LOVE UNCONFESSED(MAYUR FF) part 19 pg 141 - Page 14

oh god.. mayuu ko sach bataao...

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyy nidzy
That was a really nice update
Plzzz continue soon
I can't wait to read next part
N thanx for the pm

thanks dear

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

wow!
lo0ved the update!
lekin itna short.....
aur i cant beleive mayank said that.....
he is so rude.
do continue soon........

Originally posted by: rose.mn

amaizing nidzy
loved it yaar..........too good
mayank n nupur serious fight...........
do cont soon ok

thanks dear

really liked the part... arrey yaa r bohot accha tha!!!

Lekha

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

really liked the part... arrey yaa r bohot accha tha!!!

Lekha

Hey Lekha

nupur in tears?????? poor nupur......anyways continue soon.........

PART 5

In The Evening

N- aaj tak mujse kisi nai itni rudely baat nai ki aur meri galti hikya thi (she had tears in her eyes)

Samrat says sorry Nupur and then leaves

D-jaane de na Nupur wo aisa hi , isliye Sammy ke alawa uska koi dost nai hai

At Sharma House

Samrat parks his bike & rings the door bell.

Mm-(opens the door) aare samrat beta tum bade din baad

S-Aunty Mayank hai

Mm-haan beta wo apne room mein hai jao

In Mayanks Room

S-Mayank tumne aaj jo kiya wo theek nai tha

M-mujhe uss bare main kuch baat nai karni

S-par mujhe karni hai aur tumhe sunna hi padega sach kya hai

Nupur ne tumhe satane ka plan zaroor banaya tha , par kal jab wo tumhare ghar se lauti tou usne mujhe cal kiya

Flashback

N-Hello Samrat

S-hi Nupur aa gayi ghar

N –haan aa gayi

S- mil gayi teri book

N- ha yaar akhir uss khadoos ne book de hi di

S-Lad kar tou nai aayi na waha se

N-Sammy tou bhi na

Wo actually mai uski maa se mili wo bohut sweet hai aur dil ki bohut achi hai unhe dekhkar mujhe aapni maa ki yaad aagayi Maine unke saath bohut saari baatein ki mujhe bohut maza aaya ,aur maine unhe promise kiya ki mere aur Mayank ki takrar ko mai bhool jaungi

Tou mai soch rahi thi ki wo plan ka idea drop kardo ……ok

S- lagta hai tou uski maa se kuch zada hi impress ho gayi hai chal anyways theek hai plan cancel ok

N- Ok Bye Gud nite

S-Gud nite

Samrat to himself

S- Kal plan tou action mai ayega par Nupur ki taraf se nai balke cool dude Samrat ki taraf se

Bohut time hogaya apne chaddi buddy ko satha ke

Flash back ends

S-maine soocha thodi masti karunga aur isse tere chere pe smile aayegi

Aare us bechaari ko tou pata bhi nai tha mere plan ke bare mein aur tu ne tou usse aisa treat kiya jaise world ke sabse bade crime ke liye punish kar raha ho

Har koi ek jaisa nai hota Mayank ,tum tumhare beete hue kal ki sazaa tumhare aaj ko nai de sakte aisa dusro par cheekne chilla ne se tumhara kal badale ga nai par ha tumhara aaj zaaroor effect hoga

Mayank feels guilty he hugs Sammy

M-Sorry yaar mujse galti hogayi

S-Beete baatou ko bhool kar aage badna seekho aur apni zindagi ko dusra mauka diyo

Aur haa agar tujhe sorry kehna hi tou usse kaho jise tum ne hurt kiya

Mayank doesn't reply

S-Chal theek hai mai chalta hu take care gud nite

Bye aunty and he leaves

MM overheard everything she goes to Mayank & sits on the bed Mayank lies down with his head in her laps

MM-yeh kya hai Mayu tou purani baatein abhi tak nahi bhoola

M- kya karu maa dar lagta hai kissi par bhi trust karne ke liye

MM-koshish tou karo dosti karne ki

Isme koi burayi nahi hai , apne aap ko badal Mayu warna jo dost saath hai wo bhi choot jayenge

M-ok maa I'll try to change for better abhi bohut late hogaya hai aap jakar sou jao

MM-(while leaving) Ek aur baat Mayu Nupur se mafi zaroor mang lena

M-ok maa

Mayank lies down on his bed and think about his past

(I'm giving a fast forward flashback as I cant imagine Mayu with anybody else other than Nupur )

Flash back

When Mayank was in Delhi he met a girl her name was Sneha she was his neighbour they used to meet every morning while jogging.Days passed Mayank enjoyed her company they both became best friends he trusted her a lot more than anyone and he used to share everything with her though Mayanks mom didn't like her.

One day Sneha confessed that she loves him Mayank was shocked and confused he didn't love her he always believed she was his best buddy he trusted her a lot so thought of giving it a chance but he never felt that way for her.

One day Mayank's world shattered he and Samrat were in a cafe they overheard Sneha's conversation with her friend

Girl- aur bol Sneha tera plan kaha tak aaya

Sneha- main e usse pata liya hai aur wo mujh pe blindly trust karta hai mai ne usse pata hi nai chalne diya ki maine sirf paiso ke liye uss ke saat pyaar ka natak kiya tha.Ek baar uski wo khadoos si maa maan jaaye phir mai Mayank se jo mangungi wo dega aakhir itne bade Enterprise ka eklauta waris hai.

Hearing this Mayank's heart ached why did he trust a girl for an instant his world seemed to spin he felt like killing that girl what hurt him the most was she was using him when he trusted her so much Samrat consoled him they left the caf and reached home.

Mayank went to his room his blood was boiling he throws everything in anger.

MM asked Samrat what happened to Mayu ,Samrat relates the whole incident.MM is shocked to hear that she goes to his room

MM- Jaane de Mayu jo hua usse bhool ja

M- aise kaise bhool jau maa maine usko apna best friend mana aur uss par itna trust kiya aur usne sirf paiso ke liye mujh se dosti ki

(and he hugs her )

MM consoles him

The next morning

M – Maa mai bhi Samrat ke saat apni aage ki padhai Mumbai mein continue karunga Samrat ne already apna admission EXCEL college mein kar liya aur usne apne rehne ki jagah bhi dhund li mai bhi kahin na kahin adjust kar lunga

MM- theek hai Mayu mai samaj sakti hoon magar tum Mumbai ek hi shart par jaa sakte ho mai bhi tumhare saat chalungi

M- theek hai maa

This was almost 2 yrs back that was the main reason he shifted to Mumbai & since then he hated to trust anyone especially girls.

Mayank comes back from his thoughts and says uss ladki ki saza mai dusro ko nai de sakta, mujhe Nupur ko sorry bolna hi hoga

Next day in college

Mayank is searching for Nupur he sees Dia

M- Nupur kaha hai

D- wo aaj college nai aari uski tabiyat theek nai hai waise tum usse kyu dhoond rahe ho aur kuch kehna baki reh gaya kya (saying this angrily she leaves)

Mayank felt very guilty he didn't have any right to hurt anyone like this he knew he treated her very badly without knowing the truth.He decides to go to Nupurs house & apologize to her.

The whole day Mayank couldn't concentrate in the class he remembered how he had shouted on Nupur her teary face flashed in front of him which hurt him lot becoz he was the cause of bringing tears to those angelic eyes.

In the evening at college

M to S- Samrat mujhe Nupur ke ghar le chal

S- kyu use aur rulana hai kya

M- Plz Samrat mai jaanta hoon maine galti ki hai aur iss liye mai usse sorry kehna chahta hoon.

Samrat finds that Mayank is very guilty he keeps his hand on his shoulder and says chal theek hai mai tujhe shaam ko le jaata hoon

That's all for today

I hope u all didn't sleep off reading this part

It was quite boring but coming parts will be interesting

Plz do comment criticism welcome

Luv

Nidzy

Wow... awesome update... thanks u kept Mayank's flashback small.. even i dont like to see anyone else paired to Mayank... Mayur r the best...

Hi nidzy,

Great update as usual.

At last u revealed the past of Mayank.

And I loved it bcoz actually Mayank didn't loved sneha.

But felt bad 4 mayank bcoz sneha broke his trust.

Any way oho ho mayu felt guilty 4 his deeds and now he want to apologize to nupr.

That's our sweet mayu.

very very nice update

keep it up.

Thanx 4 ur pm