Arrange Marriage-mayur- NEW THREAD LINK : page 150 - Page 107

Originally posted by: Rafa.LunaPotter

Awesome job Mahii!

This is mindblowing!!!

Great job..loved the VM and teh written part.

Well written!

Continue soon!

thanks.....

i am happy that u found it to be awesome!

thanks........

i am glad that u loved it...........

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: KrazyRiya

Wow....awesum....superb....mindblowing update dear !!!

i loved it to the core !!!

loved the mayur convo.....it was really cute.....

liked that Nupur asked Mayank....if he like to know anything about her past......it s a very important question....which can affect their future.....and which most partners does not consider....or bother to ask or clarify with each other !!

omg....finally both mayank n nupur have starting liking each other....its gr8 !!

loved it..... when mayank's mom asked him whether he likes nupur.....n he said," ma, mujhe Nupur bahut pasand hai. Aur mujhe iski saadgi bhi bahut pasand hai. I want to marry her."......it was so cute yaar !!

and...Nupur blushing.....wow....

it was lovely when u showed...that after saying yes...Mayank bothered to ask Nupur her opinion..her decision also !!

you have described the feelings of mayur....the scenes between them...their convo so beautifully !!!

and also the rituals....i.e. on hearing yes from both of them....both the families were smiling..hugging each other...exchanging sweets......the whole scene was described perfectly... loved it !!

it was an extremely sweet...sober...happy....n a lovely update dear !!

good work !! keep it up sweety !!

plz update next part soon !!!

love u

varsha

thanks.....

hey riya!

thanks for using such beautiful words for my update!

thanks for loving it......

well....i thought it was necessary to talk about......cause we see breakups due to these reasons only! i am glad u liked this fact!

thanks a lot for specifically mentioning these things.......

mayank is a gentle man.....and he respects every other girl......he wanted to know her opinion.....he wanted to know if she is alright with it or not.......

thanks a lot for ur sweetest words!

love u a lot...........

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: princess_52

HIZZ HRU
ITSS LOVELY

thanks.....

i am happy that u found it to be lovely....

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Amazing Update

loved Mayank & Nupur's POV
con soon

thanks for the pm

thanks.....

i am happy that u found it to be amazing......

thanks for loving the povs.....

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: Tasnim2623

wooooowww mahak...

awesome part..

truly loved it..

it ws really gr8..

waiting to read more..

cont soon

thanks.....

i am happy that u found it to be beautiful....

thanks for loving it,.....

i am happy that u found it to be grt!

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Mahi
at last u update it
thanks a lot
loved the hole update
specially mayur's pov
mayank such a nice guy
nupur was so lucky
and the vm was mind blowing
and pls dont forget this ff again
update the next part soon
love u

thanks.....

yup at last i did updated it!

thanks for loving the entire update!

i am happy that u loved their povs......

i wont forget this next time.......

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Mahak choti update thi😭😭 aur wo bhi itne dino baad😭😭 I wanted sum more

Plzzzzzzzz next tim big plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Ohk the update was fab

Liked that in 1st meet only they culd read each others eyes

Liked their whole convo

Lets c wat will they do in dinner

Mayu actually wat Nups was thking that tim tabhi toh he mak it a point that evn his Mum ask Nups her decision

Mayur actually observed teh kiss on Sam's cheek

Both hav keen eye on them

Loved the whole update

Nxt tim lil big plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanks.....

i am sorry for the short and late update!

ohk......this time it wud be a big one......

thanks for liking the entire convo......

both are possessive abt their siblings......

thanks for loving the whole update!

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: armayurfan

Hey Mahak.
amazing update.
just loved it.
it was very beautifully written.
all the dialogues were just so simple & beautiful.
Both understands each other so well just like made for each other but obviously our mayur are made for each other 😍 😍 😍
but i think it was a small update. next time give a long one k.
continue soon................

thanks.....

i am happy that u found it to be beautiful....

and i am happy that u loved it........

i am happy that u liked the dlgs.......

yup they both are made for each other!

i wud give a big one!

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: preethis

wonderful dear,,.........

thanks.....

i am happy that u found it to be wonderful...

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

wowwwwwwwwwww loved it

thanks.....

i am happy that u loved it....

i wud be continuing it soon..........

thanks..........