MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 18

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PART 16

G to all : ab zaruri ho gya hai k tum logo ko shiksha di jaye.. kyunki ab pretmaya se tum logo ko saamna kabhi bhi ho skta hai…

All : kaisi shiksha???????

GG: Pretmaya jaan chuka hai k tum paancho ek sath ho… aur tum paancho ka ek sath hona hi uske liye khatarnak hai… aur wo kabhi nhi chahega k tum log zyada din tak ek sath raho… isliye pretmaya ki maya se bachne ki shiksha ki tum logo ko zarurat hai

M : Iski zarurat to nupur ko bhi hai.. aur wo to behosh hai…

GG : tum log uski chinta bilkul mat karo…. Nupur ko kafi kuch janti hai jo tum log bhi nhi jaante?????

All (surprisingly) : Janti hai kaise????????

GG : usse hi chuna gya hai pancho shaktiyo ko eksath karne k liye… to usko to sab pta hona hi tha… isme aashchary (surprise) hone ki koi baat nhi hai… Nupur ki shiksha ki shuruwat tab hi ho gyi thi jab Nupur ko aashram me rok kr.. baki charo shaktiyo ko alag alag dishayo me chod dia gya tha… to Nupur iss whqt paancho shaktiyo me se sabse zyada shaktishali hai.. pr pretmaya se ladne k liye sirf ek hi shakti k shaktishali hone se kuch nhi hogi…. Pancho shaktiyo ka shaktishali hona zaruri hai… isliye tum logo ka bhi nupur jitna shaktishali hona zaruri hai

M : guruji main puchna chah rha tha k agar nupur itni hi shaktishali thi to pretmaya ki maya ka asar uss pr kyun hua????

GG : wo isliye k baki ki 4 shaktia itni shaktishali nhi thi.. tum sab ek dusre se bandhe huye ho.. jab tum sab apni shaktia ek sath milaoge to pretmaya ki maya ka asar kabhi nhi hoga.. pr kisi ek ne bhi apni shakti rok li..ya apna rasta badal lia to baki charo milkar pretmaya se lad to sakte hai pr jeet nhi sakte…

U : guruji ye sab itna confusing kyun hai… sab kuch itni jaldi jaldi ho rha hai k main to full confused hu.. mujhe kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai….. aur waise hamari chaya wo sab… hamari college life wo sab???????

GG : tum logo ki chaya ka asar tum logo pr yahaan bhi padega… agar pretmaya tum logo ki chaya ko pehchan kr unke sath kuch krta hai to tum logo pr yahaan bhi asar hoga.. aur tumare shaktishali hone pr tumhari chaya bhi shaktishali ho jayegi

G : to matlab hamara shaktishali hona har haal me zaruri hai…

GG : haan…

S : to thik hai…. hum log taiyar hai.. aap jaisa kahenge waise karenge…

GG to M : tumne nupur ki zimedari li hai to isliye tumhe nupur ka khayal bhi rakhna hoga… aur apni shiksha pr bhi dhayan hoga… umeed hai k nupur ko jald hi hosh aa jayega….

(ye sun kar sabhi ko khushi hoti hai…)

GG : Tum sabhi kal subah suraj nikalne se pehle mujhe bahar miloge.. Yaad rahe tum charo k charo

(koi kuch puch pta uss se pehle guruji wahaan se chale jaate hai…)

U : subah suraj nikalane se pehle….. Kya tum logo ko lagta hai hum ye sab kar payenge

G : Pta nhi.. Pr koshish to kr hi skte hai

S : kuch achcha soch kr hi hume chuna gya hai wrna ye powers kisi aur k pass hoti…

M : Jo bhi ho ye kaam humein dia gya hai to hume hi krna hoga…

G : mayank tumhe to nupur ka khayal bhi rakhna hai.. agar nupur ne dharti pr pair rakh dia to uski buti ka asar uski body se khatam ho jayega.. Aisa karti hu main nupur k pass rukti hu aur tum aaram karo

M : nahi… agar kaam mujhe mila hai to main hi karunga… aur tum mere aaram ki chinta mat karo… Pehle mujhe samjh nhi aata tha pr ab syad main jaanta hu ki main bina soye kai kai din tak kaise padhta rehta tha… to tum sab aaram karo.. waise bhi kal suraj nikalane se pehle hume guruji se milna hai…

S : ab to mujhe kuch bhi sun kr surprise hona band ho gya… hum logo k sath kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho skta hai…to ye koi badi baat nhi hai

U : pr nupur to behosh hai tum time pass kaise karoge??????Hum bhi rukte hai naa

M : uski zarurat nhi hai.. yahaan itni books hai.. aur jab tak nupur ko hosh nhi aata tab tak ye kitabe mera sath dengi naa aur ye main bahana nhi maar rha tum sabko pta hai mujhe books kitni psnd hai…. Tum log aaram karo…

G : jaisi tumhari marzi…pr jab tak tum apni psnd ki kuch kitabe naa le aao.. main nupur k pass rukti hu

M : thik hai..

(Gunjan nupur k pass rukti hai… samrat aur uday aaram karne chale jaate hai.. aur mayank kitabe dhundta hai apne padhne k liye.. thodi derr me mayank kitabe lekar gunjan k pass aa jata hai…Gunjan mayank ko dekh kr….)

G : itni sari kitabe????????? Sari kitabe aaj hi padoge kya???????

M : yahaan purane time ki bahut si kitabo ka bhandar hai…..main chahu bhi to bhi apni puri zindagi lagane pr ye sari kitabe nhi padh skta.. isliye ye to sirf kuch hi hai…ab tum jao aur aaram karo….

G : thik hai.. main bhi chalti hu… pr agar tumhe thoda bhi lage k tumhe aaram ki zarurat hai to mujhe please bula lena…bhulna mat

M : sure…

(gunjan chali jaati hai… Mayank nupur k pass hi ek lakdi k bune huye aasan type pr baith kr kitabe padhne lagta hai…pr uska dhyan padhne se zyada nupur ki taraf hai… uska mann koi khas kitabo me nhi lag rha…. Wo sochta hai k kaise uski wajah se nupur ki ye halat huyi hai…. tabhi usse dhyan aata hai k jab wo nupur k ghar gya tha to nupur ramayan me ram vivah padh rhi thi…. Issi soch me wo ramayan nikal kar wahi ram vivah padhna shuru kr deta hai….ramayan ki lines se mayank khud ko aur nupur ko juda hua sa paata hai.. kuch soch kr mayank ram vivah unchi awaz me padta hai taki wo awaz nupur k kaano tak jaaye… Mayank ka ye idea kaam bhi karta hai.. Nupur ko halka halka hosh sa aane lagta hai….nupur ki body kafi vibrate krti hai.. ek baar to ye sab dekh kr.. mayank ghabra jaata hai pr as ki wo janta hai unke sath kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho skta hai.. tabhi usse yaad aata hai k jab guruji ne nupur ko buti pilane se pehle gunjan ko nupur k hath pair rubb krne ko kahe the…mayank sochta hai k raat k iss whqt kisi ko bulane se achcha hai wo khud hi ye kaam kare… aur mayank yahi karta hai… mayank ki mehnat asar karti hai aur nupur ko halka halka hosh aata hai…

N : Paaani Paaani…..

M to Himself : isko pani kaise du…guruji ne kaha tha nupur k liye pani zehar ka kaam karega… kuch to dena hi hoga…

( Mayank nupur ko kada pila deta hai… jiska swad itna bura hota hai k nupur foran hosh me aa jati hai.. aur khud ko guruji ki aashram me dekh kr…)

N : ye kya???? Hum yahaan kab aaye?????? Aur tumhe kaun le aaya????

M (innocently) : kuch batane ki sach me zarurat hai kya?????

N : matlab ye ki guruji ko pta chal gya k main pretmaya se akele hi?????? Nhi.. wo to mujhe chodenge nhi… Mujhe abhi guruji se baat karni hogi…(nupur guruji se milne jaane k liye bas pair zameen pr rakhne ki wali hoti hai k…)

M(shout) : Khabardar jo pair zameen pr rakha to…. Abhi k abhi upper karo pair….

N to herself : ab isse kya hua???????

N to M : ab kya hua… mujhe guruji se milna hai….

M : thodi hi derr me subah ho jayegi tab tum guruji se mil lena pr tab tak tum aise hi baithi raho…..

N : arre mera guruji ko samjhna bahut zaruri hai….

M(gusse me) : kya samjhogi????? K tum kitni mahaan ho… tumne hum logo k liye jaan dene ki koshish ki?????? Pr tumhe to pta tha naa k ek bhi shakti kam hone se pretmaya to hum lad to skte hai pr jeet nhi skte… fir bhi mahaan ban ne ka drama… isliye jab tak guruji khud tumhe kuch nhi kehte tum chup chap yahaan baithi raho…

N to herself : lgta hai.. guruji isse sab kuch bta chuke hai.. waise iska gussa hona bhi zyay hai.. ye to bechara dunia walo k bare me soch rha hai…iska gussa shant karna hoga..

M to herself : achanak se mujhe itna gussa kyun aaya… itna nhi pr thoda gussa to banta hai….

N to M : mayank waise main keh rhi thi tum gusse me bahut hi cute lagte ho

M : really...(gusse me)… To thik hai main ab se hamesha gusse me hi rahunga… tumhe to main gusse me cute lagta hu

N to herself : main bhi naa kya kya bolti rehti hu….

N to M : mera ye matlab nhi hai.. tum gusse me cute lagte ho… pr bina gusse k to aur smart dashing aur handsome lagte ho….

M : tumhara kuch nhi ho skta… really… mujhe samjh nhi aata k tumhe kis tarah se handle karu… tumhari wo halaat dekh kr main kitna darr gya tha…guruji nhi aate to pta nhi kya ho jaata….

N : main??????? Tumhe bhi darr lagta hai

M : main bole to hum.. gunjan uday samrat

N : Aur??????

M : main bhi… lga pta nhi achanak se ye kya ho gya….

N : Ab to pta chal gya naa. Tension mat lo….ab main thik hu

M : puri tarah nhi…. Guru ji ne tumhe darti pr pair rakhne se mana kia hai… iss se buti ka asar khatam ho jayega….

N (shocked) : Kya???????

M : kya hua tum itni shocked kyun ho gyi…..

N : pr wo buti guruji laaye kahaan se….. Uss buti ko laana itna bhi aasan nhi hai…..wo koi aisi waisi buti nhi hai

M : aisi waisi buti matlab???????

N : ramayan puri padhi hai kabhi?????

M : haan

N : jab laxman ji ko meghnad ka teer lga tha, tab hanuman ji ne yahi buti lakar unki jaan bachai thi…aur agar guruji ye buti laaye hai kaise… kyunki hanuman ji pura parwat hi le gye the shri ram k liye…………

M : ye main nhi jaanta… pr wo laaye hai ye pta hai mujhe

N : Pta nhi mere liye guruji ko aur kya kya krna padega….koi kam thik se nhi hota mujhse

M : aisa mat socho….Jo bhi hoga thik hoga

N : haan wo to hai

M : kuch hi derr me subah hone hi wali hogi…chaho to aaram kar lo

N : Nhi mujhe khas zarurat nhi hai.. waise tum kya padh rhe the

M : Kuch khas nhi..lo tum agar dekhna chaho to dekh skti ho…(mayank ramayan nupur ki taraf badha deta hai…Nupur kitab dekhti hai…aur jo page mayank padh rha tha wahi kholti hai)

N : oh ramayan….tumhe kab se interest ho gya…. Aur wo bhi ram vivah… Gud going.. Mayank Sharma

M : kyun ramayan padhne se pehle tumse permission leni padegi kya????

N : nhi aisa nhi hai… waise koi bhi ek naam lena…jaise ramji k sath sita waise mayank sharma k sath??????????

M : nupur Bhushan

M to himself : aaj kal zuban kuch zyada hi filasne lgi hai….

N (a little bit anger) : Maine mera naam lene ko nhi bola tha…

M : jab tum aise betuke swal karogi.. to tumhara hi naam lunga… tumhare pass time pass karne k liye kuch nhi hai.. aur bina jawab k tum chup hoti nhi… isliye tumhara naam le dia… waise mujhe kisi me koi interest nhi hai

N : mujhme bhi nhi??????(in a naughty way)

M : tumhe kya lagta hai????(in a naughty way)

N : mujhe lgta hai

M : kya lagta hai..

N : Mujhe lgta hai k………..(tabhi guruji enter krte hai… aur wo nupur ko hosh me dekh kafi khus hote hai….)

TO BE CONT……

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That was an awsome part...


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thank you for updating..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow annu after long time u updated.Fabulous updte.Awesome.Loved mayur a lot.Mayank was so caring.Nups thik hogayi-yeee.Now i want 2 c how will dey use their power.N also want more mayur scene.
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nice part..
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amazing update...please do update soon...

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