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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
yaar ff r nt that nice jitna tum dono usko bata rahe ho !!!!!!!!!!!!!
u making me blush really n pari the update that sim has send u has third chapter missing .......
n i read it whole yesterday believe me its confusing n is nt that good
n pls pls don't get ur hopes high i am not that good
mallika loves me too much isiliye meri tareef karti rehti hai u know!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: dolly18

yaar ff r nt that nice jitna tum dono usko bata rahe ho !!!!!!!!!!!!! just shut up and keep quiet vo bahut achhi hai !!!!!!!!

u making me blush really n pari the update that sim has send u has third chapter missing ....... I have given it to her after editing
n i read it whole yesterday believe me its confusing n is nt that good ........... Tujhe kuch nahi pta to tu chup reh !!!!!!!
n pls pls don't get ur hopes high i am not that good
mallika loves me too much isiliye meri tareef karti rehti hai u know!!!! U dont kow us dolly !!!!!

Aisi batein kam bola kar jis se tere murder honhe ke chances badh jayen !!!!! Waise bhi u r not updating for so much time and I bet u r on hit list of several people !!!!! First being me !!!!! Isliye chup reh !!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: simar456

Aisi batein kam bola kar jis se tere murder honhe ke chances badh jayen !!!!! Waise bhi u r not updating for so much time and I bet u r on hit list of several people !!!!! First being me !!!!! Isliye chup reh !!!!!

me second 🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: dolly18

awwwwwwwww pari i i....... i mean ....i am really......
u r soooooo. i mean i want to .... i mean ... i ...i no really i was just saying
crap 4get it i am talking rubbish
how u people can even expext an understandable response after all this

for the very first time in the history
ms. brahmjot dont have any words to speck!!!!😆
ha ha love u jaan!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: --Pari--

for the very first time in the history

ms. brahmjot dont have any words to speck!!!!😆
ha ha love u jaan!!

Welcome to the EIGTH wonder of the world and FIRST of the universe !!!!!!!!!!! Tu dekh dolly hum tujhe bolne layak chhodenge hi nahi !!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: --Pari--

for the very first time in the history

ms. brahmjot dont have any words to speck!!!!😆
ha ha love u jaan!!

are yeh to maine socha hi nahin
lols guess u people can make me do anything
😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Ok guys I have extended this ss to three parts it was apparently not getting completed in one sorry 4 that n really sorry 4 the delay in update here is the update

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Mayank= gunjan. Tujhe kaise pata is ladke ka naam??? U said….u didn't know him..

Gunjan=== I ….i… no mayank actually I just thought that the name samrat suits him best..

I looked up at him embarresed .. he was shaking his head at me…

Mayank= gunjan u should sleep … u need rest badly … go to my office n make urself comfortable there .. I'll remain with this guy here…

Gunjan== no no .. heis about to come around .. u just said that .i can't leave now

Mayank= yes u can .. believe me he'll still remain out of it 4 a few hours ,, u go n catch some sleep … go or I'll have to take up strong measures..

Gunjan== ok ok I'll go just bring me coffee first , my head is spinning..

Mayan== r u fine?

Gunjan== ya I guess so.. just a coffee it'll do wonders to me . go

Mayank raised an eyebrow in suspicion to me..i smiled at him assuringly, wishing with all my heart that he did not see the false note of the smile in my eyes,,

He got up from the bench n made a move to go … stopped near the doorway n looked at me..

Mayank= gunjan I have never seen u like this b4 ..

Saying so he departed … it took me few minutes to make my eyes stop gazing towards the door.. I sighed .. mayank was right I have never b4 behaved like this b4 I have never gone so crazy b4…

I looked at samrat again…yes he was samrat ..insane as this believe was ..i had no doubt that it was true …..

I took samrat's hand into mine again n shivered .. his hands were too cold..

I started massaging it up to warm it .. I was making a little progress..

I got up

Stole a glance at the door again..

"what if mayank walked in now????

No he can't he has gone to make coffee hasn't he…

N he'll be using his coffee machine….

His coffee machine was a little like him … complicated … so there was no chance that he was going to return b4 half an hour"…

I smiled bend 4ward n kissed samrat's forehead then proceeded to his cheek .. he smiled.. or I thought he did…..

"Gunjan u r being slap happy … u need sleep"

A voice in my head spoke sharply to me …

I looked at samrat again… I loved this boy this stranger n he would love me too .. when he is awake then he'll marry me n we'll have kids,,,,,

"stop it gunjan !!!! just hear what rubbish u r talking … go n sleep plsssss"

The voice shouted at me again ….

I sighed .. I should sleep …..i was actually being sleephapy….

The place looked beautiful… I has always loved these beaches ,,, the vast blue ocean stretching far n wide in front of me n the sun preparing to dive in the vast sea , making its colour change from blue to orange to purple to grey n then to black…..ha I so loved this place..

But what was I doing here??? Wasn't this the place of my childhood??? My grandma's country ,, me n di always used to visit it in our summer vacations … but these outings were stopped after my grandma died … I was 13 then … but what was I doing here now???

Giggling laughter of two children , two little girls specifically, distracted me….they looked familier …. I laughed as one of them made a splash of water towards the other n drenched her…

I was enjoying their game much more then they seemed to …. I felt my boming laughter echoing across the sea .. bt the kids didn't notice me… strange .. I knew those girls but how??????

"nupur … gunjan ab bas karo … chalo ghar jana hai"

"dadi ma bas thodi der aur plssssss"

"nupur masti nahin … chalo ghar chalo "

I froze in my tracks .. I remembered these girls now .. the one with long dark here was nupur my elder sister my di … the one with wispy hair n specks was was me……

As soon as the realization hit me I knew I was dreaming .. this was my dream ,,,, a dream which had taken me to my childhood days .. but why what was the point…

I saw the two girls getting up from the sand n moving back to their grandma to my grandma reluctantly …

Gunjan was I was sobbing … throwing a tantrum I guess

"gunjan stop being a kid will u???"

"but I am a kid"

Saying so I started howling ….di snikered beside me…

I was attracting attention of other people on beach … they eyed me lovingly .. I had been cute when I was small…

I noticed a boy standing not that far from me.. unlike others he was scowling at me …

"dadi mujhe abhi ghar nahi jana"

Saying so I rubbed my eyes n rushed back to the beach again … my eyes were wet that made my vision blurred .. I didn't notice the high tide n kept on running in its direction,,,

When the wave collided wth me it knocked my breadth out of me….

It felt sharp and cold n piercing ..

I wanted to shout but just gurgles came out…

This was so pain ful I gasped for breadth …

Someone was yanking me from behind… dadi????

Save me dadi pls I am sorry I won't come here ever again.. again no voice came out,,, I felt my head spinning ,,my nose making sniffling sounds ,,, everything was going dark around me ..

The yanking grew harder just as the things grew harde around me …

I knew I was going to die,,, but I was just a kid…

I will sleep now … its not that bad ,, I love sleeping….

……………………………………………………………………………………………

……………………………………………………………………………………………

The sharp jabs across my cheek pained he… I opened my eyes or tried to open them,,,

"hello gunjan ,, chashmish r u fine???"

This was a strange voice ,, a melodious one.. a harsh tensed out melodious one…

I recoganised this voice ,it was of the boy across the street , the one who had been scowling at me.. I didn't knew his name .. but he called me chashmish .. how dare he???? He didn't even know me…

"thanks samrat 4 saving her ,,, she is so stupid,, "

Dado was she here .. bt who is this samrat ???? is this that scowling boy the one that called me chashmish ????

The scene changed got blurred actually ,,, but they sharpened again…

It was summer now not the rainy season like last time….

This was my gran's garden …. Another summer vacation…

"chashmish mujhe kuch samajh ni aa raha… yeh maths .. I hate it"

"of ho samrat it's a simple factorial sum ,,its easy "

"ya ya its wasy 4 u chashmish nt me"

"don't call me chashmih"

"chashmish chasmish chashmish "

"u awwwwww

"CHASHMISH OUCH r u ok ???"

"r u hurt"

"no not much"

"u r stupid why did u keep ur hand on those pricks"

"u were going to fall on them "

"so???"

"u would have got hurt if I didn't keep my hand on them "

"now u r hurt stupid!!!"

The scene dissolved again …bringing me to another summer no to winter .. it was chilly outside the window … but was chillier inside … mush more chillier …

I their on the bed was lieing the dead body of my gran… she lay still n fragile n lucid looking … no one could have said she was dead then .. she was just sleeping.. I sniffed into my collor..

A warm arm hugged me around my shoulders …..

"its ok chashmish its fine really"

I sniffed more n within minutes started sobbing into his chest .. he patted my back awkwardly …

"its ok gunjan .. it'll be over soon .. they r taking her away now.. she'll be fine now n so will be u"

I so the whole of my gran's funerel … I knew this was a dream but it was becoming terrible … my eyes seemed blurred .. may be because of the tears ….

I banged into some one

"watch kid where u r going!!!"

"sorry sir"

"its ok kid itok … go to ur parents n walk carfully there is this barbed wire lieing along the side"

I walked past the man … this time I tried to walk carefully but my feet felt too big for me .. I stumbled

Someone caught hold of my arms n yanked me upwards again… n I banged into his chest ,,,

"chashmish pls I told u its all going to be fine … here take this hankey n wipe off ur eyes"

I didn't move .. just stood there hugging him and wetting his sweater ….

The scene changed again …. This time to a more recent one …….

I was walking along the pavement ,, tears of resentment bloating my face … I had just resigned from my present job … the boss had wanted to use me … I had slapped him hard across his face n stuffed my resignation into his mouth … I was angry so much that I could have burned that idiot , my boss alive n would have danced around his pyre….

In my abbreviated state I didn't notice the horns being honked behind me …. I was too abgry n upset to notice anything …

But a large horn sound made me flinch ..n I saw the truck it was too much near me,….

I shrieked n covered my face.

"HEY NOOO"

The next thing I knew was that I hit across something hard I quickly got up n saw around… there was a crowd people every wher ….just a few feet from me on the centre of the lane was a boy .. covered in blood from head to toe…

I recoganised him now he was

SAMRAAAAAAAAAAAT…….

The shriek was too loud I tried to stifle my hysteresis by shoving my fist in my mouth ,,,, I knew that boy he was samrat my samrat … my child hood buddy ..the one I haven't seen again from the age of 13… the one who had again n again saved me from accidents amall n big both … hurting himself too sometime in return…

I rushed out of mayank's office towards room no 1610 … his room

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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
wow that was so good .do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
OMG dolly!!!! this part was sooooo gud yaar!!!! loved it!!! sam and gunjan were childhood frnds..OMG!!! can't wait for sam to regain his consciousness!!! awesome yaar!!!
plsss continue sooooon!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
terribly good.........
loved the part........
update the next part soon plzzzzz

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