Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 81

Originally posted by: Navi_44

Mahak love the promo

update soon!!

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Mahak sweety,

Sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy for late comment dear.

I just manage my time now and at first read this part.

Oh my God it was awesome, awesome and awesome update as
usual

I have to repeat the same again and again-awesome , mind
blowing , fantastic ec etc.

Hey tune mujhe kabhi koi criticism ka mauka hi nahi deta.

Ok now come to ur
update-

At first mayur on dancing floor-

Oh they were dancing with full elegance just looking in each
other eyes,

Oh it was so lovely.

But after changing the partner –the stupid guy made Nupur
embarrassed

And then our hero mr. Mayank shrama came to rescue her.

Akhir hai to humara or nuour ka mayank0right

I loved his possessiveness about Nupur.

Oh in the flashback part u uses the lines of Paris.

U know what- these r my favorite lines.

After reading it I commented on paris that- u proved that our Mayank is a true gentle man.

And u use it in this part in a very nice way.

Yes u r right it was necessary to progress ur story line.

But uuuuuuuuuu nahiiiiiiiiiiii ye tune kya kiya.

U stopped it again at crucial point.

Oh no. I m crying.

But any way really really it was lovely , awesome, superb
update.

I just loved it.

Pata nehi or kitni bar mujhe ye sab kehna parega?

Tu hamesha itni acchi kyun likhti hai?

Now pls update next part soon.

Okkkkk I think thoda jaida bakbak hogaya.

So I m going to stop now.

Love u so muchhhhhhhhhh

are yaar.........

chalta hai..........

thanks a lot.........

tujhe koi kami nahi lagti..........

thanks........

wahi toh!

mayank hai na for nupur.........

i too wrote that...........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

tu kitni achi hai...........

har baar itne ache compliments deti hai.........

but i dont deserve them..........

and u r soooooooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!

thanks a ton!

jholi bhar ke thanks........

dil se thanks......

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

yeh!

I think I'm the 100th page person!

Wow, Nidzy and Faria wrote long reviews

this will be tough

I think

I have loads of homework

first day back to school

and already piled with homework

Paris did a really nice job

Hats off to her!

Maffi...

Fine!I forgive you

have to do something

will edit this in 10 min

EDIT

I have 15 minutes to get on india-forums

and then get off

see what I do is that

when I get a lot of homework

I do 30 minutes timing

so every 30 mintues,

I will work on homework

on different subjects..

okay, I'm getting off topic

amazing part

loved it

not a lot of romantic parts

but that was okay

okay sorry,

I blabbered more about myself than about your ff

just a few words to describe it (my sorry note)

awesome

amazing

mind-blowing

fantastic

wonderful

and sorry

I really need to get going

so this may seem long

but I was blabbering

so yeah

sorry!

thanks a lot.........

how sweet of u to say those words!

thanks..........

dil se thanks..........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

wow....that was soooooooo fabulous!!!!!
waitinggggg eagerly for the next part........

continue soon!!!!

and thanks for the pm

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

gr8 update

thanks a lot.........

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

<FONT color=#9933ff>Awesome part...</FONT>

<FONT color=#9933ff>Loved mayank possesiveness...</FONT>

<FONT color=#9933ff>Continue soon</FONT>

<FONT color=#9933ff>Waiting to read more...</FONT>

<FONT color=#9933ff>Take Care</FONT>

<FONT color=#9933ff>Zoya</FONT>

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: princess_52

hizzz hru
itss realy nice part
i love it
continue soon
love princess

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: samira-08

<FONT color=#330033>mahak love u sis it was nice update n i'm sorry 4 the late update sis thank u i'm waiting next part</FONT>

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: naina4MAYUR

awesum .....waiting 4 nxt update<br>

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy mahak

sorry for late comment

both 17 n 18 parts were really good

well m glad to know that its not gunjan because of whom mayur separtates

but will be waiting to know

n i guess the guy whom mayu punched was rv

n y u stoped here

but will be waiting for ur next update

thanx for the pm

its ok.......

i am happy that u loved the fact that it was not gunjan........

dont think abt the guy........

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........