{...Beyond the limits...} - AR [Part27 - page 137] - Page 61

awesum part!!!!!!!👏celebration in the air!!!armaan is the owner of the empire now!!!!armaan has changed a lot he is respecting her now...and also feeling uneasy when she is not around!!!

Originally posted by: kajen

ohh armaan is finally feeling something for her

how beautifully u penned it im on top of world reading it

im sppechless

d feeling of being newly in love

hmmmm

i luvd d part

eager 2 rread d next 1

luv

aarti

OMG...i loved yer comment...thanks a lot..!!! yer comment made by day....! ill continue superrrr soon 😃

Originally posted by: cezzuprerna

<font size="2">awesum part!!!!!!!👏celebration in the air!!!armaan is the owner of the empire now!!!!armaan has changed a lot he is respecting her now...and also feeling uneasy when she is not around!!!</font>

<font size="2">tension in this ff?????armaan's behavior b4 marriage was enough tension....im getting scared...cant trust that guy.. "he devils opening their eyes inside him"😕.u mean army extra marital affair or sleepin with sumbody els or something like that??😲</font>

<font size="2">and muski confessed!!!!woaw!!!😳hoping to see more of RM in this ff!!</font>

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<strong><font size="2">cont soon and dont forget to PM me😳....</font>

<font size="2">and did i mention?I LOVE THIS FF😃</font>

Aww....lol, hahaha...thanks a lot, well for that ye'll have to keep readin buh it wont be something that clichd...!!! 😆 ill update superrr sooon...! luv yer comment.. 😃

Originally posted by: Caramel_21

hey suzanne

great part.. the tie scenes was cute..finally saw a feeling of concern for riddhima in armaan..good..good...enjoyable part to read..looking forward to the next part...and the next step in rahul-muskaan life...what's gonna happen now..

thanks for the Pm and continue soon..

luv Mel..

PS: I replied on time...

hiiii......i know i was smiling too when writin it up i was like....awwwww..lol, thanks a lot, i am glad ye liked it....well for that ye'll have to keep readin....hehe, ye did...no worries.. 😃

Originally posted by: choco_pie92

wow lovely part....now armaan should realize his feelings for riddhima...waiting 4 the next part eagely
update soon
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita

keeep readin.....ill update superrr soon....glad ye liked the update 😃

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

woww...so i just started reading your fan fic!! and i really love it! please continue soon and pm me when you do!!

thanks :)

glad ye liking it..!!!!! 😃 sureee...keep readin!

Originally posted by: arzu-k

<font size="5">wow he is in love u penned down so beautifully their feelings amazing waiting for update plzzzzzzzzkoi tension nahiii he cant change him overnight but his devilll plz control i dont want her to suffer </font>

lol, i am sooo happy ta see ye this desperate...lol, sorry....wont say it again...hehe, buh um gal dont worry...keep readin...there's lots coming up plus i wont update anything that is clichd 😆

Originally posted by: ksg_sonia

hey suzie

hahahahaha

first em gonna praise n then criticize

so be ready baby!

oki so praising cums firts! AWESOMELY WRITTEN! ther is no such specific scene of love making in the update but i just felt the sexiness, it was HOT! trhe way u write, it creates a special aroma, a sense of hottness!!! i just feel lyk em reading hot romance! lol! and well this part in particular, was brilliantly wirtten, everything was there, tension, nervousness, exzcitement, sweetness, irritation, friendship n the thought of losing it, hurt, pain, happiness, joy, a new change in armaan! it was amazing! and everything ws in the RIGHT place

hatrs off baby!

now cums the criticism n wht i want u to do in this fic now

well firstly, it shud've had some more xplanation of rahul n mukaan, she is taking tooo long to make up her mind, and additional rahuls character needs to be emphasized on so tht the readers can understand WHY muskaan has the confusion she has, coz till now em totally confused about rahuls character, is he a nyc guy? or a bad one? does he love muskaan? or not?

coming to armaan riddhima! they were perfect in this part but i cn sense sum problems in the future, pls dont do tht babe, i mean if u have any plans of armaan doing sumthing wrong to hurt riddhima in hawaai then plssssss dont do this, ridhdima has just started trusting him, they both need to finaly FALL IN LOVE tht is MUTUAL! plssss bring them together hnow, its been way tooo long n the friendship is builfing wid every passing day but wht about the LOVE factor? armaan needs to think abt her as his LOVE now! its high time i think for them to get together n not only behave as a couple but actually be a madly in love couple!

thts all i gotta say

luv ya

mwah

hahahaha...omg a BIG COMMENT....great...!!! lol, okie let me see
well thanks a lot for the comment firstly...omg i still cnt believe ye calling me a passionate writer...lol, ye felt the sexiness.....😆 cooooooooool...! i loved yer comment...glad ye loved it...

okie now to the criticism...omg ye are sooo right coz somewhere i felt this too...i was like yeah...i have ta pay attention in yer man's feelings too...like so far it has only been muskaan..like and some of rahul buh ye'll get to see lots in the next part...so no worries okie..!!! will put yer criticism into action....thank ye..!! 😃


once again i loved yer comment...keep readin desperately 😆

Originally posted by: Prinnia

<font color="#003333" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font size="4">hey Suzzane😃

sorry for late reply.....
this part was just supurb..😃
loved it
hope they will realize their love for eachother soon😳
keep continue
thanks for the PM

lots of love
prinz</font></font>😳

yer grand, no worries...keep readin!!!! i loved yer comment...!! oh ya for surreee, will continue superrr sooonn!