MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 51

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Daksha,
lovely update.
Angel is so cute.
loved gunur convo.
this part was really very nice.
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago

really great yaar...i juz love mayur in this....

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Posted: 15 years ago
at last u have updated......

i was waiting so badly.....

i loved nupur's possessiveness.......

and i totally loved the "gay" joke!

i am loving uday for his caring nature towards his sister...........

but what i loved the most was that angel woke up mayank.........this part touched me......i loved it to bits........this was the best art of this update.......coz i love child's emotions........

hey can i ask u to tell her as anjali? u said her name was anjali.......

mayank told them abt sam......and i am happy that sam is nice.....

and i am happy that gunjan said yes.....

but i dont think that she will be happy due to samrat's love for dia.........

u might be thinkng that being a mayurian fan, why am i thinkng for sajan?

well i love them after mayur......

but i will be waiting......

try to continue as soon as possible............
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww!!!
looking forard to the meeting of sajan!!!!
loving it!!1
continue soon and pm me!!1
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Posted: 15 years ago
Dakshaa sachi mein luvv this part a lot
want Sajan to meet soon
luvvvv all the Mayur scenes tooo the core
awsome awsome awsome
do continue soon
can't wait to read the next part
-Lina-
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey superb update
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy daksha
it was a really nice update
waiting for sajan meeting
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

sorry 4 late update ...

luvd d part... pls continue soon...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
such a sweet update hunny.do continue soon. 😊
Edited by ghtk1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
UPDATED: PART XIX
Scene: Sehgal House

Samrat's Room………

Samrat is sitting on his bed…….looking at a photograph of Dia……remembering her……missing her………

Then only Samrat's Mom enters………

Samrat sees her and quickly tries to hide the photograph…….

S (hiding the photo beneath the pillow): Haan mom…… kuch kaam tha…….

SM: Haan beta bohot zaroori……. Tujhe Gunjan yaad hai……

S: Kaun…..

SM: Arre Uday Bhushan ki behen……arre wo uss din party mein aayi thi…….

S (remembering that glass of cold-drink fell on her): Accha haan…….mom….toh……

SM: Toh ye ki maine usse chuna hai apni bahu ke roop mein…….. tujhe aaj shaam usse milna hai……

S: Toh mom….. main uss se mill ke kya karunga…… tumhaari choice hai toh acchi hi hogi…….

SM: Beta….. maine tere liye koi shirt nahin choose ki hai…… ki jaisi bhi ho tu pahen lega…….acchi ho ya buri……..maine tere liye ladki…… teri life partner chuni hai……. decision tujhe lena hoga ye teri zindagi ka sawaal hai…….aur ek baat bata Gunjan ko kaisa lagega ki jis ladke ke pass usske liye shaadi se pehle hi samay nahin hai toh shaadi ke baad kya hoga…….bol….ab bol bhi…….

S: Accha mom……kitne baje jaana hai kahaan……

SM: Ye hui na baat…..time toh 6 baje ka hai……aur jagah tu apni pasand ki chun lena……aakhir jaana toh tujhe hai……

Scene: BhushanMansion

Gunjan's room…….

Nupur taking out clothes from Gunjan's almirah….

N: Haan……ye waala……ye waala pahen ke jaa……..

G: Main kisi party mein toh thode na jaa rahi hoon……kuch simple sober accha lagega…….

N: arre ye red colour ka hai toh isska matlab ki ye party ka suit ho gaya…….

G: Haan…..

N: Haan kya……khud hi nikaal le phir…….

Gunjan goes and takes out a light blue coloured churidaar…….

G: Gussa kyun ho rahi ho…… dekho ye waala kaisa lag raha hai…….

Nupur looks at the dress…….

N: Arre ye toh mujhe dikha hi nahin……… Oh toh sab pehle se hi decide kar rakha tha ki kya pehan na hai………hunnn

G (blushing): Aisa kuch nahin hai……

N: Ye toh acchi baat hai…….

Gunjan gets ready she is looking beautiful as usual……

Both of them come downstairs…….

Uday and Mayank are talking sitting on the couch…….

M: Arre waah….. aap toh bohot sundar lag rahi hain saali-sahiba……..

N: Waah bhai……humaari tareef toh kabhi hoti nahin hai……

M: Taareef toh usski hoti hai jo sundar ho……..

Taareef………. toh usski hoti hai jo sundar ho……..

Usski tareef kya karein jo khuda ki taareef ho…….

Nupur blushing very hard……..

G: Waah waah…….. waah waah……

Then the door bell rings and Samrat enters………

Samrat: Namaste……

Shilpa: Namaste beta…….aao baitho…….

All of them get seated…….Gunjan and Nupur are standing……

Gunjan is looking at Samrat but Samrat is talking to Uday and Mayank………

Nupur hits Gunjan's shoulder with hers : O ho…..kya dekha ja raha hai…….

Gunjan coming back to her senses : Kuch nahin…..mera matlab…..kyun tum mujhe pareshaan karti rehti ho…….

After sometime both Gunjan and Samrat leave from there…….

Samrat opens the door of car for Gunjan…….and they both get seated……..Samrat is driving the car…….

S: Hai…. I hope mera naam toh aap janti hongi……Samrat…..

G: Ji……main Gunjan……

And then there was a complete silence only horns of vehicles on the road could be heard…….

S: Aap koi khaas jagah chalna pasand karengi…….

G: Ji…..

S: Mera matlab aapko koi khaas restaurant ya hotel pasand ho…….

G: Ji…..kahin bhi…..

Then Samrat parks the car and both of them enter a restaurant…………

Samrat and Gunjan gets seated in a corner table………..

S: Aap order dijiye……..

G: Ji….. main…… aap denge toh mujhe accha lagega……

Samrat is thinking that she is very simple, composed and polite…….. simply contradicting to Dia……. In his thoughts he is thinking Dia is sitting in place of Gunjan……. He is looking at her admiringly…….. Gunjan embarrassed by Samrat's looks…….she is looking here and there…….

Waiter comes: Your food Sir…….

Samrat comes back to his thoughts……..

S: Oh yes……

G: Laaiye main serve karti hoon…….

S: Aap itni sweet kaise hain…..

G: Ji……

S: I mean aap bohot acchi hain……… Accha aur bataiye…..aap ne abhi abhi graduation complete ki hai na……

G: Ji…..

S: Aap Ji ke alaawa bhi kuch bolti hain (he smiles)……mera matlab humein humaare ghar waalon ne baat karne ke liye ek doosre ko jaan ne ke liye bheja hai na…….. toh aap kuch bataaiye……

G: Main kya bataoon…… mujhe novels padhna accha lagta main aur kya bataoon……aur koi khaas baat toh nahin hai…….

S: Its Ok…..maine koi aap ka biodata toh nahin poocha……aap itna hi boli mujhe bohot accha laga……….

In the meanwhile they finish their dinner……..and drove back to Bhushan mansion……

Gunjan steps down from the car………

G: Andar aaiye na……

S: No its ok……koi formality nahin……main ab chalta hoon…….ok bye…

G: Bye….

Then Gunjan enters the house…….

Nupur and Mayank were still there……it was not too late…….

Gunjan comes and goes directly upstairs……

Mayank sees Nupur and he addresses Nupur in her eyes to go upward…….

He is looking in her eyes………Nupur too……..

N: Kya…….accha baba ja rahi hoon…….

Then she goes inside Gunjan's room…….

Gunjan is sitting in front of dressing table…….

N: aur kaisi rahi………

G: Kya…..

N: Date…….

G: Di……. wo date nahin thi……

N: haan haan mujhe pata hai……… accha bataa Samrat kaisa laga…….

G: Theek hai………

N: Theek hai ka kya matlab…… ye koi sabzi khareed ke layi hai ki theek hai…….. main pooch rahi hoon tujhe Samrat kaisa laga……..

G: He is nice…….. very nice……

And she hugs Nupur………

N: Oye……sharmaa gayi……toh baat pakki……

Gunjan nods her head and hugs her more tightly………

N: Toh chod na mujhe……ye khush khabri news paper mein bhi toh chapwaani hai……

And Nupur comes downstairs…….

Chachi……….mera diamond set laao……. Gunjan ko Samrat pasand hai………

M: Arre…. Ye toh buri khabar hai meri aadhi gharwaali kisi aur ki gharwaali banne jaa rahi hai…….

N: Tumhein toh main (she looks Mayank with I'll kill you look)

M: arre main mazaak kar raha tha…… ab ghar chalein……

N: Haan chalo…… main toh bas Gunjan ke lautne ka intezaar kar rahi thi……ok chalo…..

Mayank Nupur leaves……..

Scene: Sehgal House

Samrat enters the house…….

Samrat's mom was waiting for him…….

SM: Beta……ab jaldi bataa tujhe Gunjan pasand hai……..

S: Haan mom……tumhaari pasand buri toh nahin ho sakti na…….

SM: Toh main unse haan keh doon……..

S: Haan mom…… aur kal subah mujhe jaldi utha dena… important meeting hai………

And he leaves for his room……

SM: Ajeeb ladka hai…… isski shaadi hone jaa rahi hai aur isse koi fark hi nahin padta…..

Next morning Samrat's mom comes to Bhushan Mansion…….

SM: Shilpa ji Namaste……..

S: Aaiye aaiye……..

SM: Ab toh aaram se baithoongi……kyunki kal se toh bohot kaam hai……

Shilpa understanding what she wants to say but waiting to hear it from her mouth……

SM: Samrat shaadi ke liye tayaar hai…….. par hum thoda jaldi chaahenge……

S: Zaroor…….aap hi bataaiye kab theek rahega……..

SM: Maine pandit ji se baat kar li hai……kal aur parson ke do acche muhurat hain toh ussi mein sagaai aur shaadi kar dete hain……

S: Jaisa aap theek samjhein………

After discussing about the ceremonies Samrat's mom leave……..

Then first of all Shilpa calls Uday and then Nupur to give them the happy news………

Then she goes in Gunjan's room to give her the news……..

Scene: Mayank's Flat

After Shilpa's phone…… Nupur calls Mayank…..

N: Hello…… kal sagaai aur parson shaadi hai…….. tum jaldi ghar aao……bohot saari shopping karni hai (all in one breath)

M: Arre saans toh le lo……. Tum shaadi kar rahi ho toh main abhi aata hoon……

N: Tum mujhse chutkaara paana chahte ho na…….. par main tumhe itni jaldi chod ke nahin jaaongi……..aur tum aaj ghar jaldi aao…….please…..pehli baar bula rahi hoon ghar jaldi….. tumhein aana padega……….

M: Aa raha hoon baba…… saare credit card toh dhoond loon……aisa na ho debit mein chala jaaon….

After one hour or so Mayank reaches home……..

M: Aaj mera kitne ka diwaala nikalne waala hai…….

N: Mujhe nahin pata……meri behen ki shaadi hai toh main kuch nahin khareedoon kya……

M: Accha chalo……maine mana kiya kya…….

All three of them including Anjali reach a Saree Shop…..

Mayank never likes shopping……aur wo bhi saariyon ki…….he is sitting without any interest…..

N: Bhaiya……..koi acchi waali saree dikhaiye na…….aisi dikhaaiye dekhte hi pasand aa jaaye…..

Nupur is choosing sarees from the lot……

Anjali too is playing with all the colourful sarees lying over there……

Anjali everytime pulls a saree and Nupur puts it back……she again pulls the same saree and Nupur puts it back……..

Mayank watching all the proceedings…….

M: Usse jo pasand hai…… wo bhi le lo na……..

Then he tells to the shopkeeper….

M: Bhaiya isse bhi pack kar do…….. mere ghar mein do do mahilaaein hain……. Mujhe dono ko khush rakhna padta hai…….

Shopkeeper smiles on what Mayank said……..and Nupur looks Mayank with a very angry look…….

N: Haan Mayank…….aur kya…… (she smiles angrily)

They finish whole shopping some dresses for Gunjan, for Anjali, for herself……..and then they reach men's section….. arre Mayank bhi toh kuch pehnega……..

They are choosing Sherwaani………

Anjali is in Mayank's hand…….

M: Aaj hum Angel ki pasand ki sherwaani lenge…… mummy ko toh Angel ki choice acchi nahin lagti par papa ko lagti hai……..

N: Acchi baat hai…… papa aur unki pari dono ek taraf aur mujhe side pe kar diya…….

Ye khatti-meethi nok-jhok toh chalti rahti hai……….nahin ho toh mazaa nahin aata…….

Sorry for late update guys....... Thoda nahin actually bohot busy chal rahi hoon..... I hope you can understand my situation....... Please comment.....ki kaisa laga......accha ya bura......less of Mayur till Sajan's marriage......phir to bohot kuch hai......jo mann mein aaye usse comment ke saath mujh tak pohonchao.......please...... comments really encourage me

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