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Mona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#591

Hey Suz😊😊,

be ready for another big comment from me...lol....OMG i was so happy when i saw ur pm and i literealy ran to open up the site so i can finally read it...and now i m sad that it is over...cant wait to read more....sorry for being such a pain and always asking for more...so greedy me aint i???lol...ok so lets get to the update...OMG i dont know where to start from...ok let me see the begaining was so cute..they were trying to tie his tie for like more then five minute.....if armaan knew how to do it then why did he let ridz do it..lol..but that was cute of him...and ridz OMG that girl is crazy...why would she ask him to tie his tie for him wen she dont know how to do..??i mean i just dont get it.....and then at the end she messed it up..lol..but love that lil cutness of her...she is such a doll...and so happy to know that armaan didnt yell at her for messing up his tie..lo.l...that was nice of him....so finally armaan is the boss.....i loved the way he was looking at ridz every now and then to make sure she is ok...so caring of him.....so WHAT armaan is leaving to hawai for two days...i hope he dont do something there that will updaste ridz...i hope he comes back to her normal..lol...and i m really disapointed in rahull...i dont know what he is in this FF..??i mean that guy is so confused....he dont know wether he likes muski or not and is keep hurting her feeings....i hope RM's sotry progres as wel...and rahul understand muski's importance in his lyfe.......i so love ridz in this FF..she is like the best wife a guy can get i mean she i PERFECT...she is good looking,smart,caring and what more can u want....armaan is hell luck to have her i hope he realize her importance in his lyfe because i can see that he is depengin way to much on her...but that is so cute..i loved the way he got a lil scared on not seeing ridz around him..yeye that is a signle that he is falling for her....ohhh cant wait to see how ridz will spend this two days and what she will so once he get back....specially cant wait to read armaan's reaction on staying away from ridz...so how do u like this comment???is it good enough...so lets compliment the writer now..lo...the update was well planne and organize like always...very well written.....keep up the good work hun and do ur best in update ASAP...cant wait to read more so update soon and thankx so much for the PM....take care..

Thank You😊

❤️MONA

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suzanne

@suzzane14

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Posted: 15 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.
<p align="center">Hey Suz😊😊, </p>
<div align="center">be ready for another big comment from me...lol....OMG i was so happy when i saw ur pm and i literealy ran to open up the site so i can finally read it...and now i m sad that it is over...cant wait to read more....sorry for being such a pain and always asking for more...so greedy me aint i???lol...ok so lets get to the update...OMG i dont know where to start from...ok let me see the begaining was so cute..they were trying to tie his tie for like more then five minute.....if armaan knew how to do it then why did he let ridz do it..lol..but that was cute of him...and ridz OMG that girl is crazy...why would she ask him to tie his tie for him wen she dont know how to do..??i mean i just dont get it.....and then at the end she messed it up..lol..but love that lil cutness of her...she is such a doll...and so happy to know that armaan didnt yell at her for messing up his tie..lo.l...that was nice of him....so finally armaan is the boss.....i loved the way he was looking at ridz every now and then to make sure she is ok...so caring of him.....so WHAT armaan is leaving to hawai for two days...i hope he dont do something there that will updaste ridz...i hope he comes back to her normal..lol...and i m really disapointed in rahull...i dont know what he is in this FF..??i mean that guy is so confused....he dont know wether he likes muski or not and is keep hurting her feeings....i hope RM's sotry progres as wel...and rahul understand muski's importance in his lyfe.......i so love ridz in this FF..she is like the best wife a guy can get i mean she i PERFECT...she is good looking,smart,caring and what more can u want....armaan is hell luck to have her i hope he realize her importance in his lyfe because i can see that he is depengin way to much on her...but that is so cute..i loved the way he got a lil scared on not seeing ridz around him..yeye that is a signle that he is falling for her....ohhh cant wait to see how ridz will spend this two days and what she will so once he get back....specially cant wait to read armaan's reaction on staying away from ridz...so how do u like this comment???is it good enough...so lets compliment the writer now..lo...the update was well planne and organize like always...very well written.....keep up the good work hun and do ur best in update ASAP...cant wait to read more so update soon and thankx so much for the PM....take care..</div>
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<div align="center">Thank You😊</div>
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<div align="center">❤️MONA</div>

😆 HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...okie...omg yer comment like cracked me up....gal ye win again...!! so let me see...realli i am glad i am makin ye desperate...no i mean my ff..lol, hehe, yer grand..yer grand...i mean the fact that ye wait eagerly to read dem updates is just so pleasing that i feel like i am actually doing good..😃 i know i was smiling too when writing up the part i was like awww....hope i was in ridzi's place....goshhhh would give my everything away to be at her place in his arms... 😳 oh wait....lol here i go off the tangent once again...uff..okie...i know see thats what she was cursing herself for...she helped em when he didnt need it and he was letting her help too....lol, thats why he was glaring at her..hehe, i know...keep readin...there's lots coming up...loved yer comment so much..i cant stop thinkin about it...haha...thanks a lot for all em sweet words ye said...and plz dont thank me for the pms...coz they are nathin compared to dem amazing comments ye post..!!! 😃

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Mona

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Posted: 15 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: suzzane14

😆 HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...okie...omg yer comment like cracked me up....gal ye win again...!! so let me see...realli i am glad i am makin ye desperate...no i mean my ff..lol, hehe, yer grand..yer grand...i mean the fact that ye wait eagerly to read dem updates is just so pleasing that i feel like i am actually doing good..😃 i know i was smiling too when writing up the part i was like awww....hope i was in ridzi's place....goshhhh would give my everything away to be at her place in his arms... 😳 oh wait....lol here i go off the tangent once again...uff..okie...i know see thats what she was cursing herself for...she helped em when he didnt need it and he was letting her help too....lol, thats why he was glaring at her..hehe, i know...keep readin...there's lots coming up...loved yer comment so much..i cant stop thinkin about it...haha...thanks a lot for all em sweet words ye said...and plz dont thank me for the pms...coz they are nathin compared to dem amazing comments ye post..!!! 😃

ha ha ha....here we go again with the u comment andi comment and then u comment again and i comment again..lol...lets keep this simple..lol...ok so let me see where should i start from...ok....i m glad that my comment always makes ur day..i like to make peoplle happy..lol....what u mean u feell u r actully doing good??because u r NOT doing good???u r doing GREAT..lol....i totally love ur FF...u do seriously makes me depspret for more and more....cant wait to see ur PM in my PM box again..lol...oh come on i got to thank u for u sending me the pm because that is how i know wen to read the FF update...lol...i know right that tie secen was totally cute....true that i would do anything to be in his arms too...doing get made at ur self for loosing ur seld in armaan's dream girl u aint alone in it...so i m there to keep u company..lol...so ya thankz 4 ur lovely comment it really makes me happy....and update ASAP...take care....

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❤️MONA

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Somebody

@BebaakBegum

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#594

ohh armaan is finally feeling something for her

how beautifully u penned it im on top of world reading it

im sppechless

d feeling of being newly in love

hmmmm

i luvd d part

eager 2 rread d next 1

luv

aarti

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@debby_11

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Posted: 15 years ago

#595

wow lovely part....now armaan should realize his feelings for riddhima...waiting 4 the next part eagely
update soon
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita

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angullgrl91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#596

woww...so i just started reading your fan fic!! and i really love it! please continue soon and pm me when you do!!

thanks :)

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arzoo

@arzu-k

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#597

wow he is in love u penned down so beautifully their feelings amazing waiting for update plzzzzzzzzkoi tension nahiii he cant change him overnight but his devilll plz control i dont want her to suffer

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#598

hey suzie

hahahahaha

first em gonna praise n then criticize

so be ready baby!

oki so praising cums firts! AWESOMELY WRITTEN! ther is no such specific scene of love making in the update but i just felt the sexiness, it was HOT! trhe way u write, it creates a special aroma, a sense of hottness!!! i just feel lyk em reading hot romance! lol! and well this part in particular, was brilliantly wirtten, everything was there, tension, nervousness, exzcitement, sweetness, irritation, friendship n the thought of losing it, hurt, pain, happiness, joy, a new change in armaan! it was amazing! and everything ws in the RIGHT place

hatrs off baby!

now cums the criticism n wht i want u to do in this fic now

well firstly, it shud've had some more xplanation of rahul n mukaan, she is taking tooo long to make up her mind, and additional rahuls character needs to be emphasized on so tht the readers can understand WHY muskaan has the confusion she has, coz till now em totally confused about rahuls character, is he a nyc guy? or a bad one? does he love muskaan? or not?

coming to armaan riddhima! they were perfect in this part but i cn sense sum problems in the future, pls dont do tht babe, i mean if u have any plans of armaan doing sumthing wrong to hurt riddhima in hawaai then plssssss dont do this, ridhdima has just started trusting him, they both need to finaly FALL IN LOVE tht is MUTUAL! plssss bring them together hnow, its been way tooo long n the friendship is builfing wid every passing day but wht about the LOVE factor? armaan needs to think abt her as his LOVE now! its high time i think for them to get together n not only behave as a couple but actually be a madly in love couple!

thts all i gotta say

luv ya

mwah

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Robin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#599

i really liked this part, cant wait for more!

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Aviator

@Mrs.Hulk

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Posted: 15 years ago

#600

hey Suzzane😃

sorry for late reply.....
this part was just supurb..😃
loved it
hope they will realize their love for eachother soon😳
keep continue
thanks for the PM

lots of love
prinz😳