LOVE UNCONFESSED(MAYUR FF) part 19 pg 141 - Page 12

Sound interesting=)

the promo is realllyy interesting....

nice promo.
its seems interesting.
waiting 4 ur update.
try to update soon

Nidzy dear it's sounds interesting. update soon pls

liked the promo
its very tempting
try to update soon......

nice promo but aww, you won't be able to update till next week

Hi !!
i just started reading yur ff today.. i really enjoyed reading it...
cant wait till the next updatee
and please do pm me when you update =)
HiNaL

Heres the next part frnds as i've promised start ur week with my update

Part 4

At Kapoor House

N-(fuming) uski himmat kaise hui mere SRK ko bekar kehne ki

D-kya hua Nupur kyu itna chilla rahi ho

N-uss Mayank ke bache ne naak mai dam kar rakha hai

U-(surprisingly)Aare Nupur Mayank ko bacha bhi hai , mujhe tou pata hi nahi tha aur waise Nupur tum usse kab mili mai tou aaj tak nai mila

N-(shouting) UDAY BHAIYA !!!!!!!!!

D-(hitting Uday)-DODO

U-kya hua dids

D-ye Mayank ki hi baat kar rahi hai

U-Ohhh……. My mistake

N-mistake tou meri hai jo mai usse cafe mai takrayi sadu kahin ka kehta hai aake lelo book mujhe tou ye bhi nai pata wo khadoos rehta kaha hai

D-Nupur Sammy ko zaroor pata hoga ki wo kaha rehta hai

N-Samrat ko kaise pata hoga

U-aare wo dono tou K.G. friends hai

N-K.G. friends??????

D-wo dono school ke time se friends hai

N-theek hai mai Samrat se hi pooch leti hu

Nupur calls Samrat

N-Hi Samrat

S- Hi Nupur is waqt Samrat ki yaad kaise aayi

N-kya batau tumhare us monkey dost ne mera jeena mushkil kar diya hai

S- kyu

N-wo huva yun ki mai book store mai uss se takrayi thi aur hamari books exchange hogayi aur wo kehta hi ki mai apni book uske ghar aakar lelu(fuming)

Tumhe pata hai uska ghar

S-ha pata hai infact mai abhi pub ja raha hu tum kaho tou tumhe chod du

N-aare Wah!!!!! Naki aur pooch pooch

Mai abhi ayi

Samrat drops Nupur at Mayanks house

S- mai wait karu kya tumhare liye

N-nai Samrat tum jao mai chali jaungi

S- ok then Bye

At Sharma House

Nupur rings the bell as usual Mrs Sharma

(MM) opens the door

N-Namaste Aunty

MM-Namaste Beta

N- aunty mai Nupur meri ek (hesitating a bit) book wo kal bookstore mein exchange hogayi thi

MM remembers that Mayank has mentioned about it

MM-aao na beta andar aao

Nupur comes inside

MM-tum baitho mai Mayank ko bula ti hu

MM goes to Mayanks room

MM-(teasing) kya baat hai Mayu tu sudhar gaya hai pehli baar tujhse koi ladki milne aayi hai

M-Ladki????????? Kaun Ladki

MM- aare wohi

M- kaun wohi Maa seedhe seedhe kaho na baat ko ghumao mat

MM-aare wohi jisse tu bookstore mein takraya tha

M-NUPUR!!!!!!!! Akhir wo jungle billi aa hi gayi

MM- wo wait kar rahi hai uski book lakar dede

In The Hall

N-Aunty aapka ghar bohut acha hai

MM- thanks beta tum bhi bohut sweet ho

Mayank comes and throws the book on the table in front of Nupur

N(picks the book in exictment) Hayeeee mera SRK

M-Uthao apne SRK ko AUR jao yaha se

MM- Mayu ye koi tareeka hai APNI Nupur se baat karne ka

Mayank gives her a dark look

MM-(clearing her throat) mera matlab hai apni dost se baat karne ka

Mayank doesn't reply and leaves angrily ignoring Nupur

N-aunty mai aur mayank dost nai hai

MM-tou kya hua hum tou ban sakte hai na

N-Bilkul aunty

MM-tou hojaye ek ek coffee

N-nai aunty phir kabhi

MM-aise kaise abhi tou hum dost bane hai thodi dair gappe marte hai

N- theek hai aunty

While having coffee Nupur keeps blabbering about Srk, films, her RAJ kumar etc

N-aunty aap bohut sweet ho Mayank aap jaisa bilkul nai hai

MM-jaanti hu Mayank thoda akdu zaroor hai par dil ka bura nai hai . wo kya hai na beta wo bohut kam logo par trust karta hai Plz uski baato ka bura mat mano uski taraf se im Sorry

N-aare aunty yeh aap kya keh rahi hai

MM-(cutting her) ok promise karo tumhare aur Mayank ke beech jo bhi an-bhan hui tum usse bhool jaogi

N- ok aunty promise ab mai chalti hu bohut late hogayi hai Diya aur Uday bhai mera wait kar rahe honge

Mm-aare tum akeli kaise jaogi ruko Mayuuuuuuuuuu (she shouts)

M-ha maa

MM-Nupur ko ghar tak chod aao

M- Maa mai????????????

N-Nai aunty mai auto se chali jaungi

MM- tou Mayank tumhe auto tak chod dega

M-(staring at his mom angrily ) Chalo

N-bye aunty coffee bohut achi thi

MM-thankz beta aati rehna

Mayank & Nupur leave

They are walking acroos the lawn suddenly Nupur trips due to a water pipe in the middle and was about to fall when Mayank holds her by her waist . They both share an eye lock Mayank makes her stand

M- tum kabhi dekh kar nai chal sakti girne mai kya Phd kari hai

N-meri kya galti aise lawn ke beech koi pipe phekta hai kya

Mayank observes she is right

M-acha ab chalo

N-maine kab mana kiya hai

Maynk hires an auto for Nupur

N-bye Mayank

M-bye

Nupur thinks in the auto waise ye Mayank itna bura bhi nai hai aur uski maa by god kitni sweet hai mujhe apni maa ki yaad aagayi

Next Day In College

Nupur comes late to the college the wholegang have planned to play a prank on Mayank

Uday to Mayank – aahh Mayank tumhe Shukla sir 2^nd floor ke room No.105 mein bula rahe hai & he runs from there

M-2^nd floor wo tou old classroom hai , Shayad koi kaam hoga

Uday while running bumps into Nupur & tells her to come to room No.105

N-Lekin KYU

U-Tum jao tou sahi bohut mazaa aayega

Mayank opens the door its dark inside

Samrat and gang hid themselves in the next inter connecting room

M-Sir ne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya & he enters

Mayank trips over the rope which is tied near the entrance & falls

Sudddenly lights turn on he sees Nupur standing at the entrance and laughing at him .

She walks across the rope and goes near Mayank Stil laughing

N-By god Mayank mai tou tumhe circus ka Bandar samajhti thi tum tou circus ke joker lag rahe ho She sees Mayank fully coverd in colour powder which was spread on the floor

Mayank gets up fuming in anger and yells at Nupur badly

M-yeh sab tumhara hi plan hoga na

Dusron ka mazak udana to tumhari hobbies mein se ek hai tum kabhi kisi ke liye acha nai sonch sakti tum ladkiya hoti hi aisi ho jinhe dusron ke saat khel khelna aata hai tumse takrana mere life ki sabse badi galti thi tum jaisi ladki kabhi kisi ka bhala nai sonch sakti tum jaiso ko tou mai ek minute bhi bardash nai kar sakta hoon

Saying all this he turns and sees the entire gang is standing and is shocked at Mayanks behaviour and Nupur is in tears.

Seeing tears in Nupurs eyes Mayank realizes that he had overreacted. Nupur runs from there Dia ,Uday ,and Gunjan follow her.

S- yeh tumne theek nai kiya Mayank sach jaane bina

M- mujhe kuch jaanna bhi nahi hai

(He leaves angrily)

That's it for today guys

I hope u liked it

Plz comment as ur comments r very precious for me

Sorry for mistakes i've written in hurry

Luv

Nidzy

hi nidzy di..
i really liked the part...
i can just imagine mayu saying that..
cant wait for the nxt updatee =)
thanks for the pmm

HiNaL

Originally posted by: basket_101

hi nidzy di..
i really liked the part...
i can just imagine mayu saying that..
cant wait for the nxt updatee =)
thanks for the pmm

HiNaL

hi dear