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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#891

I absolutly love the way you write..!!

I'm generally i silent readed and am stuck on "liking" tab most of the time....but this update really made me want to post this time..!

This is my most fav FFs of yours....and sadly its only been update a few times...but the way you wrote their characters...the feelings they go throught....especially in this Arrange Marriage scene....was fabulous..!! I felt like i was watching a movie...

PLEASE do continue....update soooonnn..!

i can't wait to read the next part.!

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Mehek

@-DarkFantasy-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#892

@mahak

yeah i know our name is same

u r Welcom......

nd thanx for always sending pm to me....!

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#893

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: ..Aisho..
Great momo...

keep updating,

youre the best!

Aisho.

thanks aisho for calling it as great!

and i wud be updating more frequently now!

thanks a lot.......

lov ya..........

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: kasufan4ever
@mahak
yeah i know our name is same

u r Welcom......

nd thanx for always sending pm to me....!

its my pleasure sending the pm to u!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#896

Originally posted by: hgrhr
I absolutly love the way you write..!!
I'm generally i silent readed and am stuck on "liking" tab most of the time....but this update really made me want to post this time..!

This is my most fav FFs of yours....and sadly its only been update a few times...but the way you wrote their characters...the feelings they go throught....especially in this Arrange Marriage scene....was fabulous..!! I felt like i was watching a movie...

PLEASE do continue....update soooonnn..!

i can't wait to read the next part.!

thanks a lot!

i am very happy that u love the way i write.....

i am more than happy that this update cud provoke u to comment......

thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooo much for commenting......

it means a lot to me!

it is my favourite too!

yup!

i am so sorry for that!

actually i was busy in other ffs......

but next time i am gonna make sure to update soon.......

thanks a lot......

i am really very happy that i cud portray their feelings.......

thanks!

i am glad that u cud visualize them!

i am soooooooooo happy right now......

i would be continuing it soon........

i am gonna do that soon......

thanks for ur precious comments!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#897

Originally posted by: maria88

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thanks a lot maria!

i am really happy that u found it to be beautiful.....

and u even took out ur time to use glitters on it......

thanks a lot......

i wud be updating soon..........

thanks...........

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439538

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Posted: 15 years ago

#898

hey mahiiiiiiiiiiii

sorri i just saw the pm now

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw

wonderful yaar

you described there feelings sooooo welll

i swear to god it seems as if it is real or i'm actually there

its written suberly sweety

you know all that happend i can onli say this

The past can hurt. You can either run from it or learn from it

and if i know my friend she will learn from it and move on

right mahak!!!!! meri jaan

-sanam-

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#899

amazing part

as usual,

I think you should show Nupur's POV a little bit more though

that's all

I've always liked the different POV parts

so yeah,

anyways,

continue soon

and this jaldi update karna

Plzzzzzz....

mere liye!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#900

Originally posted by: fariaa70
hey Mahi
yaar kaya kahu
i m really tired to say the same thing- awesome, mind-blowing , fantastic etc etc.
hehehhe but i m helpless.😉
wonderful update as usual.
loved both myanks and nups point of view.
They r so sweet and easily understand each other.
they make a great couple.

i loved the line-
I seem to notice them and read every unsaid word by
her. I am a good reader of eyes....and she is a good speaker of
eyes.....a perfect match!

loved mayank when he told that he likes nups and also asked nups if she liked him or not.
he is rally a perfect gentleman.
this couple r made from heaven.
i love each and everything of ur update.

Now i m waiting 4 their dinner date.

lovely update sweety
keep updating

how sweet!

tune yeh line likhi and i am blushing!

thanks for using such sweet words for my update!

i told u that this update is gonna make u in love with mayur!

how sweet!

i am happy that u loved their thoughts......

they are perfect for each other.....

both r understanding and similar......but also opposite in many aspects.....

hey!

thanks for loving this line.....

he is a gentleman!

he knew the answer and then too asked everyone to ask her.....

he wanted to know her side too......

he cudn't just burden her with an unwanted bond.....

he is a perfect gentleman!

yup! they r!

thanks for that!!

thanks for loving each and everything of my update........

u can see that in the next update.......

i would be updating sooner this time......

thanks a lot.............