It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 67

what is angad questioning on the judgment of kripa regarding mishti... he was also very much excited while thinking abt the date... if kripa was wrong then so was angad... the image that mishti has, any one would think the same way about her.. the way kripa thought, but I think, this angad/ mishti date... is only to show the jealousy of kripa. and that is very obvious..

well, i don't think angad is a dump silly guy here.. at this age i guess every boy use to show this carefree attitude and behaves in the same manner.. guys are usually not that concerned or over conscious that they notice to these minor things.. is liye kripa ke hints ko na samajhna ..ye baat bilkul sahi bataai ja rahi hai

but, may be this present angad is smiling over himself while remembering these events. that's why i guess that 17 years old angad is looking silly to the readers.

btw in this part, story didn't move forward at all.. we only came to know that kripa got jealous from angad's date..

i have noticed one thing regarding this narration that whenever angad talks abt kripa, he has always addressed her as.. You/Yours , and not as..she/her it means that he is narrating all these events to kripa and not someone else, plus that choking game incident is supposed to be a secret b/w dilip and kripa, so there is no point if angad would reveal this infront of anyone..

btw.. while living in USA, u have one advatage that u know abt all the 4 seasons and which season is going on, you are aware of that.. other wise, here we have 10 months of summer and 2 months of winter...aapke note se pata chala mujhe ke spring bhi aa gaya 😕

Originally posted by: bheegi

Annu, when I meant ghisi piti kahani, that meant, smiliar stories. I love all my ffs and try not to repeat themes (ghisa pita theme) in all stories. If i write the same kind of stuff eg. similar suhaag raat scenes etc, I get bored and I am sure the readers get bored too....that's what i meant by ghisa pita. Please I myself wouldn't call my ffs ghisapita😆...it'sjust that I don't like to repeat the themes in my ffs...

A thought came into my mind, after reading this whole thing again..

whatever U said above i agree with u 101%, but don't u think there's still one big thing that is being repeated in all ur stories and that is… its Happy Ending!

i havnt read all ur previous work, but i guess they were all ended on a similar kind of note…and they live happily ever after.. rite bheegi? IF YES, then why is that??

"It had to be you"..is ur 17^th fanfic Mashallah, but why we couldn't able to get any ff which had a Sad Ending..where it was shown that AK parted their ways due to some major differences in their relationship, after they felt that NOW they can not stand with each other and they are NOT meant to be. Why is it that Kripa never realized near the end that this Angad Khanna is NOT her real soul mate.

I mean, this does happen in real life so often, where couple after having a courtship of 1-2 years realize that this is not the person with whom they would like to spend their whole life.. is liye saath reh kar, ek doosre ko dard dene se behter hai.. ke wo apni marzi se aur samajhdaari se, ek doosre se alag ho jaaein…and the most important thing is that, they do not feel sorry or have any kind of regret for him/herself or for their ex-partner after some time, coz they believe that whatever they did under that circumstances was best for both..

but if Im not wrong bheegi, till date u havnt shown anything like that b/w AK in ur any fanfic… why separation ALWAYS comes in the middle of the story and not in the end… after all, each love story would not end on a success

U said u get bored, if u write the same kind of stuff… then why u didn't get bored by writing same kind of ending, that is..AK Milan.. har AngadKripa mohabbat ka anjaam shaadi aur bachche hi nahin hona chahiye, bheegi!

😊

Originally posted by: annu127

A thought came into my mind, after reading this whole thing again..

whatever U said above i agree with u 101%, but don't u think there's still one big thing that is being repeated in all ur stories and that is' its Happy Ending!

i havnt read all ur previous work, but i guess they were all ended on a similar kind of note'and they live happily ever after.. rite bheegi? IF YES, then why is that??

"It had to be you"..is ur 17^th fanfic Mashallah, but why we couldn't able to get any ff which had a Sad Ending..where it was shown that AK parted their ways due to some major differences in their relationship, after they felt that NOW they can not stand with each other and they are NOT meant to be. Why is it that Kripa never realized near the end that this Angad Khanna is NOT her real soul mate.

I mean, this does happen in real life so often, where couple after having a courtship of 1-2 years realize that this is not the person with whom they would like to spend their whole life.. is liye saath reh kar, ek doosre ko dard dene se behter hai.. ke wo apni marzi se aur samajhdaari se, ek doosre se alag ho jaaein'and the most important thing is that, they do not feel sorry or have any kind of regret for him/herself or for their ex-partner after some time, coz they believe that whatever they did under that circumstances was best for both..

but if Im not wrong bheegi, till date u havnt shown anything like that b/w AK in ur any fanfic' why separation ALWAYS comes in the middle of the story and not in the end' after all, each love story would not end on a success

U said u get bored, if u write the same kind of stuff' then why u didn't get bored by writing same kind of ending, that is..AK Milan.. har AngadKripa mohabbat ka anjaam shaadi aur bachche hi nahin hona chahiye, bheegi!

😊

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Awesome , Mind Blowing , Too Good Part 😛



Aww I love Angad's disappointment when he did not get Kripa's secrets in her locker, but then he gotta realize that Kripa's not very special girl..😛 So sweet he went to meet her & worried about her still not know he is in love with her 😆 please make him jealous...kripa is feeling jealous when he told about his and mishty date tooo good.👏 thanks a lot for this part sangeeta ...Have a nice holiday with family...😊
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Originally posted by: annu127

what is angad questioning on the judgment of kripa regarding mishti... he was also very much excited while thinking abt the date... if kripa was wrong then so was angad... the image that mishti has, any one would think the same way about her.. the way kripa thought, but I think, this angad/ mishti date... is only to show the jealousy of kripa. and that is very obvious..

yes, u have a gr8 point annu. Even angad was carried away by her reputation and yes this part was written to show that kripa is also an ordinary girl when it comes to emotions like jealousy

well, i don't think angad is a dump silly guy here.. at this age i guess every boy use to show this carefree attitude and behaves in the same manner.. guys are usually not that concerned or over conscious that they notice to these minor things.. is liye kripa ke hints ko na samajhna ..ye baat bilkul sahi bataai ja rahi hai

aap ne bilkul theek kaha annu. wow is ff mein aapke aur mere khayalat kaafi milte hain. Angad is just a teenager and doesn't see things from kripa's perspective yet

but, may be this present angad is smiling over himself while remembering these events. that's why i guess that 17 years old angad is looking silly to the readers.

yeah...he is looking back and reflecting on his relationship with kripa

btw in this part, story didn't move forward at all.. we only came to know that kripa got jealous from angad's date..

yeah...but that was important to show her side of the story too

i have noticed one thing regarding this narration that whenever angad talks abt kripa, he has always addressed her as.. You/Yours , and not as..she/her it means that he is narrating all these events to kripa and not someone else, plus that choking game incident is supposed to be a secret b/w dilip and kripa, so there is no point if angad would reveal this infront of anyone..

ur smart annu....that's all I'll say😊

btw.. while living in USA, u have one advatage that u know abt all the 4 seasons and which season is going on, you are aware of that.. other wise, here we have 10 months of summer and 2 months of winter...aapke note se pata chala mujhe ke spring bhi aa gaya 😕

yeah..ur right, when i lived in india it was winter, summer and monsoons only. spring break is not there in india/pak

Originally posted by: annu127

A thought came into my mind, after reading this whole thing again..

whatever U said above i agree with u 101%, but don't u think there's still one big thing that is being repeated in all ur stories and that is' its Happy Ending!

i havnt read all ur previous work, but i guess they were all ended on a similar kind of note'and they live happily ever after.. rite bheegi? IF YES, then why is that??

"It had to be you"..is ur 17^th fanfic Mashallah, but why we couldn't able to get any ff which had a Sad Ending..where it was shown that AK parted their ways due to some major differences in their relationship, after they felt that NOW they can not stand with each other and they are NOT meant to be. Why is it that Kripa never realized near the end that this Angad Khanna is NOT her real soul mate.

I mean, this does happen in real life so often, where couple after having a courtship of 1-2 years realize that this is not the person with whom they would like to spend their whole life.. is liye saath reh kar, ek doosre ko dard dene se behter hai.. ke wo apni marzi se aur samajhdaari se, ek doosre se alag ho jaaein'and the most important thing is that, they do not feel sorry or have any kind of regret for him/herself or for their ex-partner after some time, coz they believe that whatever they did under that circumstances was best for both..

but if Im not wrong bheegi, till date u havnt shown anything like that b/w AK in ur any fanfic' why separation ALWAYS comes in the middle of the story and not in the end' after all, each love story would not end on a success

U said u get bored, if u write the same kind of stuff' then why u didn't get bored by writing same kind of ending, that is..AK Milan.. har AngadKripa mohabbat ka anjaam shaadi aur bachche hi nahin hona chahiye, bheegi!

😊