Tu Jaane Na (AR Abhinik Arjuhi FF)Imp note pg 27 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi2

heyaa hi radhika

first off all congrats for this new ff of yours ,
well as per the start , intro is interesting and i just loved the characters a lot , hmm it sounds interesting , armaan being a reserved type and riddhima being opposite to him ,
would love to read it, please doo try and write over this soon
would be waiting to read ahead in this ff
take care and haa please doo add me in your pm list
lots of love
simi



hey simi...thanks for commenting...would durely pm u wenever update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: armaankideewani

Hey Radhika! Sneha here! :) Really nice intro! :D Cant wait to read more!! Please pm me! thanks! :D



hey sneha....thanks for ur comments....would surely pm u wen update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: karangrover4eva

Heyy hunni.....very nive intro......loved to heaps.........plz keep writing......i'll definatly read it.

love yukti



heya yukit di...thanks for commenting....will continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kash_sajan



heya yukit di...thanks for commenting....will continue soon...

welcome hunni 😊😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey, great char sketch!!!!
add me 2 ur pm list pls!
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Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

Hey, great char sketch!!!!
add me 2 ur pm list pls!



ofcourse...thanks for commenting....😊
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thanks for commenting...would pm u wen update😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i luv ur ff..plz do pm me wen u update..
nikita
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Originally posted by: silentangel

hey i luv ur ff..plz do pm me wen u update..

nikita



hey nikita would surely pm when update....😛😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey frndz...dis is radhika....🤗.a heart felt thanks to all of u commented....n to dose also who pressed d like button..😊😛...so her i go...enjoy reading...😊

Scene 1: at the Malhotra Mansion

A girl who is almost dressed enters d room. When she sees another girl sleeping she screams.

Girl: Riiiiddddhhhiiimaa.!!!!😡😡

Ridz: huh..wat happened??? Why r u screaming like u r going to hell.??(laughs)😆😆

Girl: yeh mazak ka time nahi hai. Tum abhi tak so rahi ho see the time it's already 7:30 am

Ridz: I know nikki but hum logon ko 8:30 am nikalna hai, full 1 hour is left, don't panic .just chillax !! I hope tumhe aur 1 ghanta nahi lage ga .tum pure half an hour se ready ho rahi ho (says while laughing)

Nikki: (while sitting on d bed in anger)tum yeh mazaak band karogi n meri thodi help kar dogi...😡

Ridz: huh wat..??

Nikki: tu bas ready ho jaa warna hum late ho jaayenge jab hum pehle din late ho jaayenge toh docs ko hum impress kaise karenge aur phir..(was interrupted by Ridz)

Ridz: bas bas !! Itna kafi nahi hai kya...??itna tension legi toh tu mujhe bhi heart attack aa jaayega. (starts laughing but stops wen she sees angry luks of nikki)😆😆

okay baba teri ek tension kam kar deti hoon.

Nikki: matlab..??😕😕

Ridz: matlab I'm getting ready samjhi (gives a pat on her head n goes to d bathroom)

Nikki: yeh ridzi bhi na ..!!! itna chill attitude se yeh ek din musibat mein phasegi.

Achcha chalo main toh ready ho jaaon.

Nikki after combing her hair in her room goes downstairs while ridz quickly takes a shower and put on black pants and a pink cute top

Ridz after getting ready goes downstairs, hav her breakfast and both of dem leave for Sanjeevani

Scene 2: in the car on the way to Sanjeevani

Ridz: yaar nikki, kitna mazaa aayega na. new frndz, new environment, and ya woh .arrey yaar uska naam kya hai

Nikki: kiska..??

Ridz: arrey tera best frnd.....

Nikki: kaun Armaan...??

Ridz: haan Armaan it would grt fun na...!!

Nikki: Oh my god phir se Armaan...yaar jabse tujhe uske bare mein bataya hai, tu uske peeche paagal hi ho gayi hai. Voh itna bhi kkhas nahi hai...

Ridz: nahi yaar, usme kuch toh baat hogi kyunki.

Nikki: kyunki meri paagal cousin Ridzi uske peeche jo paagal ho chuki hai

Ridz: nahi yaar main uske peeche paagal to nahi hoon....but main dekhna chahti hoon ki voh kaisa hai..??

Nikki: voh toh tujhe apne aap maloom chal jaayega....

Chalo.....hum log Sanjeevani aa chuke hai...

Ridz: chalo u move in main car park kar ke aati hoon......

Nikki: den jaldi aa i'll be waitng for u at d nurse station.....

Nikki goes inside the hospital while Ridz park the car.

Precap: girls meeting dere collegues and other docs. Wat will happen wen ridzi meets armaan n nikki meets Abhimanyu...??? Will they be frndz or enemies??

So frndz dis was Part 1...hope so u all liked it.....criticisms will be appreciated...plz comment frndz.....n ya silent readers plz press the like button😛

Wid luv

radhika


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