Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey hiii Mana, hi dear(Sorry don't know your name...)😊!

wow new fic....very nice.ek aur RN fic padhne milegi😃
yahan pe toh pehle hi update mein Raj ko lakar to tune record hi bana diya😲😆he he he...I know😆

ok toh hamara Raj sirf 8 saal ka hai....accha hai hamein Raj ko bachpan se dekhna ka mauka milega...vo toh bachpan se hi cute hai.

that he is😳

aur dekh aaj pehli baar kisi fic mein mera reply 1st hai vo itni brand new fic mein😆😆 it's nice to comment first.😉 really???!!! So i'm the lucky one to get your first comment!!!wow!!😃

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue this soon par apni baki fic ko bhul mat jana, tujhe unhe bhi update karna hai! ofcourse dear! main unhe kaise bhool sakti hoon? Aur agar bhool bhi gayi, toh tum sab ho na....mujhe yaad dilaane keliye!😉

😆

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hey Mana hi Sur !!😊

Its simply gr8...d ud was mindblowing and very different... Thanks a ton ya..😃

plz cont asap yeah..i'll

gud luck. Thanks again dear...😊

love

sur

luv,

mana😃

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Wah...one more RN fic....itni saari non lrl fics padhne ke baad, I m ok with more fics being non lrl but cannot do without RN...😉yeah...right!! 😆

Oh toh Rajveer is a chota bachaa...!!! 😃 And an all rounder...great...!!!👍🏼ab Raj all rounder nahi hoga, toh aur kaun hoga??

Huda is the same bada ho ya chota...!!! 😡😡haan..😆

The lil girl is Naina...!!!😃 So RN are going to chaddi buddies...!!! 😉 Even now as kids they would make a cute pair...!!! 😉lets see!

Great start Mana 👏👏....Update soon...!!! ⭐️

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! thanks!!😊

An eight year old Rajveer is trapped in a storeroom and scared and crying!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Poor baby!!!!! Kitna roh raha hai aur cheekh raha hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 haan...I know ro woh raha hai, aur takliff tum sab ko ho rahi hai!😆

Raj is a star and an all rounder!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Huda and Shantanu tricked Raj and locked him in that storeroom!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj school ka hero hai aur woh log zero yeh sacchai unse bardaast nahi huyi!!!!!👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼 👎🏼

Ish Huda ko toh main chhodungi nahi!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Yeh toh bachpan se hi villain nikla!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Ab bachcho ke gun toh paalne mein hi samajh aate hai na?😉

I am sure Raj ush Huda ko baad mein sambhal hi lega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 lets see!

A cute little girl came to Raj's rescue and I am sure that is Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 aur kaun ho sakta hai?😉

After all Raj ko musibaat se toh Naina hi bacha sakti hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊right!!!

Lekin yeh Raj toh bina kuch bole hi chala gaya!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Thanks bhi nahi kaha Naina se!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 Raj kuch kuch satka hua hai 😆

The beginning was very different and interesting!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanks again!

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Woww...one more RN fic... gr888888... i m soo happy..😛

Lovely concept... Thanks neelu !😃

so Raj is only 8 yr old...n that girl must be Naina.. 😳 aur kaun ho sakta hai?😉

Huda is 😡 ..koi baat nahi Raj bhi use achhe se samjaayega... 😉 lets see!

storyline is gud..pls continue.... but dont forget to update ur other fics...!!!!😉 Tum ho na yaad dilaane keliye!

waiting for the next part...

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Great....one more RN fic. And the starting is completely different.

Beautifuly written. Thanks !!

Raj got bullied by his so called friends...for being good at studies and sports...this is not fare. I know...

But who was that girl? whom do you think???😉 lemme give you a clue...woh jo har waqt Raj ko museebat se bachati hai...😛 samjhi???

please continue soon

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.....mujhe rona aa raha hai.... Ale ale bachcha...itna nahi lote! tum chup hojao please! dekho agar tum chup hogayi toh main Raj ko bulaungi! okay??? 😆

mera Raj store-room me bandh tha?????????? hailaa!! Raj ka naam liya aur Sumi chup!!! kya baat hai??!!! 😳

Wa wa wa wa............................usse kitni takleef hui hogi.....😭😭😭...how cud they do this to him???????😡...Huh....Raj school ka hero hai and wo log zero....sacchayi bardasht nahi hui to usse aise store-room me lock kar diya...huh!!!!😡.....I just so hate them for this. My poor baby....kitna ro raha tha....cheekh raha tha..😭😭😭...me feeling so bad for him. I know dear...but maine kisiko bhej diya hai usse bahar nikalne!

But at least koi achhi si ladki ayi aur usne usse nikal hi liya....I wonder if thats Naina...ya phir apka dimag kuch aur hi soch raha hai madam??😉😉Arey maanti hoon, mera dimaag bahot kuch sochta rehta hai, but yeh cheez toh kabhi nahi badalti naa? Agar Raj museebat main hai, toh bachane _______ hi aayegi! ( fill in the blanks...😆)

Anyways, Mana......firstly thankssssssss for staring a new fic....which is also non-LrL based.....it'll be gud to read...that I knw for sure. Thanks for the PM as well.... Itne saare thanks ko ek hi jawaab...U R MOST WELCOME MY DEAR!

now pls continue soon....baccho ko zara bade kar do....U c I'd luv to fall for Raj all over again n again n again n............ahh lets stop here.😉😉 hey bhagwaan! nahi....main itne jaldi nahi bada karne waali unko😛

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiiii mana..... hi yogitha!!

u started another RN fic....wow!!!!!! .....so nice....n that too raj is there in the first update ........toooooo good. Arey tumhare liye toh usse 1st UD mein rakha hai! 😆

par is baar tum naina ko nahi raj ko rulaya na .....kitna dara hua tha.....ye huda ko main chodungi nahi.....stupid huda.... Ab koi na koi toh royega hi naa! 😛

a cute little girl came to rajs rescue....wo naina hi hai na. Tumhe kya lagta hia???

its an amazing part dear 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a lot! 😊

thanx for the pm yaar ...waiting for the next part.....hope u post it soon