weekend with rahul-muskaan 37!!

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pari

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Posted: 15 years ago

#381

ha shilpz di u cont plz!!!!!!!!

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#382

haha, i was gonna ask you too pari

but its shilps turn now!! 😉😆

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pari

@pari_smile

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Posted: 15 years ago

#383

sab i already wrote yest so now shilpz di

if she is not busy

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428279

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Posted: 15 years ago

#384

yeah pari, thats why i asked shilps to continue!

hopefully she can write, if she's busy then just a small part! =)

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Namrata_12

@Namrata_12

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Posted: 15 years ago

#385

awww cuute part sab =)

whos continuing now?

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sweet.melody

@sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#386

OMG Guys.. were you waiting for me? 🤔
Sorry.. i cant write atm.. will try later for sure! Like maybe before I sleep..

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sweet.melody

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Posted: 15 years ago

#387

"Aap kaha chali Mrs.Garewal?" says Rahul looking straight at Muskaan, her face so close to his, she was blushing.

Rahul slowly brings up Muskaan's hand to his lips and places a gentle kiss on it.

Muskaan looks down shyly blushing, not able to make eye contact with Rahul.

Rahul slowly moves Muskaan's hair aside, placing soft kisses on Muskaan's neckline.

Muskaan's breathing is getting heavier and heavier by the minute.

As Rahul looks at Muskaan's face, he sees her eyes closed, and Muskaan totally lost.

"Muskaan" whispers Rahul softly.

Muskaan slowly opens her eyes to see Rahul's warm hazel eyes in front of her, she could see utmost love for her in those eyes.

"Gosh, she is gorgeous" Rahul thinks to himself, getting lost in Muskaan.

Rahul slowly inches closer to Muskaan, Muskaan getting worried starts backing away.

"Rahul tum.." Muskaan says trying to back away from Rahul, but Rahul just has a dreamy look on his face and keeps walking ahead.

Soon enough Muskaan finds herself in between the wall and Rahul.

Rahul is just getting closer and closer to her lips, Muskaan closes her eyes.

Not feeling anything Muskaan opens her eyes to not find Rahul in front of her.

"Rahul" says Muskaan calling out for him.

She looks all around the house.

"Muskaan" she hears Rahul's mum call her.

"Jee aayi" Muskaan says leaving her search for Rahul, and going to Rahul's mummy ji.

It is night time now, Muskaan has been with Rahul's mummy ji the whole day, as she wanted to talk to her bahu.

After a long day, Muskaan heads upto their room. As she looks around the room wondering where Rahul must have gone, she sees a sticky on the dresser mirror. It says "Mujhe dhoond rahi ho? Terrace pe aajao" Love your husband!

Muskaan smiles at the sticky, smiling to herself, she makes her way up the staircase to the terrace.

"Rahul??" she asks questioningly looking around for Rahul as she enters the terrace.

Walking in more, as she is looking around for Rahul, she feels a stron grip on her wrist.

"Rahul tum kaha the??" Muskaan asks turning around.

"Kyu mujhe miss kiya?" Rahul asks with a naughty smile.

"Ha.. haan.. woh tum.. kuch kar rahe the.. aur gayab ho gaye"

"Kya kar raha tha??" Rahul asks winking.

"Umm.. woh.." Muskaan looks down not able to answer what he was trying to do.

Rahul pulls Muskaan to himself.

He slowly pulls out a small box out of his pocket.

"Muskaan yaha dekho"

Muskaan shyly looks up at him.

"Apne aakhein band karo"

"Kyuu??" Muskaan says worried what was playing in Rahul's mind.

"Bas, band toh karo!"

Muskaan closes her eyes, but she is still worried.

She feels Rahul's warm breath on her ears, as Rahul softly puts a jhumka for Muskaan.

"Rahul mere liye?" Muskaan says shyly.

"Nahi, padosi ke biwi ke liye, tum pe sirf try kar raha tha"

"Kyaa???"

"Meri buddhu, ofcourse, aur kis ke liye lunga, tu na jhalli hai"

Muskaan pushing off Rahul walks to the egde of the terrace, looking over the railing at the view ahead.

She feels two strong arms wrap around her waist, as Rahul rests his head on Muskaan's shoulder.

"Chand aaj kitna khoobsurat hai na" says Muskaan looking up at the night sky.

"Hmm.. par mere chand se jyaada nahi" Rahul says kissing Muskaan on the cheek.

"Rahul!! kisine dekhliya toh"

"Toh.. sochenge wah wah, yeh patni apni biwi se kitna pyaar karta hai"

"Tum bhi na Rahul"

"Mai bhi na kya?" Rahul says turning Muskaan around, so that she is facing him.

"T.. Tum" says Muskaan.. the close proximity always causes her to lose her words.

Rahul slowly moves forward, this time Muskaan closes her eyes but she moves forward towards Rahul, it just felt right.

As their lips met, both of them felt like they were in heaven, it felt blissful and soo right.

As they pulled out of the kiss, Muskaan looked down feeling awkward.

Rahul picks her up in his arms taking her back to the room.

Edited by ibdt2004 - 15 years ago

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Imane

@accountband

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Posted: 15 years ago

#388

OMG!! guys...
This is like so AMAZING!!!
Each and Every part is soo GOOD!!!
You guys are like so talented!!!
Loved the entire "Arranged Marriage" Theme and now they are REALLY turning this in to a "Love Marriage"....... It's ADORABLE...Sooo Cute
All the writers are exceptional in respective ways...Amazing depiction of emotions and word choice...Totally made my DAY!!!
Someone SHOULD MOST DEFINITELY continue sooon....i am loving this...! Rahul and Muskaan should play this theme on screen...it would be a DREAM come true...It's so romantic...Loved the "fine" lolzz...Okay gotta go but will be back to read up on the lovely couple...