Mayur FF:The Everlasting Journey part 4 Pg 18

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Hey Guys!I've decided to start a new FF! Here's the First part!
Pls tell me if I should continue or not.

Part I:The Journey Begins

I waited in my room impatiently for Nupur to come.She took too much time to dress up, and we would surely miss our flight if I waited any longer without taking any action.I barged into the room.

"Nupur,are you rea...."

I was left speechless.It was not what she wore that surprised me, but how she looked different and the best in everything she wore.It was not her wearing the dress, it wasthe dress wearing her.She gave me one of her annoying smiles as I looked into her chocolate brown eyes.I didn't know much about a beautiful person,but in my dictionary it was someone like Nupur.

Nupur was my best friend from the last 4 years.We lived together in a huge apartment in Mumbai and went to Excel college together.We were in the same class and from enemies to acquaintances,over the time we became inseperable friends.Tody, we were going for an international meet representing not only our college, but the whole of India.You bet, I wouldn't want to get late for that.

"What is it Mayank?And have you forgotten Rule no.46 - Knock before you come in?"

"No I haven't.I'm sorry,okay?Now will you please rush it!I don't want to miss the flight and go walking all the way to Bahamas!"

"Okay,Okay!Have you told Ramu Kaka to tell Mom and Dad?"

"Yes,and he's done it too.Why don't you ever talk to them yourself?" I said annoyingly.

I shut my mouth.i knew her problem, still I had asked her.she must be feeling terrible.
Nupur's parents divorced two years back.Her father went to America and her mother to London.that's when I suggested Nupur to move in with me and she readily agreed.Since then,They would call her up frequently, but nupur had developed so much hatred for them for ruining her life that she wouldn't even speak to them, instead she would tell me or Ramu Kaka to tell them about her.I knew she missed them, but she would never show it.

"I'm sorry Nupur.I didn't mean to-"

"I know.It's okay.Now, shall we go?"

"That's what I'v been waiting for!Now, do you want to drive or should I?"I knew Nupur loved driving and I hardly ever let her.

"Me! Me! Me!"Nupur cried like a five-year old baby.

"Here are the keys." She hurriedly snatched the keys and threw herself into the driver's seat.

We were embarking a new journey of our life,not knowing where it would lead us to.We were beginning an everlasting journey.

I know it's a short part.I'll write bigger ones from next time.




Part 1:Page 1
Part 2:Page 6
Part 3:Page 10
Part 4: Pg 18
Edited by ShruAtIF - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Looks really promising... Look forward to reading more :)
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sounds interesting
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sounds interesting...add me to ur pm list
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wow dear!!
it sounds intresting!!
first part was veri good!!
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Great start!👏👏

continue soon!😊
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Wow its amazing start.
its quite different.
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sounds interesting do continue!!
Love
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heyy
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it sounds interesting.......... plz add me to yur pm list,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, continue soon,........

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