Yuvi Naina scene-Short FF-LAST PART pg20

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sumaiya

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Posted: 16 years ago

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nice update!!! lol i'll be back to write a more detailed comment

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aww I feel so sorry for Naina but Yuvi as well since he feels hurt when Naina treats him the same way as the other guy...

it's nice to see that Yuvi cares for her and is appreciating the fact that he has to take care of her

looking forward to reading more!!

Edited by princessuma - 16 years ago

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anut

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Posted: 16 years ago

#42

Its so beautiful to see a caring Yuvi...There is hope for him yet...CVs are u listening???

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FaithnFate

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue dis is amazing...............caring yuvi

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Shipra

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Posted: 16 years ago

#44

LOVED THE 4TH PART ASWELL😛......U r a genius FF writer yaar!...And the thing i loved the most is that u didn't make it conventional....It's So Unconventional Yet So Enthralling!😛............This kind of an FF i have never read!😛....And this indeed is my favourite FF now!.........Please Continue it soon😛......And i hope we get to read a lot of romatic stuff between YuNa in this ''one day'' which he has begged Naina to stay with him...😍

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asmara

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
ohhh nice but i wish that you have give them more dialogue after he claed the wound. like ask her abt that guy and maybe him feeling that he is falling for her or something like that...sorry if that sounds rude 😕 but i still loved it nonetheless...cant wait for more of yuvna !!

array its not at all rude yaar and don't worry that conversation is coming up😛

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murtagh_arthur

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Awwwww!! Yuvi's sooo sweet!! And I felt so bad for Naina and sorry for Yuvi when Naina treated him that way. I cant wait for the next part!!!

p.s: thanks for the pm

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Payal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

Awwwww!!!

this is one of the best FFs im reading at the tme! i love it soo much!

great update, continue soon...

Poor Naina, shes soo dead inside, Yuvi's getting attached..how cute! :P

PS: can u send me a pm the next time u update?

Edited by *payal_15* - 16 years ago

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 16 years ago

#48

awesome,loved the way u showed nainas emotions,and just love this yuvi.

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asmara

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: murtagh_arthur

Awwwww!! Yuvi's sooo sweet!! And I felt so bad for Naina and sorry for Yuvi when Naina treated him that way. I cant wait for the next part!!!

p.s: thanks for the pm

hey dun worry u'll soon why shes behaving like that😉

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asmara

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: *payal_15*
Awwwww!!!

this is one of the best FFs im reading at the tme! i love it soo much!

great update, continue soon...

Poor Naina, shes soo dead inside, Yuvi's getting attached..how cute! :P

PS: can u send me a pm the next time u update?