzzled

S: Chashmish 5 saal se akela rehkar main bhool hi gaya tha ki koi saath rahe toh kaisa lagta hai ab Suhaani yaha toh hai par..... phir bhi jab tum yaha aaogi toh I'll feel ki ab mera ghar complete ho gaya hai

She just looked at him, those words made her heart race even more wildly as he continued to tightly hold her hand beside his heart too while now his hand that caressed her cheek now got to her chin

S: I cant wait to share my life with u Chashmish, main har pal bus wait kar raha hoon ki main tumhare saath kab apni life, apna ghar, apna bedroom, apna saare days & slowly his thumb moved up to touch her lips apni saari nights share kar saku

he was whispering so softly now yet it was as if gunjan was caught in a violent storm of passion & desire that she felt growing with his each word, his each look & touch that he was engulfed in too.

He leaned in closer to her lips to have that most awaited kiss as she too lost in the moment closed her eyes, melting in the heat of the moment....... When suddenly .....

To be continued

Edited by aahana86 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update.... totally awesomeeee.... fabulous..!!!
luved d sajan moments... it was awesome...
luved it....
thnxxx for d pm... n pllzzzzzzzzz continue soon... hw can u stop at dis point were sajan r gonna kiss...?
pllzzzzzzz jaldi continue karo warna mai pakka wait karte karte mar jaungi..!!

love
jyotika
Edited by sajanroxx20 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
haay meri aahana jaanu!!!! kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa maza aaya mujhe dono part4 & 5 padke. OMG!!! It was tooo hilarious & Mayur Sajan teasing each other was way toooooo good. 'Ab tum dono bhi bilkul ek jaise hi lag rahe ho humme badi badi aankhen dikhate hue'. 🤣

& OSO part was also very very funny.

thanku sooooooooooo much for pming dear.
It was awsome.
Short Stroy long story mein convert ho rahi hain dheere dheere.

loads of love
vinu

haaila part 6 bhi aa gaya. ab jaldi padna padega
Edited by mjht_admirer - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey nice ud dear...........but didn't liked it................itna chota aur fir suspense mein hi khatam kar di, not gud

newas thnx 4 d pm. continue n pm me
Edited by cute_monaya_fan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
really nice work aahana. Keep it up.
Rabia.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow The update had lot of passion.Please update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
uaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 😭 When suddenly what?????? plz no interruption jaanu.....

i m like 😳

&

😍

& for u jaanu this

🤗

loads of love
vinu

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