U Are Mine(Mayur ff) last part pg 131 - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago
wowww really cool.nice update hun.plzz continue soon...🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys thanks 4 ur comments. well i thought i will update now on saturday. bt Anshika ordered me to update soon so thats why i m updating now... look Anshika this is 4 u........😉


Part 6

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Benji n Samrat were waiting 4 mayank to come anxiously........
benji was moving to n fro
B: ye mayank aa kyon nahi raha.........
S: dont worry aata hi hoga
B: lekin kab
S: tm aik kaam karo jaldi se aik glucose ka glass bana k laao..........
B: tmhe energy ki kyon zarorat hai.........
S: mujhy nahi dude lekin mayank ko zaror ho sakti hai(winked at him).........jao jaldi
benji turned to go bt sammy said him
S: aur haan first aid box bi le aana
B: ab wo kiss liye
S: mayank k liye for sure............zarorat par sakti hai

they were waiting 4 mayank.......benji was sitting on couch with 1st aid box in one n glass of glucose in other hand.......suddenly door opened with jerk
in which state mayank came in both benji n samrat were dumbstruck
his shirt was out of his jeans....some buttons of shirt were disappeared.....bouquet of flowers was still in his hand.......bt not a single flower was in it right now.........all in all he was in a miserable condition

M: (shouted).....benji main tmhe zinda nahi choron ga.......tm ne kaha tha aunty ghar pe nahi hain......how could you
(he started running behind him.......n benji ran to save his life while sammy was behind mayank holding glass of glucose n first aid box.........

AT NIGHT

M: ye sab benji ki waja se howa hai..........i wont leave u
B: ab aur kitna mary ga..........bola na galti ho gai.....maujhy kya pata tha aunty itni jaldi market se wapiss aa jayien gi
M: tum logon ko andaza nahi kya halat ki thi meri aunty ne........
S: well......tmhari condition dekh k hamien andaza ho gya tha........(supprressing his smile)
M: han han hans lo jitna hasna hai.............main jaa raha hun
S: sachi tum ja rahe ho.........buhat acha decision hai.....Dado buhat khush hon gay
M: (cutting in) main apne room main ja raha hon ghar nahi.........ok
n then he left to his room n went to sleep 4 dreaming abt his love his nupur.......

MORNING

mayank get up early today n went out for jogging in his pajams n black vest........looking absloutely handsome.....
while jogging he was tired n sat on a bench at a calm place no one usually comes there.....he closed his eyes n started thinking abt his life.....he was thinking abt wat was he doing n wat he want to do.......how he will tell nupur that how much he loves her........wat will happen when dado will come back.....everything was so complicated
his eyes were closed..........he wanted to rest then he heard something
he opened his eyes at this n noticed that it was someones's payal's sound........it was so soothing
he got up n satrted moving towards the place 4rm where this sound was comming

he saw a girl in white churidaar........with open hair.........looking so angelic
admist the greenery n flowers she was looking like a fairy.........her back was facing him
he wanted to see her face..........he can imagine how beautiful she will be.......
he was so lost in that girl's beauty.........may be she was humming some song..
then she turned..........n he was amaized as she was no other than his love, his angel, his fairy, his nupur
actually he was looking her 4 the first time like this n also in open hair
she was looking gorgious.........no this word is nothing to describe how beatifull she is looking he thought
"i love her" he wispered

actually he was behind some tree n nupur didnt see him
she was lost in her own world
she was humming a song
mayank tried to listen her...........her voice was also soothing n beautiful like her

Behta hai mann kahin, kahan janti nahi
behta hai mann kahin, kahan janti nahi
koyi rokle yahin (
she was twirling around holding her dupatta)
Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanu na
bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, janne kidar jaanu na

behta hai mann kahin, kahan janti nahi,koi rokle yahin
(mayank was completely lost may be in her beauty that was so angelic or her voice that was soo soothing or may be in both)
Bhage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanu na
Bhage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jannu na


Aa...haan...aa... (she was enjoying herself.......when a cool breez touched her face n her hair were flying.......this scene was so mesmerising that let mayank's heart to skip a beat)
ho...chale thandi hawa...ho...sang mann bi gya
Dhhundhhu main kahan usko, batlaaye koyi mujh ko
ke haan haan haan re
Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanon na
Bhaage re mann kahin, aagre re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanu na
Behta hai mann kahin, kahan jaanti nahi, koyi rokle yahin
"Beautifull" mayank whispered


Haan...haaye aisa sama...hmm...phir ho ga kahan(she was sitting in a swing........n it started raining....she closed her eyes enjoying the rain falling on her face)
Jee loon main isse khul ke, sawan bhi zara khul ke
Arre sun sun sun
Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanu na
Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanu na
Behta hain mann kahin, kahan janti nahi, koi rakle yahin
Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanu na
Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidar jaanu na


nupur was totally lost in herself, unaware of surrounding........enjoying the rain fully stretching her arms feeling rain drops ...........
when she tripped over a stone that was laying on ground.........she closed her eyes anticipating a fall
bt two strong arms hold her.......whose arms these could be else our mayank
her eyes were closed n she was scared.........she also looks beautiful in this scared look he thought
nupur slowly opened her eyes......n found mayank staring at her lovingly.......
she blushed unknown of this fact that she was blushing........bt mayank noticed it
mayank was still holding her by her waist..........she was so close to him
for the first time he was looking her so closely.........he was lost in her deep beautiful eyes........
nupurs hands were on his shoulders..........then
she realise where she was n in which condition..........she pulled her hands off his shoulders
mayank too loose his grip on her waist coming back into reality from his dreamland
there was a little n cute smile on his lips............he was still looking nupur so lovingly........
she was confused may be....he thought
there was an awkward silence........finally nupur spoke

N: thanks...........
M: hmm........ kiss liye???
N: (she looked into his yes........she was falling short of words n she didn't know why) ......wo mujhy girne se bachane k liye
M: well......iss ki zarorat nahi.......main tmhe kaise girne de sakta hon
nupur looked at him......confused may be at wat he was saying.......she was also thinking wat if he had seen her enjoying like this n also abt her singing as no one knows abt her singing

finally she spoke again
N: umm....main chalti hun......bye
M: nupur........
N: (she turned).......huh????
M: tum buhat achi lag rahi ho.......
N: (she felt her cheeks turning red......)...........umm....thanks.
she again turned to go.....thinking abt wat is happening with her.........
mayank again called her out

M: nupur.....
N: (turned again).........hunh???????kya hoa?
M: (walking towards her as she was some feet away).......wo....
nupur was looking at him.....wondring wat he is abt to say
but mayank finishing the gap.....moves towards nupur..........there was almost somes inches gap now....
nupur's heart was racing fast as he was so close to him.......she was really confused....n was feeling a tingling sensation in her stomach..........she just closed her eyes

M: (smilingly saw her scared face n whispered)......tum buhat acha gaati ho
N: (at once opened her eyes n was shocked as no one knows abt her singing before)....kya??

mayank smiled n winked at her............moves two steps back n turned to go........
nupur was looking him going........n was wondring wat has happened just two seconds ago

PRECAP
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nupur n mayank stranded in lift..........Alone....

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hey guys this was next update of mine............
now there is some progress in their relationship..............hope u will like it....
do tell me how was it whether u lik it or not.............i m really confused
plz guys give me ur comments.........do criticise if u didn't like it......it will help me to improve
no kanjossi guys.....i m waiting 4 ur comments now....




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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it yaar
Benji is hillarious
Mayur are soo cute loved them
Hmmm........next meet in the lift
do continue soon
luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
haha loved it
poor benji
and I imagined Mayank all beaten up
it wasn't pretty
the jogging scene was very cute
loved it
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi RAbi,
Wonderful update.
loved it.
loved mayur sweetest scene.
it was really very nice.
keep it up.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Really Awesome&Fab Like the last part & when Mayank was taking relax and thinking about his life...............
Continue soooooooooon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyyy rabia
Lovely update
It was too good
I can imagine the whole scene of the song
That scene was just mesmerizing
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww...thanx a lot 4 dedicating this part to me dear...
nd yea...thanx 4 updating soon!! 😛
well...u kno dis part was gr8!!!
haah!! i can imagine mayu in dat condition after returning frm nupur's house 😆😆
nd yaar....i luvd it...nupur sings??!!!!
awesum...
haayee...d part was entirely awesum!!!
nd see...don't b confused!! i din't liked ur part...
i LUVD it!!
and also...see...no kanjoosi in my comments!!
well...ab jab mere order ko tumne apni saraakho par rakha to my next order...pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee upd8 d next part soon...dat too before Saturday!!
thik hai na??? 😆
nywyzzz...pls cont soon...
nd yea..thanx 4 d pm... =P
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Posted: 15 years ago
Okay, so finally i finished reading ur ff!
It was really amazing, and full of entretainment!
I loved it!
keep it up!
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome...lovely update!!!
Great going...
Continue soooonnnn
Thanks for the PM
LOve
Aranya

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