It Had To Be You (part 11) AK ff pg 121 4/26/10 - Page 27

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii

Hey Api

How? How do you do it every single time? Again, your portrayed Angad's soo well. His thoughts, feelings, anger, and actions was so superbly done by you. I can actually visualize what's going on in that ten year old mind. Maybe because you have your own kids, you know how a child will think at various stages. My comments won't do justice to your writing.

thanks Jannat! Yes, ur right, my own kids have been my best teachers in life😊 UR too sweet

The part was simply amazing.

Aww..I feel so bad for Angad..even his dad did not stand up for him. LOL, he punched wallls..my brother still does that out of anger and he's 20.

A lot of boys esp those who are into video games etc can have this kind of violent streak these days😕

This line was soo awesome. Because of Kripa he was mad and she comes and stops him. I can't explain it correctly but this line is great.
"ANGAD!" Your voice at my door interrupted my madness.

aww thanks...even i could feel their chemistry when i wrote that line. Their first eyelock as kids😳

I can totally relate to this:
Every kid goes through a moment like this in their life when they think the whole world hates them, that everyone is against them, that they are the worst kid in the world.

i know....most kids have felt this way at some point😭 isn't it sad?

Gayatri is such a sweet lady. She knows how to raise a angry child's feelings.I think every mother should be more like her. Loving their child no matter what they do and raise their spirit.

it's not easy to understand why a child is angry...very few grownups empathize with such a child.Most just reprimand them😕

Ths is sooo touching:
I knew that when I grew up, I would never stop kissing my kids even if they were the worst kids in the world.

yeah, this is so important....hope all the readers will remember this when they have their own kids

Atleast Kripa feels something for Angad which I did not think after reading the previous parts except I hate Angad..lol
I don't know what you were thinking with those big brown eyes of yours, but now when I think back, why do I think that you were genuinely worried about me?

yes....that's the little glimpse of kripa's true feelings😉

This is the one thing no one should ever do. I remember once when my mom insulted me in front of my friends, I was so embarrassed that I wish there was a hole in the ground and swallow me whole.
Another thing I promised to remember for my kids when I was a grownup- never insult them in front of their friends! It hurts'.really hurts, more than any wound on your body.

Frankly, a lot of parents don't realize this...my own kids have taught me this


The way you are building up Josh's character and him provoking Angad to recompensate for the basketball lessons, I am thinking he might be another rival for Kripa's affectations. I think it's Josh here instead of Prithvi.

yeah, i purposely switched their roles this time😃

LMAOO..this line was funny
Me- a sensitive boy? A sissy? Naa! Gayatri aunty did not know me that well after all.

angad is too young to understand what sensitive means

This line was great showing how Kripa felt..more hurt from the accusation of cheating rather than the physical pain of the bloody nose
I had let you down once again, hurt your feelings rather than your body this time.

Aww..Angad took all the blame on himself to reinstate Kripa's self respect. He is soo sweet. He does have a soft side to him.

After all the punishment from his parents, Angad hopes were raised by Gayatri Aunty. I hope she doesnt hate him now.
Gayatri aunty was visibly hurt. I am sure she had not expected that from the boy she had so compassionately helped just a few days ago.

It was an superb part. With this part, you have passed on a mother and son lesson. What each parent should never forget to do to their own child.

aww thanks....i try my best to at least hide some messages for all readers in my ffs. Thanks for appreciating it😊

And everyone can relate to this FF as I am sure everyone has maybe once been through this as a child.

Continue Soon

U did it this timeJannat! Lovely comment as always👏👏
Jannat

Originally posted by: vallanki

huggie-kissie...no way...they are pre-teens😆...so true...were you a psychology student??😉 All moms need not master in psychology😆

yeah ur right, we all become psychologists after raising our own kids😆

...but I agree with Angad ..all parents must study psychology..I tell my hubby to go for atleast a certificate course in child psychology

and also wife psychology😆

😛... Josh teasings...Angad's creepy sensation!!! this continued till now😉..kya pyar hai, Angad!!! hatsoff to your feelings😳 I loved Gayatri-Angad affectionate relationship. I think it was coz Gayatri must be craving subconsciously for a son!!

hmmm.....wonder if that's what's going in gayatri's head....certainly a possibility😉 Maybe she can have him as her son in law😆


Well narrated Angad's feelings during the grounding. I never grounded my kids..they always were scared of the word itself..that was enough to punish them

yeah, same here but i hear a lot of american parents always grounding their kids

😆. I'm eager to know if Josh=Angad's relation continued in the same way till now. Somehow I suspect Josh remained a close friend to kripa to know her heart for Angad!

that could be a possibility😃


He is the person to read the secret love between AK. Hope,he won't bring any differences between AK...Angad's behaviour is enough to drift them away!! The feelings in the last para would well suit to Arman than Angad...noticing Ridhima's(kripa's) humiliation for the cheating.

yeah, u know this is originally an AR story...i am writing it for AK fans also but when i write it, it's AR in my mind😊 like Pehchan was originally an AK story

Eager to read next part....thanks,....was great talking to u this evening

Originally posted by: ShelDev

Hey Bheegi

Lovely lovely update.....

OMG....you expressed Angad's feelings so well I actually thought I was actually visualizing his reactions....hats off to you for making it feel so real.....👏.....Poor Angad....I hope he doesn't go.....

Great update.....pls pls continue soon...
Eagerly desperately waiting......
Thanks

Originally posted by: bheegi