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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#811

Originally posted by: prerna_agrawal
hey mahek....
sorry

sorry

sorry

and a big sorry

i wasn't able to comment on the last 2 parts n the promo!!......actually couldn't read them also coz i didn't know thatthey were updated!!.....i don't blame u for not not sending the pm.......silly me, my inbox was full!!!.....but now....i'll try to mend it!!!......i'll comment for all of them seperately!!

part-17

it was really good to see mayank still wanting a healthy friendship b/w him n gunjan!!......n couldn't understand gunjan's mind process....whether she's happy to see mayank married to nupur or not!!.....well mayank is so caring to nupur!!!!........

promo.....

it was really very passionate n romantic.....really want to read the complete part soon!!......u know it made me more excited!!

part-18

awesome update mahi.....loved the way mayank beat that fellow!!!....n then the way nupur tried to cheer him up!!.....n that "impotent" part that u borrowed from paris......that fitted so well...though i had read that before n had loved it but reading it again with ur stuff too made it more interesting....hats off to both of u!!!.......n omg mahak.....i'm feeling shy thinking what's coming up......u know getting those butterflies in my stomach......plzzzzz update soon!!....god!!! when on sunday will u update??? morning or evening??......plzz...u can see the impatience in me!!!.......

u know since so many days i was at my home....n now i've to go back to my college n hostel....n i'll reach back at the hostel on sunday only!!!......plzz.....update soon!!.....n don't forget to pm me!!

well after this comment i'm sure u r not still angry with me na??

its ohk.........

why?

didn't u got the pm?????

oh!

well it had once been the same thing with me too........

its ok.........

how sweet of u!

love u for that!

hmm...........well is kahani ko samajhna mushkil hi hai.......

how sweet!

i will update that soon........

mayank shud beat that fellow who misbehaved with nupur.........

i am happy that u liked my selection.......

and thanks.......

u r just shy for thinkng........

i am shy by writing!!!!!!!!

and i will update on sunday.......

i will try to do it in morning.......

oh!

so u have to go back to hostel.........

ohk......

for sure i will update it on sunday........

thanks a lot.........

thanks a ton!

i will continue soon.........

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#812

past-

then removes her hair pins and her hair fall down too….

He looks at her with that intense gaze and she gets up and then runs away to the window….

It was raining outside…but she does so....her dupatta fell off from her body...she shies......

present-

The doctor came to their cabin.....

Dr.- mr. mayank kapoor...please aap apne aap ko sambhaliye...aap tab se jab rahe hain and non stop ro rahe hain......agar aap isi tarah rote rahen....toh aapki tabyet kharab ho jayegi.....

Mayank- Dr. main kaise na roon? Woh meri wife hai ans she is unconscious....i love her doctor.....main uske bina nahi ji sakta hoon.....please aap use kuch bhi karke bacha lijiye......

Dr.- I can understand...par aap dheeraj rakhiye.....woh theek ho jayengi....ab woh pehle se behtar hain.....lagta hai bhagwan ne aapki sun li hai......she is getting normal......unke bachne ke chances badh rahe hain.....so maintain ur calm....

Mayank- toh ab mere jaane ka samay aa gaya hai.

hey friends.....please i wanna ask u all a vey important question.....since on sunday i have to update....i wanna ask u is that what would u like in the update? a romantic update only where only past is shown.....or an update which has both romance and some touching sad present scenes????

do tell me as soon as possible.....coz i have to write according to that only.....so i am waiting for your reviews.....

do comment.......

love,

Mahak

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Posted: 15 years ago

#813

heyyy mahi!!
gr8 promo...
but wotzz dis???
heyy..ok..i wud like a mix of present nd past!!

Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#814

Hey Mahak,
Awesome promo.
Loved the past scene.
And the present part was too good,
hey mahi i have different point of view.
I want romantic update only where past only shown
romantic happy happy update with sad moment -ye mujhe kuch jaida accha nehi lagega.
So choice is urs.
But i know whatever u update it will b a great one.
so i m not bother about it
Eagerly Waiting 4 ur update dear.
update asap

Edited by fariaa70 - 15 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#815

Mahak.. mein 1st kab aaoongi...???????😭😭😭 hmmm.. Pure Romance.. got it.. nothing but that.. 😉Romance ke baad saddness 😭😭😭poore update ko spoil kar dega.... So, you got ur answer.. ab jaldi kar.... time bahut kam hai tere paas...And I am really excited about the update...😛😛😛

Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago