QUE SERA SERA II Part 47 posted on pg149 (14/5/10) - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ssh57

Sorry unable to post Family emergency.
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Hey Shardha ... I hope some good news ... do share with us whenever u have time on hand.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 10

After giving the matter some thought she agreed.

R: OK. Chalti hoon. Lekin main paani mein nahi jaoongi. Aap logon ko zara wait karna padega. Main tayyar hoke aati hoon.

AK: Mama aap woh red saree pehenna.

R: Nahi Akshu'

AK: Maine aapki baat maani na jab aap ne mujse full pant pehenese mana kiya. To ab aap ko bhi meri baat maanni padegi.

R: OK

When she breezed in five minutes later, Armaan sat mesmerised looking at her in his favourite saucewala red saree and open hair. She hadn't tied up her hair as she normally did."Chalo main tayyar hoon." she announced.

"Wow mama! Aap to heroine lag rahi ho," exclaimed Akshat.

R: Chup badmaash.

Armaan remained glued to his seat and his eyes glued to her face. Riddhima looked a bit embarassed and said "Chale?" Armaan smiled sheepishly and said "Chalo."

Akshat ran and took his seat next to Armaan in the front. It was a very pleasant day though the nights were chilly. Armaan left the car windows open so that they could enjoy the view. He kept stealing glances at her through his rear view mirror. Her hair was flying all over her face and she was trying to push it back. She had raised the glass on both the rear windows but the breeze from the front ones still blew her hair. Armaan didn't even offer to close them as he was enjoying looking at her like that. Purposely he selected the song CHEHRE PE GIRI ZULFEIN to be played on the car music system.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hix8OHCVZwQ

Riddhima looked up surprised on hearing the song and saw his mischievious smile in the rear view mirror. She pretended to be unaffected by it and kept looking out. The view was breath-taking. Lush greenery of tea, coffee and spice plantations all around and the clear blue sky above. It was like a scene out of a pictue book. Soon they came to a small clearing. The loud roar of water indicating the waterfall nearby.

There were a couple of other cars parked there. She got out and looked around. They were on a rocky patch. Armaan picked up their clothes in one hand and held Akshat's hand with the other. He led them towards the fall. Ridddhima was glad she had worn flat slippers. She carefully followed the duo. But she was spellbound when they reached the water fall. The water was gushing down with full force and making such a noise that one couldn't even hear the person standing next to them. They stood admiring it for sometime. Armaan took out his camera and clicked several pictures of Akshat. "mama aap bhi yahan aao na" he called out. "Nahi beta main theek hoon" she said and stood back a little admiring the scenery around. Armaan did click a few photos of her without her knowledge.

Then they went a little further where the water fall was not so forceful. When Armaan and Akshat prepared to take a dip under it, she sat on the rock nearby holding their clothes. She smiled seeing Akshat a bit scared to enter the water at first. But with Armaan picking him up and standing under the fall he squealed with joy. Then he wanted to be put down. He jumped in and out of the fall while holding on to Armaan. He looked towards her and beckoned to her. She shook her head and motioned him to come out. But he paid no heed. After a few minutes Armann tried to get him out but he was not willing. When she saw that he was not listening to Armaan, she got up to go near and call out to him, as he wouldn't hear her from here. She put down the clothes and walked barefoot towards the water. She went close and motioned him to come out. But he just ignored her shaking his head. She was worried he would fall sick. Without thinking she stepped forward to pull him out and screamed out aloud when her foot slipped on the wet and mossy rock. Armaan rushed forward and caught her in his left arm , without easing the grip of Akshat's hand in his right hand. The touch of his hand on her waist sent shivers through her body more than the chillness of the water. She wished she had worn a salwar suit. Then she wouldn't have felt his fingers directly on her skin.They stood still, embracing each other, eyes locked, unaware of the water flowing over them, their heatbeats louder than the gushing noise of the water. They were mesmerised and totally unprepared for the feelings which arose in them. He wanted to hold her face and just crush his lips onto hers and she wanted to pull down his head to do the same.

Diivaanaa Huaa Baadal
Saavan Kii Ghataa Chhaai
Ye Dekhake Dil Jhuumaa, Lii Pyaar Ne Angadaai
Diivaanaa Huaa Baadal

Aisii To Merii Taqadiir Na Thii
Tumasaa Jo Koii Mahabuub Mile
Dil Aaj Khushii Se Paagal Hai
Ai Jaanevafaa Tum Khuub Mile
Dil Kyuun Naa Bane Paagal, Kyaa Tumne Adaa Paai
Ye Dekhake Dil Jhuumaa, Lii Pyaar Ne Angadaai
Diivaanaa Huaa Baadal

Jab Tumase Nazar Takaraai Sanam
Jazabaat Kaa Ek Tuufaan Uthaa
Tinake Kii Tarah Main Bah Nikalii
Sailaad Mere Roke Na Rukaa
Jiivan Mein Machii Halachal
Aur Bajane Lagii Shahanaai
Ye Dekhake Dil Jhuumaa, Lii Pyaar Ne Angadaai

Diivaanaa Huaa Baadal

Hai Aaj Naye Aramaanon Se, Aabaad Merii Dil Kii Nagarii
Barason Se Fizaa Kaa Mausam Thaa
Viiraan Badii Duniyaa Thii Merii
Haathon Mein Teraa Aanchal, Aayaa Jo Bahaar Aai
Ye Dekhake Dil Jhuumaa, Lii Pyaar Ne Angadaai

Diivaanaa Huaa Baadal, Saavan Ki Ghataa Chhaai
Ye Dekhake Dil Jhuumaa, Lii Pyaar Ne A.Nga.Daai

Diivaanaa Huaa Baadal, Saavan Kii Ghataa Chhaai
Ye Dekhake Dil Jhuumaa, Lii Pyaar Ne Angadaai,
Diivaanaa Huaa Baadal

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZeO7A03lc1g

Akshat's voice brought them back to the earth. "Mama ap theek ho?" he yelled. She move away from Armaan a little, but still held on to him and replied "haan". Then slowly the trio made their way out Armaan holding on to both of them firmly. As soon as they reached dry ground she let go of his hold and walked away tugging at her clinging saree. She was fully drenched, the wet saree hugging to her figure. Armaan's eyes were drawn to her and her cheeks more red than her saree. She picked up Akshu's towel to dry him while she herself was shivering. Araman came, picked up his towel and handed it to her while taking Akshat's towel from her hand saying "Dry yourself, I'll change Akshat's clothes". She wiped her face first. It was as if she could feel the scent of his body on the towel. She tried to take her mind off it and set about wiping her hands and drying her hair while he peeled off Akshat's clothes. But Akshat wouldn't let him pull off his underwear. So he smiled and dried his hair a little. The he held the towel around the boy's waist while he peeled off his underwear and wore a fresh one. After dressing up the boy, Armaan turned to riddhima, who was now wringing her saree end to squeeze out the water, and said, "You both sit in the car. I'll start the heater." He unlocked the door but Riddhima protested "no the car will get messy. I'm still wet."

A: That's OK. We can clean it later. If you want, you can change into my dry shirt, I can manage with this wet vest.

R: No its OK. The saree willl get dry soon.

Then he took out a shawl from the dicky, opened the back door and called out "Akshat tum thak gaye hoge, yahan late jao." And when akshat lay down on the back seat he put the shawl over him and closed the door. Riddhima had now wrapped his towel around her shoulders like a shawl. He opened the front passenger door for her and went around and started the heater. She got in hesitantly. He closed the doors and went towards the bushes with Akshat's towel and his clothes.

He came back and started the car. He gave Riddhima a sideway glance and saw that she was shivering inspite of the heater. He drove fast and soon reached her house. By then Akshat had fallen asleep in the back seat.

A: Tum andar jakar change karke aao. Hum yehin wait karte hai.

R: Ab kahan jana hai?

A: Mere ghar, dinner ke liye.

R: Nahi, hum yahin dinner kar lenge.

A: Nahi Kaka ne khana bana liya hoga, hum wahin chalte hain.

R: Andar chalo chai to pee lete hai.

A: Nahi, tum bas jaldise change karke aajao.

Edited by ssh57 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Hey Shardha ... I hope some good news ... do share with us whenever u have time on hand.


Hi, The news is not good. I'll post for the next five days then I'll be away for a week. Sorry can't help.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Shardha🤗...this is what i call dedication...even though you are busy with somethings at your home front...still you managed to update.......Hats of to you👏👏....thank you so much for this😳..and lets come to the FF now.....w/o a doubt its an amzing and remarkable update...i can totally imagine Ridhima(shilpa) in red saree and she must be looking gorgeous.lol


Stupendious Job done👍🏼👏


Love❤️
Ritu
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear nice part
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi shardha,
Wow!! this part was so romantic... and i love the song..sawan ki khataa chaee yeh dekh ke dill jhumaa.. ehhe i love the sogn so enjoyed it to be added in here dear..
so the whole scenee at the water fall the mere touch while he held her waist , aheheheh the towel sequence awwww very very romantic.. and soocute.. i loved reading...and feels a bit embarrased to say but i did blush for no reason usee... lol.. i enjoyed reding dear..and its gogin on well..
u have work at home.. u plzz concentrate on ur home frotn..we can wait.. and always remember we here ur readers always wish best for u .. my best wishes ur way..always smile..and do take care of urself...
Bhoomi
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Posted: 15 years ago
Woow....:)
this part was sooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wooooooow....loved it....would love some more AR scenes... Abhi ko kaho marr jaaye...AR are perfect for each other
PLease continue soon....:)
Take care
Ananya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi shardha,

Wow!! this part was so romantic... and i love the song..sawan ki khataa chaee yeh dekh ke dill jhumaa.. ehhe i love the sogn so enjoyed it to be added in here dear..
so the whole scenee at the water fall the mere touch while he held her waist , aheheheh the towel sequence awwww very very romantic.. and soocute.. i loved reading...and feels a bit embarrased to say but i did blush for no reason usee... lol.. i enjoyed reding dear..and its gogin on well..
u have work at home.. u plzz concentrate on ur home frotn..we can wait.. and always remember we here ur readers always wish best for u .. my best wishes ur way..always smile..and do take care of urself...
Bhoomi


Hi Bhoomi ,thanks for being so understanding. I'll post the few parts I've already written. then there may be a break for about a week. Surely my home is my priority but this is a diversion of mind for me too. Hence I posted the part. I wanted to make it as romantic as I could. So glad it made u blush. I want the readers to feel their hearts racing like AR's. Love shardha
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ammygurl

Woow....:)
this part was sooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wooooooow....loved it....would love some more AR scenes... Abhi ko kaho marr jaaye...AR are perfect for each other
PLease continue soon....:)
Take care
Ananya



I can understand your wanting Abhi out of the way. But wouldn't it be cruel to just kill him for no rhyme or reason? If AR are meant to be together they will. I'll try for some more AR moments but within bounds.
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
sorry for late comment
i was out of town
both the parts were awesome
thanks for the pm
loved them

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