Life in a movie(#2)-mayur - New thread link : pg 1 - Page 26

Wow seems quite interesting I am looking forward to the next part

hey i'm gonna read the parts dear

and then i'll post my comments on each part by part kk

dear

-sanam-

hey mahi

i finally got time to sit down and read the part and then comment on each, first and far most I'm realli sorry for being late . I hope you understand my position and don't be angry please kk. Okay wow i have missed alot of parts and need to comment on them, this is going to take alot of my time but its okay when it is something you love the time does not matter.Lets start from part 8, i have not read beyond that part.

Part 8

awwwwwwww my mayu crying, Hey mahi why are making him cry, i hate it when he cry, he onli looks good with his all top smile😃.aaww he was still holding nupurs hand while crying that was the sweetest part ever, only if nupur woke up, please nupur wake up.He is soo sweet he went to meet her but found out she was getting engaged🥺..........................but the best part i liked was that he realized he loved nupur and only that matters.Mahi janni amziing part i luved it like anything toooooooooooooo good.

this is how i feel exactly after reading this part😆😆😆

tooo good mahi , you are a fab writer👏👏👏

Part 9

Omgshh the poetry love itttttttttttt.....so true for his situation. hey mahi did u write it, cuz if u did *bow down to u*⭐️⭐️. Awsome mayank go and get your love nupur!!!!!!!!!!!!, but wat he met samrat...oh oh some trouble coming up i guess😲😲.aaaaaawwwwww poor mayu, his best friend is getting married to nupur, he can't break that marrige.........he is such a sweetheart😳...again love the shahyri...👏👏..........Good job mayank nupur is ur love, u need her not any1 else!!!!!!!!!!!! he proposed to her................u idiot accept why r standing their silently...............😲😲😲

amzing part mahi way to leave a person at a cliff hanger😆😆, i want to read moreeeeeee

i feel exactly liek this because of nupur!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-sanam-

Part 10

haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii main marjawan luved mayurssssssssss dailouge...............wish a guy wud say that to me, par its okay !!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆YIPEEEEEEEEEEE she said yes, join me in the dance if you please tooo. itna sweet scene hai i can't even describe my feelings, mahi you seriously know how to make a person feel beautiful!!!!!!!!!😳😳. Par present mein mayu cry kar raha and that is making me sadddd... That is awsoem that ppl understood the situation.......but samrat...........I guess he does have a right to be angry after all best friend!!! hello suppose to them everyhting!!!!!!!!!! poor guy feels hurt. aww sammy agreed how sweet. mayu climbed a pipe😆.... ANGEL.................kitna romantic hai mayu!!!😳😳😳. They got engaged , wonerful. I like where the story is going soo far..

i feel like cuddling u for writing an amzing part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, akhir dost kis ki hai.........* proud smile😃*

-sanam-

Part 11

that sweet how they live in the same flat but diff apartments😳. He asked for a date..how cute can they get mahi , you described the whole date scene soo well. the hug and he shyness aye haiiiiiiiii😳 He made her cry but what he said about her......kitna perfect hai mayank kash uske jaisa asal zindagi mein bhi koi hota kash..........ur shahyri always leave me smiling!!!😛 aye hai shahyri mein ek doosre ko reply de rahi hani kitna sweet haina dono!!!!!!!!!!😳😳

i feel so shy after reading the part, the temparature just keeps on imcreasing😆

-sanam-

part 12

THE KISS.omg they r going to kiss each other. kitna cute haina they r nervousness and excitment at the same same time😳. THEY KISSED !!!!!!!!!!!!! wohooooooooooooooooooo.........and wow for a long time too. it is ok ofcourse u r gonna feel shy after just having ur first kiss.😆😆. My god mahi tu na ur r making me senti by all of mayu dialouge he is just so perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!. after the movie completion the decided to get married, FINALLY.....awwwwwww how sweeeeeeeeeeet...........finally there marrige day is here. and they r nervous its okay bachon hota hai.😆😆😆

this is mayank and nupur, just perfect for each other!!!!!!!!!!!😳

-sanam-

woooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww mahi sweets congrats on the new thread so many congrats that i can't evne say it. Your ff is just to amzing and i'm gald ppl are reconizing it finally😳😳

i hope you get many more threads like these and continues getting moreeeeeeeeee and more and moreee

-sanam-

Part 14

their marrige day is here......wow the desciption of nupur and the moon , do you know how to write or what mahi!!!!!!!😲😲. it is just perfect. aww mayu could not look away and then they got married thank -godd🥳...................................... and then in their bedroom nupur was crying cuz she was missing her family awwwwwwwwwwwww mayu comforting her is just perfect!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏. I loved it how they both gave time to each and respected each others wishes soo sweet. he gifted her a necklace how cute😳

flowers for the pretty lady for writing a wonderful part!!!!!👏

-sanam-

Part 15

Hmmmmmmmm feeling kinda sad cuz its the last part that u have updated and i'm gona have to wait for u to update the other parts. okay now to the part awwww her magalsutar got stuck and mayu is being wayy too naughty at the moment😆😆. yes nupur please get up mayu needs u!!!!!!!!.. I have shivers running up and down afte reading this part. Mahi r u sure u r a bacchi ..i htink u have grown up sweety....I have soo many butterflies in my stomach after reading this part. great job

WOW finally done commenting on all the parts.....i feel like reading more par its okay i'll wait

Promo

ohhhhh soooooo gunjan back, cna't wait to find out the secret between them their past and what happened

do con't soon hun kkk

There i commented on all the parts i missed happy now smile😃😃😃

-sanam-

Originally posted by: aashizin

nice promo but still worried for gunjan please mayank ki sali hi use batana 😊

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

GRIPPING PROMO MAHEK.. ab naa bas Updt ka intezaar rahega... you know the way you write promo reminds me of a news reader.. bas abhi naam yaad nahi aa raha uss news reader ka😆<br>😆😆😆

Originally posted by: dakshaalg

Intezaar......Intezaar......Intezaar......Intezaar......Intezaar......mujhe teri update ka.............

w8ing 4 it eagerly........

I like twists............Gunjan.......... Mayank's what?????????