Mayur FF:The Everlasting Journey part 4 Pg 18 - Page 13

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at last...the long awaited update!!
for starters, i'd like to thank a very very special person who has persuaded me to write this. without her, i would've never been able to do all of this. i know, bhashan hai, par still, i need to thank her for this. the girl is.........
Pebo!!!
and there's one more girl who's been fighting with me for long. so here....your pagli has updated okay....now you can feed Nicole!!!!!!
the girl is.....
Nidheya!!!!

Ok...thnx over...one more thnx to all those who posted to persuade me to do this!!
sorry for the disturbance!!!
and if this part's small...there's one more coming tomorrow!!!
make way for it!!!!!
and if you've forgotten, the format is in POV's...this time its Nupurs...next time it'll be Mayanks!!!!!!!


Chapter 4 : Robinson Crusoe

Two petrified shadows moved through the swaying branches of the damp barks. Owls hooted to rupture the stillness, but did a ghastly job as it frightened the two shadows even more. Clutching each others hands tightly, they made their way ahead trying hard to ignore mindless thoughts about the wild beasts that dwelled in this tropical forest and their capability to harm the two. Darkness had descended into the jungle long ago, in reality the canopy made the forest darker than ever. Mayank used his cell phone to give away light but was afraid that the battery could go. Anyways, it was of no use, there was no network here. I kept fidgeting with my now half torn dupatta to pass time. For me, I was only scared because of the silence. This stupid Mayank hadn't uttered a word since ages. I subdued a yawn and then looked at Mayank. His forehead had wrinkles of tension; his face was completely contracted along with his eyes to see clearly. I felt like letting out an outburst of laughter, but hushed when realization dawned me. Mayank had been doing so much. He had gone into that fire, just for me. He had been searching for a way out without resting while I sat only so that my worries would end soon. He had been so protective for me, the way he had called that girl bloody when I was in danger whereas just a few hours ago he had been flirting with her. How I loved him…..what? Did I just think….it's a wrong thought, I do not love him. Then why am I thinking so much about him? What's wrong with me? No he's just a very good friend! That's it!

"Nupur I'm tired." Mayank announced almost falling down as he sat on the green grass. His forehead had droplets of sweat. He ran his fingers again through his hair and laid down his head against the nearby Tree. Concern overcame me as I moved forward and sat beside him. I wiped off the dripping sweat and the small wound with my dupatta. Maybe it was just a assumption, but I think I saw Mayank smiling at me as I did it for him as if adoring me. Maybe this whole trip had turned my brain into a whirlwind of nightmares. However Mayank's action came to me more as a dream, like pleasant warmth his look emitted. I tried hard not to think it that way, but today none of my organs were listening to me.

At last I finished and looked at him, hoping he was still staring. He was, but the minute my eyes reached his face, he looked away, wandering away to the scenery. As if my face wasn't good enough. He hit his head lightly, maybe to bring him back to consciousness. Possibly we were going through the same phase of life and so the same state of mind. He quickly muttered a few words which were inaudible. Out of reflex, my voice was forced through my throat, "Huh?"

Mayank looked up." Huh?" he said again. he again looked down, trying to not avoid any possible eye contact. I did the same.

"You just said something? " I asked. He bit his lip hard with regret but then answered quietly. "No." he again went back to staring the moving ants on the ground. I garbled loudly," Sadu, doesn't even know how to talk." I began tearing the part of my dupatta with which I had wiped his forehead. Mayank chuckled and spoke to me without any monosyllables in his sentence." Your dupatta looks more like a bandage Na? And you look like an ambulance. Where's your first-aid kit?" he mocked.

I narrowed my eyes anger as he widened his in fright. He slowly got up understanding my intentions. He ran around the tree as I followed him with seething anger in me. At last I caught hold of him and began tickling his neck." Rule No. 23, never ever call me names." I spoke with an air of triumph. Mayank looked back laughing hard, and his laugh slowly faded into a mysterious smile. I then saw hoe close we were to each other. I could feel the tip of his nose touching my forehead. I almost lost my senses. A tingling feeling rushed through my body. Quickly moving apart, I looked away again." Stupid stupid me!" I heard him say.


"How far are we Mayu? I'm getting bored." I said, trudging along the rocky path. Thankfully at night Mr. Mayank vigilant Sharma had noticed smoke coming from somewhere east. He had thought it to be a cottage and going against all my protests had dragged me along to take the jeopardy and follow the smoke.

"Mayu?" Mayank shot up his eyebrows." You forgot Rule No. 14. No calling me Mayu. And we're just a few steps away from here. Do you want me to dance like a monkey on the way?

"Really?" I rubbed her hands gleefully. "Exciting offer, but no thanks, I'll pass." I shrugged my shoulders.

Mayank pretended to look shocked." Sure? Not even once?" he pouted. I smiled and patted his cheek." No Mayank, I said I don't want to see you dance didn't I? Now don't upset me. " it was only after a few seconds that I realized that my hand was on his cheek and I had Goosebumps all over my body. I quickly moved my hands away.

"Umm…lets walk?" Mayank pointed ahead as I meekly nodded. He kicked small pebbles as we moved ahead. Mayank always did violent things to pass his time. In his room back home he has this huge red boxing bag. Red so that I don't find out if he injures is hand. Whenever he's angry, he begins kicking this thing around. I hate that bag; it always injures my nose whenever Mayank uses it. When I go home I'm gonna dispose it off. That is if I actually reach back home.

"Here we are Nupur." Mayank said, lightening up." This cottage is gorgeous."

It really was. A complete palace of wood, the two storey cottage was adorned with lovely green creepers which festooned the windows and exotic species of birds at the roof. We couldn't see much of the interiors but we didn't fail to notice the beautiful with hundreds of colorful flowers and lush green grass. We saw bunches of hay tied outside to form chairs. It was kind of cool, considering the adjustment the person had made to his habitat. We slowly made way to the door, which was ancient and made from pure teak. We knocked lightly. A man, probably in is 50's opened the door. He had a gruff look, completely unshaven, bizarre hair, extremely dirty unshaped and long nails (He completely needed a manicure) and had worn completely torn clothes. Not that I blamed for that though, my own dupatta had been shredded to pieces. Maybe it was a necessity here. Probably ventilation of air.

"What is your problem?" he asked in a hoarse voice. Great, whom had we come across? Robinson Crusoe?

Mayank looked happy. Maybe because he knew English. "Hello sir, we have lost our way in this jungle. Could we spend the night here? We will be back tomorrow morning." I crossed my fingers. RC looked a bit mentally retarded…..Ok completely mentally retarded.

"No! Now buzz off!" he shouted. Mayank and I both jumped two steps back. As he was about to violently slam the door on our faces a girl emerged from the back. She called out to the man," Let them enter. Please." she spoke very softly, As if subdued by the man. She had a shiny bob of dark brown hair, a slim straight nose, and large hazel eyes. She had a faultless skin which gave her a gentle look. She had a slim graceful body.Mayank shot a look at the girl and fell back tripping on a stone. Both of us began laughing, the only difference was our tone. While I laughed freely, the girl could only hold back her laughter with a bad endeavor and continue chuckling. I felt sorry for the girl. Whatever relation she might have with the man she had to live with, this man looked disastrous. I just hoped he wasn't her husband. If he was I would have fallen with Mayank too.

The girl now shyly looked at Mayank from the guy's huge figure. The guy had also brought a lopsided smile on his face, his dirty yellow-with-black-specks teeth which made me gag. He held out his hand to Mayank while the girl looked on hopefully. I felt my body burn, this time not only because of heat.

Mayank stared at the girl continuously as he took the man's hand to get up. The girl then looked away, her extremely fair complexion turning into shades of pink. Mayank again looked hopefully at the man, who nodded slightly." Only tonight, mind it. Come on lass." He used a country term to address me. Funny, but everything around was anyway going weird.

it was too good

wow......

Hi sweets ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

fabolous work,,, as usual

Awesoommee...
Like your writing stylee
Cont soon...

hey dear nice update and thanks for pm

hey shru

im so glad u have updated finally

obviously i will find this small coz u have to update tomorrow. it has been exactly more than 4 month since u have ypdated actually 4 months 4 days to be preciese. im really glad after a tough pmiing finally u have update due to constan pm s of me , nidz and many other ppl dying to read it
i wiil not write my usual comment but a really very special one for a really special update.

first of all nupur was costantly thinkink abt our hero and even thought she loved him......😃 hayye does she ?? well but she cleared out being called him as hher best friend.nupur still tcking care of our swet hero with their cute nok jhoks brigghtening it more as well as their law book tating not to call each other names.

and shru now a girl ??? new entry wat is this... that guy her husband pity her . it was but obvious mayank would all so now nupurs already started feeling jealous of that girl who was already blushing seeing mayank now. i know mayank wont fall for her as he only loves nupur so dont think of that also.

please do update the next part soon

loads of love to u

pebbzzyy

{PS: hey shru i have never in my life written such a big comment be grateful😉
coz even my promos arent so long so!!!! keep rocking}

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