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Hey that was lovely part i just simply loved it.
Awaiting for the next part do continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi...

lovely update.....

but really curious to know that how does cupid strikes armaan....

do continue soon.....

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Originally posted by: devilshangel

Hey that was lovely part i just simply loved it. thank u so much
Awaiting for the next part do continue soon. i'll definately continue soon
Nd thx for the pm

ur welcome, n thanks for the comment
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Hey guys, i am back with another part. I wanna thank all of you for the wonderful comments. I've hopefully replied to all of you.

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Recap - I started twirling with him as the music started. Instead of allowing him to take the lead, i myself took the lead and he was forced to match his moves to mine. Shock was written all over his face, but he soon composed himself and started following me. Now it was my turn to be shocked. He seemed to dance with so much ease, so well and refined and polished. Perhaps a little bit more than dad, but just little bit, ok? I knew it that he was following me, but no one else cud tell that. According to the other people, this was a well synchronised dance, participation from both the sides. People had stopped dancing just to watch our dancing and chemistry. I knew this had to stop, but how, was my question. God just answered my prayers again, and a fast song took place of the slow song. People started dancing, and i was again pulled away.
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PART 8

"Oow Abhi, slowly, it hurt"

"So, shud i send u there again?"

"I didnt mean that, its just that u cud've been more gentle, u totally stretched my arm, as if its plastic"

"Yeah plastic my foot. Had i been a second late, that ogre wud have been claiming u again. I mean i was just a little late earlier, hello, i was getting us drinks. And cudnt Nikki stop him somehow, i'd asked her to keep him at a distance from u, but looks like she was lost in her lala land again. I'll have a 'nice talk' with her after the party. And that Mallik, I dont get what is his problem. Why cant he just leave u alone? Didnt he hurt u already enough, that he's doing it again. By the way, what did he say?"

"Nothing, just that.....WAIT, How do u know?"

"Cut the crap Ree, just tell me!!!"

Oh oh, this is the warning bell, 'Ree' it is. Abhi only calls me Ree when he's really pissed off. And now was one of the moments when i wont even try to oppose him. Its better to give him what he wants in order to keep urself in one piece. So i told him what had happened back there, and i cud see disapproval clearly written all over his face. Thankfully, he chose not to comment on my feelings and reactions for Armaan.

"I am not leaving you until the party gets over, (he silenced me as i was abt to protest), and even after the party, i am leaving only after u are safely home. And if i feel suspicious of him, i'm spending the night at ur place. I dont trust ur security guards at all"

Well, now i knew Abhi wud be sleeping, no actually, he'll be guarding my place tonight. Knowing Abhi and his suspicions, i was sure that even if he himself loaded Armaan in a fully packed and closed box and delivered it to Antarctica, still Abhi wud think tht the next person to ring the door bell would be Armaan. So i mentally prepared myself for all the security measures i wud be bombarded with once i reach home.

"Stop calculating Riddhu, u know i am gonna make sure u r allright, so, whats the use of getting all this tensed right now"

I wud be fighting a losing battle if i argued, the worst part being, i was aware of this fact. Sometimes i wondered if God had brought Abhi n Nikki together only to boss over me. But then, i did not forget to thank him for these amazing gifts of my life.

After dancing for a few minutes, Nikki also joined us since the music was fast and people were dancing as groups rather than couples. I danced a bit over excitidly, to avoid Abhi coming closer to Nikki. I knew the 'Nice Talk' he had planned for her, but i certainly didnt want other people to know. I cudnt stop him from having his share of talk, but i cud atleast save Nikki from being embarassed in front of everyone. When alone, i knew he wud scold her a bit and immediately appologise in every possible romantic way, but that wud not happen here. So it was better to keep them away. After dancing a lot, we moved to the food counter. Nikki received an urgent call from her office, and she rushed off immediately. Her foreign models had just arrived and she was required there to instruct them. Abhi and i were left wondering over what stupid models wud come, and how we wud make them fight the IQ competition against each other, and how each one of them wud lose badly against Anjie. This was our favourite time pass, to trouble Nikki's models, and then appologise for our silly behaviour. According to us, all the models have a zero IQ, and, Anjie was an exception. After bidding our byes to everyone, i jumped into Abhi's car and we sped off to home. (Hey people, author's note: plz dont take the comment abt models seriously, it was added just to add a bit laughter, coz i personally believe models have higher iq than other people, lol)

We reached my place, right now a small appartment near the club where i practice. I stay here when i have an early morning practice the next day, moreover, i love this place. Its just next to the sea, and also close to the park where i go for jogging. Evening walks along the beach are awesome. Abhi parked his car, and after making sure that there was no way anyone cud enter the room without my permssion, he moved off to instruct the security guards. Although dad had allowed me to buy this place, still he had been worried abt me. So he had appointed two of his trustworthy people, Jack and Mack as my bodyguards. They always follw me wherever i go, but, in another car, and from a distance. (Dont worry, dad is not partial, he's also placed Rambo and Mambo for Nikki). After feeling a bit satisfied with his arrangements, Abhi went and dozed off in his room. Yes, although it is small, the place still has different rooms for each one of us, one for Nikki, one for Abhi, one for me, one for dad, and two guestrooms, very small, Right??? Lol! I also went to sleep, oblivious to the blue-grey eyes outside my house.


Armaan hadnt wanted to come to the party, but chhoti maa had advised him to come here. He loved her just as he wud have loved his mom, and respected her a lot. He always felt bad when his grandpa wud insult her the whole day, just becoz his chachu had married her against the wishes of his parents and she belonged to a middle class family. Armaan hated this scene which was a part of everyday drama. He had lost his parents and his chachu and chachi (uncle and aunt) had taken him under them. They both had loved him just as they loved Rahul. This was the reason he hadnt told them abt the fight which had separated him from Rahul. Rahul also seemed to know it, and hence acted normally in front of their family. Also, Rahul looked after their family business, in which Armaan had 50% shares, and ocassionally helped him. Rahul talked to him abt business only when they were alone, and nothing else. Armaan missed his older cousin, but he knew nothing cud put them together again. But he was happy when he came to know that Rahul was serious abt some Muskaan girl. Finally his hard work had paid.

Armaan had noticed that grandpa's behaviour towards chhoti ma had changed since the past few days. He was still trying to figure out the reason. But he was happy for her, and since he cud never say no to her, he had agreed to come here. The party was really boring. He was trying to avoid an old girlfriend of his, when he suddenly bumped into someone. The person fell on top of him, and he was lost in the beauty of the angel who'd fallen on him. Her face had been of an angel, every feature of which spoke only of beauty. Such smooth milky white skin, dark black long hair, falling everywhere, and as if it was less, she opened her tightly shut eyes. He was now lost in those big angelic green-hazel eyes. Time seemed to stop for him just there. He realised that she had placed her hand on his heart, and he immediately felt connected to her. Her shallow and fast hot breaths on his face created a magic. He admired her beauty again and again, and only came out of his own world when she shouted something loud in his ear, and he asked her, still lost and confused.

"Huh, u said sumthing, to me.....'

I've no idea what did she say next. I just remember that the face was familiar to me. I was trying to recall who was she, when she moved away with someone. He**, i dont even know if she has left the party. Thats when i remember, and mutter to myself,

"Riddhima"

I recall her, oh, correction, i never forgot her. She is the reason i have lost my most important relation. I remember, even before i had entered the school, Rahul had introduced me to Riddhima. Not in person, but he always talked only abt her. He had come to take me from my place, and all along the journey there was just 'Ridzi this, Ridzi that' etc. I had already started to hate her, coz she was all over Rahul. And to add to it, she was the best at everything in the school. All the guys loved her, and girls were jealous of her, but none of them showed it. Out of my prejudice, i challenged her ability to become the sports captain. She was an exception of the girl kind, different from the girls i'd met. She had been exceptionally fast to catch the ball i'd thrown at her, the 1st time we'd met. She looked like a modern day cool angel sitting there with tht guy, busy in her discussion. I now realised the reason why all guys loved her and girls felt jealous. She was extremely pretty for a girl, and amazingly friendly with all the guys. She was a perfect girl, perfect in everything. I'd wanted her attention to shift to me, and the best way was, challenge her. So i'd put her to play my 3 favourite games with me. No wonder she was pretty, beautiful actually, but i wanted to test if all what Rahul had said was true. She had been really quick to accept all the 3 games, even kick boxing. She had amazed me at the day of the kick boxing match, just by being present there. After the match had finished, i saw her turning away, i guess she was looking at someone in my direction. I saw her take the bottle full of water, and instead of drinking it, she put some of it on her face. I envied every single drop that fell off her face, which had the oppurtunity of being in contact with her skin. Suddenly i saw her splash some of the water on her friends standing nearby. I was mesmerized by the sound of her laughter. That was when Shubhankar sir's voice broke my trance and i realised what i had been thinking. I tried to throw her away from my mind and listen to the results. She'd just lost the match by 1 point. I had been shocked to see that she didnt seem upset at all. Instead she congratulated me, i felt ecstatic, but to hide my feelings, i said,

"Save ur congrats for later, when i become the Captain"

I walked away with a smile of triumph, and waited for the next match. I was sure she wud practice simple moves, as she was unaware of the game. I knew all this, thanks to Rahul who'd earlier told me tht Riddhima didnt look after the bb team. So, i had planned to play a one on one game with her, and, she had been shocked, i cud see. The game began and she was losing badly, but after that stupid interruption by Nikita and those people, i dont know what happened. Next thing i knew was that she had won the game. I still dont know how all this had happened. That day again, she congratulated me. I was abt to congratulate her too, but i saw Rahul and her other friends all hugging her. I dropped the thought and went away. I was happy in the corner of my heart, for her victory.

Next day was my tennis match. Before the match had started i heard some students in the changing room.

"Do u know yesterday everyone was their at Nikki's party, she'd thrown it for Riddhima"

"Yeah, i heard it, all those invited were telling it was great"

"Nikki's already announced to her friends abt the party tonight, she's sure Riddhima will win"

"Even Rahul is invited"

"Do u think there's something between Rahul and Riddhima"

"I dont know, maybe yes. What i dont get is tht why does Nikita always throws parties for Riddhima, she even pays Riddhima's bills, like canteen bills, library and any other contributions we have to make"

"Dont know, Nikita may have lots of money to flaunt around for Riddhima, anyways............"

This was enough for me, Rahul had always told me that he was only friends with Riddhima, but now everything seemed clear to me. Riddhima was a greedy girl, who lived on other's expenses, and maybe she liked Rahul, i guess not. No, Rahul had fallen for a gold digger, and i had to do something. I kept denying that the actual thing that angered me was tht Riddhima liked Rahul, and not me. I didnt want to admit tht i'd also fallen for her charms and her personality and her beauty and her nature, and everything abt her. Resultingly, i played the match feeling angry as well as hurt at the same time, but i still lost. When i saw her with Rahul, i swear i cud murder someone then and there. That's when i decided that i wud separate her from Rahul. Although i said tht all what i'll do was for Rahul's good being, but actually i didnt want Rahul to have her if i cudnt.
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Hey all, i guess thats it for the day. I've given u all an insight of Armaan's story. You all have been asking me why did he do all wht he did, well here's the answer. I dont know whether Armaan is wrong or right, but i've written what i felt at that moment.
I'll be waiting for replies as well as like button pressed.

PS - This was a long update, hopefully, and i hope now i'll be exempted from an early update, coz i have started attending my pre-board practicals. I wont get much time but i'll post an update as soon as possible. I'll need a good time for my writing the further story. Hope u all understand.

loads of love
pooja



Edited by kweetrockstar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey great chapter

Had so much fun reading it

Thanks a lot

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Posted: 15 years ago

Sorry for the dpouble post .

Edited by nihakapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow dear the part was great . How ould arm think ridz as a gold digger 😡 Is he still unaware of ridz and nikki's relationship ? Do cont soon and thanks for the pm .
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi pooja.......

wonderful updae....... and a much awaited one........

armaan reaching to conclusions on impulse.......... so he ruined his valued relation......

neyways........ he ll make up rite........

do continue soon.......

thanks for the pm

bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey
great part!!
thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey pooja di....grt part.....luved it ....do cont soon...
wid luv
radhika

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