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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: surbhi123
no need of thanks . it as nice waise . you really write well .

thanks.........

thanks for thinking that it was nice.......

i think its the worst os written by me......

and i swear not to write anything like this...........

next time........

i feel ashamed of myself.........

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

thanks.........

thanks for thinking that it was nice.......

i think its the worst os written by me......

and i swear not to write anything like this...........

next time........

i feel ashamed of myself.........

your are feeling ashame bacause of my comment . sorry dear , i never want to hurt you . you are very dear to me . sorry once again😭

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Awwwww mahak,

At first I m really very very sorry for late comment.

Dear u r amazing writer.

It was tooooooo goooooooood.

I loved nups point of view.

She was absolutely right.

I loved that lines-

Kal ko hamari shaadi ke baad tumne kabhi bhi sharab peekar
kisi aur ladki ke saath yahi kiya to?

And then – I also loved

there is a difference between love and lust.....and lust
is not love....and the person who just wants ur
body can never become ur
soulmate.....this is my thinking....

Thnx a lot dear for writing such a nice shot.

I loved it from the core of my heart.

And u know what- I felt very sad 4 nups.

And It was very difficult 4 me to imagine maynak in that way.

Pls next time don't
show my Mayank in that way .

Any way fabulous job sweety.

Keep it up

its ok faria......

late hai to kya?

kam se kam hai to na.......

thanks.....

it was actually my point of view.......

wahi toh!

main toh yahi sochti hoon......

is poori kahani mein nupur ki soch meri soch thi........

thanks for loving my lines........

thanks for loving it from the bottom of ur heart......

now i am more than happy for it.....

i know!

but i didnt had any choice!

i had to make mayank do that!!!!!!

but next time i wont show him like this........

thank.........

i will try to keep up to ur expectations........

i am now very happy........

atleast u liked it.........

pata nahi aditi ko kaisa lagega?

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: surbhi123
your are feeling ashame bacause of my comment . sorry dear , i never want to hurt you . you are very dear to me . sorry once again😭

nahi.......

i feel ashamed kyunki aaj tak maine aisa stuff nahi likha hai......

u haven't hurt me......

u r very dera to me too........

i feel ashamed that maine ismein itna romance kyun daala?????????

kyun?

kyun?

kyun?????

that's it......

teri vajah se kuch nahi hua hai...........

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surbhi tyagi

@EtherealRati

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

nahi.......

i feel ashamed kyunki aaj tak maine aisa stuff nahi likha hai......

u haven't hurt me......

u r very dera to me too........

i feel ashamed that maine ismein itna romance kyun daala?????????

kyun?

kyun?

kyun?????

that's it......

teri vajah se kuch nahi hua hai...........

please dont feel ashame dear . itne logo ko ye ff itna pasand aaya hain . mujhe bhi last acha laga . i toptally agree with nupur . its ok dear

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Bhavana Bhaskar

@bhavana92

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#226

hey, this was awesome!a truly unique OS....the way u differentiated between true love & lust was marvellous!👏 tho this OS had a sad ending, itz nice 2 read a realistic story 4 a change.....totally luved it!👍🏼

Bhavana

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd
really nice update..........but why mayank like that.................he really don't love's her.............or just he was drunk..................

Do............Con..............soooon.............

thanks.....

mayank is like that.......

he doesn't love her........

or else he should have control over his feelings........

so what if he was drunk?????

does that mean that he could do anything??????

what if he does the same thing with another girl while he was drunk.....

what will nupur do then?????????

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#228

hey!!

first of all, I am 18. 😆

anyways, it was an awesome one shot...really well written.

but I wanted to put my opinion in front of you. well, I know there is a difference between love and lust. but I believe, after a certain time, lust becomes a part of love. if a boy only wants a girl physically, then that is obviously lust....there is nothing called love in that relationship. but here the case is different. mayank and nupur were going to get married, that means they are at least 24-25 years old. and at this age, phsical relationship becomes necessary for a relatioship...only platonic love is not enough then. and I believe physical relationship a way of showing love......its not just lust. mayank loved nupur and that day, he just got carried away. it wasn't like he didn't love her, he just wanted to show his love physically. I think there is nothing wrong with that and moreover mayank and nupur were already engaged. so, the chances of mayank cheating on nupur was less. culture, sanskaar are fine.....but we cant deny the fact that after a certain age, everyone needs it. yes, when mayank said that if nupur didn't submit herself to him physically, then he wouldn't marry him...that was not right. and I would have done the same thing nupur did. but next day, when mayank was saying sorry, nupur should have forgiven him. after all, mayank was drunk that day, nupur should take that into consideration.

this is completely my viewpoint. I absolutely respect your opinion.

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#229

i have to give you standing ovation for making this OS on such a sensible topic !!!

you dont know how much i value nupur character in this OS!!

i also hate all this before marriage! in fact i am completely against it !!
romance is fine,but within the limits....

i remember when i wrote the promo for my "unforgettable stay with you" chapter in my ff, the promo was misleading and showing mayank nupur in same bed,you were the first one to comment and showing your alertness that this was wrong as they were not married yet ! trust me mahak i got so happy to read your post then !!

i think if you love and especially respect your partner,then if not this hard for guys to keep control over their desires...they might get carried away in the beginning of the relationship but if they realize its wrong and agree on it then no matter how much then romance,they know they will be comfortable enough without crossing the limit.

once again ,beautiful OS,good lesson was taught !!!

(ps/i also dont believe in love at all ! i knw its surprising as compare to my ff...)

Edited by parisbynight - 15 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: bhavana2692
hey, this was awesome!a truly unique OS....the way u differentiated between true love & lust was marvellous!👏 tho this OS had a sad ending, itz nice 2 read a realistic story 4 a change.....totally luved it!👍🏼 Bhavana

thanks......

i am happy that u loved it......

yup i tried to differentiate between love and lust........

yes it had a sad ending.....

kyunki zindagi mein har baar happy endings nahi hoti hai.........

thanks for liking it.......

yes it is realistic........

thanks for loving it........

it means a lot to me........

thanks.....