LOVE UNCONFESSED(MAYUR FF) part 19 pg 141 - Page 4

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Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

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Originally posted by: rose.mn

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i like the story line
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Hey Nidzy

sounds really good !!!!!!!!!!!! do continue!!!!!!!
Love
Ashna😳

Thanks for commenting it encouraged me a lot

Here goes the first part

PART 1

In Mumbai

Kapoor house

( it was a big and beautiful one with garden around which had beautiful flowers and little grass)

Diya and Uday are Nupur's cousins

Diya is a sweet girl caring and good natured

studies in excel college loves to hang out with friends

Uday as usual is complete dodo he is mad about food

Uday ' Dids aaj nupur aa rahi hai.

Diya ' Pata hai dodo

U- Phir tou aaj mujhe extra khana milega kyuki aaj Nupur ko bahar ghumane lekar jaana hai

D- (making a face) tumhare paas khane ka koi na koi bahana zaroor hota hai

Saying this she snatches his sandwitch and runs

Uday runs behind her

U- Dids please meri sandwitch de do Mom Dids ko bolo na meri jaan unke hatho mein hai

They both run into the garden

Uday picks up a water pipe and splashes water without seeing

Diya escapes but Nupur who has just arrived gets completely drenched

Uday looking at Nupur drops the pipe

U- are yeh kaise ho gaya

Ab to Nupur mujhe kachcha chaba degi

N-By God aaj Uday bhaiya nai bachenge

Diya comes from behind

D- Hi Nupur

N-Hi Diya Kaisi ho

They both hug each other

Uday standing still in his position

D-hum ne tumhe bohot miss kiya

N- mai bhi. Waise baatein baad mein bhi ho sakti hai pehle iss Uday b ko sabakh sikhaye

D- mai bhi yehi sonch rahi thi

Saying this they both pick up a pipe of water each and run behind Uday

U- (running) Mummy'''..bachao meri do pagal behne meri jaan ke peeche padi hai

At last Diya and Nupur stop running after making sure that Uday is completely drenched in water from top to bottom

Hearing all this Pammi Aunty comes out

PA- aare Nupur tum kab aayi

N- bas abhi

They both share a hug

PA ' are tum bheeg kaise gayi

N- kuch nai aunty jisne bhi yeh kiya use tou is ki sazaa mil gayi (looking at Uday)

Nupur & Diya share a laugh aunty also laughs looking at Uday

U- (pointing his fingers towards N & D) dekh lunga tum dono ko

And goes inside

Nupur Diya and Pammi aunty also go inside

D- Nupur tum fresh ho jao shaam ko hum ghumne chalenge

(showing Nupur her room upstairs)

Sharma House

M- Maa mai bahar jar raha hu

MM- (giving a teasing luk) Aaj tou Sunday hai tujhe college tou nai hai phir tu kaha jar raha hai? Kahi koi date ka plan hai kya? Batana Mayu

M-Maa plz chidao mat aap janti ho mai ladkiyo se nafrat karta hu I JUST HATE WOMEN sirf tumhe chode kar maa

MM- Sab ladkiya ek jaysi nai hoti Mayu apne aap ko ek mouka tou de

M- Diya than a maa aur ye meri sab se baadi galti thi

Aur aap janti ho Mayank apni galatiyo se seekhta hai usse dubara dohrata nai

Mai kisi bhi ladki par kabhi bharosa nai karunga kabhi nai

MM-Theek hai theek hai jaisi teri marzi

Waise tou jaa kaha raha hai????

M- (angrily)Book store chalogi?????

MM-Nai nai tu jaa mujhe teri buks mai koi interest nai hai

M- Thodi der mein aa jaunga Bye

MM- Bye

That's it for today guys

Plz bear with the bad grammar

Plz guys do comment

Critisizm welcome so that I can improve

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