MJHT (MAYUR & SAJAN) FF 'Sirf Tum' Part 26 @ Pg139 - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago
i loved it!
it was awesome!
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Posted: 15 years ago
very nice update....plzz bring mayur together...
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG this part is too good yaar.
You know I love when mama and mami
think Mayu is the hone wala pati
lol
to good
and wow
Mayu going to be in the prom!!!!!
I am like dancing.
And Adhiraj feeling uncomfatable?
Too good.
You know
I realli love how u write
its fab
plus
I have no hurry
becuz I know u will make Mayut together soon
aaj anhi toh baadme
lol
ok
I sound funny now.
Par Daksha (Am I getting ur name right?)
do continue soon.
I want to read the next part very badly.
Hurry!
ples hurry
I am getting impatient,
Love Lina
Posted: 15 years ago
nice! waiting to read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part
but one confussion kya adiraaj kahi nupur or maynk ke relation per doubt to nahi karega is liye shyad vo enagement bhi brake ker de
soon update
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Posted: 15 years ago
nyc part.....okaa i m contented now........nxt update main MAYUR saath jo hoongy.....nd yes.....ADHIRAJ iz uncomfortable wid MAYANK....perhaps JEALOUS.....ha na..???
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update soon....{:)))))))
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dakhsa

i loved it.........

bhale hi nupur ki engagement uske saath ho.........

atleast uski shaadi to mayank ke saath hogui na????????

continue soon...........
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MEGA UPDATE:
Next day in the evening
Scene:
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Mayank standing at the door and rings the bell and is waiting eagerly''

Nupur opens the door'' Firstly Mayank was looking down and saying itni der kyun laga di aur Nupur ko neeche se upar tak dekhta hai'''.. he's speechless''. Nupur is dressed in a beautiful light pink evening gown'''

N: Kaisi lag rahi hoon''. Aisi hi dress pehente hai na Prom Night par''.

M: I mean''''.yes''I'.mean'''you're looking soooooo beautiful'.. Acchi lag rahi ho''..

N: Thank you''..Chalein ?????

M: Haan'.

Scene: College (Party hall)

Mayur arrives at the party hall........''. Everyone is looking at them..........''. Both are looking like perfect couples..........''. Everyone is talking in the hall seeing both of them together''...........'..

N: Sab humein aise kyun dekh rahe hain'''............

M: Ab mujhe kya pata''............. Ladkiyon ka to samajh mein aata hai par ladke mujhe kyun dekh rahe hain'............'?????

N: Mayank, mazaak band''.......... Sab ladkon ki nazar mujh par hai'. ...........

Then they both are standing at one side'............ seeing that a couple are having fight''the girl moves out in anger'.............

N: Dekho Mayank''. ............Agar wo ladki mudi to isska matlab wo usse pyaar karti hai'..

M: aur nahin to ??????

N: Ruko to''............ dekho mud gayyi''. Maine kaha tha naa'...............

Then a sweet romantic song plays in the party...............'' the love is in the air..............'''all the couples are dancing''............

M: (Putting his hand forward) Would you like to dance''............

N: (thoda jhijhakte huye forwards her hand) Par mujhe dance nahin aata''.............

M: Koi baat nahin''.. ...............waise tumhen kya lagta hai yahaan kitne logon ko dance aata hai'Come on''chalo''

Both move on the dance floor'..............Mayank puts his hand towards her waist and pulls her towards himself''............... Nupur looking at Mayank's face then they both start dancing''. ...............Slowly'...........slowly''.. ............Tabhi light chali jaati hai''................

N: Arre ye kya hua............

M: Ruko main dekhta hoon...............

And he leaves''...............

After few seconds light comes''..............

Then suddenly a guy comes and tells Nupur ............" Wahaan Mayank''dekho usse kuch ho gaya''"

Nupur runs towards the place shown by that fellow''............... She enters in a dim lighted room'..........'. Suddenly from the back she heards the sound of closing the door''..........

N: (Frightened) Kaun hai wahaan''.................. Mayank ?????

Then in the dim light appears Rannvijay'''

N: Tum'' tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho'...............???????

Rv: Kyun kisi aur ka intezaar tha'''............... Intezaar to hum bhi tumhaara kab se kar rahhe hain'''.............. Kabhi humaare paas bhi aao'''.............

Walking towards Nupur'.............and ............Nupur moving backwards and leaned towards the wall'''.. ..............He holds her'.........Nupur behosh ho jaati hai'.................

In the meanwhile Mayank reaches the party hall''..............finding that Nupur is not present there''.............he moves out to search her''............ All the other friends are also with Mayank''................ He finds that RV is coming out of the room''................ Usse lagta hai kuch gadbad hai and he enters the room and finds that Nupur is unconscious lying on the floor''............. Without a delay Mayank runs behind RV''' ..................Rv sees that Mayank has seen him' ...........wo jaldi se car mein baith kar bhaag jaata hai'.............'' Mayank apni bike nikaal kar uska peecha karta hai'................'.. RV aage aage Mayank peeche-peeche'............. both are driving rash fully''.speeding up '................' They have come out of the town and suddenly a ..........truck is coming aur RV ki car truck se takrakar khaai mein gir jaati hai'' Mayank comes and sees that the car blasted while falling''.............

M: Mar gaya'''@**!!.."""@##

Then he reaches the college and takes Nupur to her house''......................''

No one knows what happened that night''............. as Nupur was unconscious and RV is dead now''''.........

Shilpa, Uday, Adhiraj come back after attending their meeting'............... Nupur hasn't told about that night to anyone'''

After many days''..................

Scene: College

After the class'............... seeing the notice board'...........

Mayank: Chalo, accha hai exams ki date aa gayi''............... finally last exams................'.

Nupur: Exams ''.............???? Itni jaldi'''...............

In the meanwhile Adhiraj's phone come on Nupur's mobile'''................Nupur is talking on the phone and comes out of the college'................. Mayank is also behind her'''

A: Kahaan ho tum''............

N: Arre'.baba'..bas aa rahi''............. Mayank chalo mujhe drop kar do ''

Adhiraj on the other side feeling jealous''.................

A: Arre tum wahin ruko'.....................'main tumhen lene aata hoon'.................

She is crossing the road'....................

N: Arre tum kyun pareshaan ho rahe ho''................. wo mujhe..................

And a bike strikes her.....................

Mayank, who is behind her comes running'...................On the other side Adhiraj couldn't hear anything on the phone'................

M: Nupur, tum theek to ho...............(tapping her on her cheeks)

Blood is coming out of her head..............'. Mayank picks up the phone and tell Adhiraj to come to the hospital where he's taking Nupur...............


Scene: Hospital

Mayank is waiting outside the doctor's room.........

Then Doctor comes out'''.................

Doctor: Aaiye..mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai................

Mayank: Ji.chaliye'..................

In Doctor's room'.................

M: Ji ab Nupur ki halat kaisi hai'...................'.Nupur theek to hai na''??????

D: Ji mujhe issi bare mein aapse baat karni thi'...........'. Dekhiye abhi unki halat bohot nazuk hai'''.............. Abhi wo aur unka baccha...........

M: Kya............ Bachha.........

D: Ji mein yehi keh raha hoon...............she's pregnant..................aapko unka poori tarah se khyal rakhna hai...............

M: OMG........shit...................(thinking about that night's incident)

Adhiraj in the meanwhile entered the doctor's room and heard the whole conversation...............

Mayank sees that Adhiraj has heard everything and Adhiraj moves out in anger'......... Mayank goes behind him to clear up the confusion'...........

M: Meri baat suno'.............' Adhiraj''..............listen to me''............

A: Ab sunne ke liye kuch nahin bacha'.............. maine sab sun liya hai''...............'..

M: Par tum jo samajh rahe ho waisa kuch nahin hai''.................' mere Nupur ke beech kuch nahin hai''................' Tumhen meri baat par vishwaas nahin hai na................nupur ki baat par to hoga'..............'.. chalo mere saath''...............'Takes him to Nupur's room'...........

In the room Shilpa, Gunjan are sitting by Nupur and Uday is standing'..................

Mayu and adhiraj enter''.................

U: Ye toone theek nahin kiya Mayank...................''..(pushing him back ) takes him out of the room Adhiraj is also with him''....................

U: Ye bachha tera hai na Mayank............

M: meri poori baat to sun lo''.................

U: Maine tujhe apna dost samjha tha.............issliye apni behnon ko tujhse milaaya.........par mujhe nahin pata tha ki tu aisa karega''................Behla-phusla kar itni seedhi ladki ko phansa liya'.............'''

A: Mujhe to tum pehle se hi theek nahin lagte the'..............''

M: Ek minute shaant ho jaao aur meri poori baat to sun lo'''.................Ye bachha mera nahin Rannvijay ka hai'..........us din'..............

Uday interrupting'....................

U: Arre waah'............... jo ab is duniya mein hai nahin'..................us par apni kartooton ka ilzaam thop raha hai''.............Chala ja yahaan se'.............main teri shakal nahin dekhna chahta.............

Mayank tries to clear the confusion and moves out in disappointment'...............

In Nupur's room''............. Nupur crying on her bed'''................ Chachi'...............'aap log jo samajh rahe hain waisa kuch nahin hai''.................' mujhe khud nahin pata us raat aisa kaise ho gaya''................

Uday and Adhiraj enters in the room''..................

A: Nupur, main tumse aage koi rishta nahin rakhna chaahta'................'. (giving her the ring back) Main tumse shaadi nahin kar sakta............''..sorry.............

And he moves out.................Nupur is completely heart-broken...............crying''.............'

Uday follows Adhiraj'...............'. But he moves out in anger'''................

Whole atmosphere is very gloomy''.............in the evening Uday and Shilpa are in Doctor's room''...........

U: Ji humein Nupur ka abortion karwana hai''...............

D: Dekhiye''.............. Nupur ki haalat bohot complicated hai'''............... Abortion ki wajah se uski jaan ko bhi khatra ho sakta hai'''................

U: Par humein ye abortion karaana hai''............................

D: Ruk jaaiye''.................. main uska poora checkup karke aapko bataata hoon.........................''.

After checkup'.......'.he tells that agar Nupur ka abortion hua to wo mar bhi sakti hai''...........

In Nupur's room'' .......

U: Ma'.......... humein ye abortion karaana hi padega'........' aise kaise poori society mein.........'. Is bacche ka baap bhi apni galti nahin maan raha to hum kya haath par haath rakh kar baithe rahein'''............

S: Beta''. Thande dimag se kaam lo''..........Nupur ki haalat dekho''...........poori tarah se toot chuki hai''..............issme us bechaari ki kya galti hai'.................'. Hum hain uss ke saath phir chahe koi aur ho na ho''..............' Doctor kya hum Nupur ko apne saath ghar le jaa sakte hain ????

D: Ji '.............' sure '. She's fine now''.............

Now Nupur is back in the house'..............' Mayank comes to meet her..............and to clear up the confusion............

M: Kaisi ho Nupur.......... us din...............sab log..............itni misunderstandings..................

N: Koi baat nahin Mayank tum ne hamaare liye pehle hi itna sab kuch kiya hai............ Thank u.........aur.........haan.............bhaiya ki baat ka bura mat maan na........... wo kuch bhi samajhne ko taiyaar nahin hain...............

Then Uday arrives..............

U: Maine tujhse kaha tha na ki apni shakal mat dikhana..................... Jaa yahaan se..........

Mayank wants to speak but he thinks chup rehne mein hi bhalaai hai'..........and leaves.............'

Scene: College

Nupur comes to the college.............'''everyone is watching her strangely................''..Everyone knows about the incident''............' No one is talking to her''............ Wo jis se baat karne jaati hai...............'. Wo usse baat nahin karna chahta''............. same thing is with Mayank but he never cares about the world''............... But when he sees ..........that Nupur is crying and runs out of the college..............sits on a bench in the garden........Mayank comes running.........

Nupur is crying.......crying...........and ............crying.............

Mayank can't see her like that and goes and hold her hand and take her to the stage .......... Tears are coming out of her eyes she's wiping them off but still the tears are coming..............Mayank takes the mike from a student .................

M (announcing, very angry): Khabardar, jo kisi ne aage Nupur se kuch kahaa................ Nupur meri girlfriend hai aur hum kal sagaai kar rahe hain............. Aap logon ko koi problem''.......??????

Nupur looks up at Mayank's face............ tears are coming out of her eyes and she is stunned to hear what Mayank said............ Whole college becomes silent and Mayank moves out of the college holding her hand............

PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT
Edited by dakshaalg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwsome dear
im speechles
nice twist
thankz for bringing MAYUR together
do update soon
thankz for the pm sweety
luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
It seems is real story mera dil beats bc of the story I thought like wooooooooow how it's gonna end............
Love you expression and when I read the whole story like I gonna cry bc what's happen to nupur..............
Reallly What alovely FF Sirf Tum
Waiting for new updating

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