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Posted: 15 years ago
W O W!!! Wonderful Outstanding Work!!! 😊😊 & koi itnaaaaaaaaa bada update likhta hai kya???? It took me actually more than an hour coz main breaks mein pad rahi thi. But thanku soooooooo much for finally completing this ss. anyway, coming to the update, it was too too too too beautiful. & u undoubtedly included every emotion from comedy to romance to anger.

Well mujhe padke bahut time ho gaya hai, lekin mujhe kuch kuch cheeze bahut pasand aayi. Like the monkey dance 😆 oh god this was truly roller coaster, then mayank gunjan hug outside sam's ward, mayank telling sam abt his full fledged improved hand and eating on his own - tht entire scene, mayank's anger on samrat when he kinda doubted gunjan's love & of course father-son reunion & of couse ofcourse the confession.

Everything was very nicely written. Bas ab is update ko mujhe sace karna baaki hai(i told u na tht i m actually saving ur ss).

loads of love
vinu


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Posted: 15 years ago

superb update.just too good.

loved this update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome yaar dolly!!!! what an ending!!! loved it yaar!!!! it was sooo soooo gud!!!!! u write damn well yaar!!!! hope u wud hav continued this story bt the end was fantastic!!!!!! keep it up!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ahemmmmmmmmmmmm.....🤢 * 🤢 *🤢 * 🤢 *🤢 * 🤢 *🤢 * 🤢 *🤢 * 🤢 *🤢 * 🤢 *..i cant stay wat is my reactions now dolly....i am on the ground dead like anything...in fact i would like to make a standing ovation with full appluase..first👏...next i would like to bow down in front of u and praise u in countless ways...😳😳👍🏼..but the most biggest gesture i want to do to u my lttle sweetie is...hug u from the bottom of my deepest soul and say
" B R A V O !! !! !! " 😛👏
I mean ..wat was this..a true trance for me into a world of dreaminess yet pure reality in front of me yaar...i was in complete awe and wonderstruck..reading each emotion..each expression..each line...filled with everything...sammy's feelings..his madneess ovwr chashmish..mayu's thoughts and dialogues..nup and suhani acting...all the masti..really dolly...i dnt knw...lekin yeh tum kaha se seeke..itna bakhubi se likhne...ur a true marvel i must say...that was the most precious and closest confesion of sajan i will always remember on my mind and heart forvever...thanx yaar!!
ur a brillant writer and script thinker...u really ...again i am saying this...must apply for writing novels..and stories..tumhare naam zarroor roshan hogi..i promise u!
want to write more..lekin dear..thoda jaldi mein hu...baad mein phir se aaongi..tab tak mein ek baar aur padeke aathi hoon..tumhare la jawab fiction..nahi true sajan story for me!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aahana86

Hey Doll 🤗

wow yaar loved it hmm so atlast Sam reunites with His Dad & SaJan Kiss too 😍 😳

Now Update ur other FF soon as well we are dyin 2 know what happens thr as well hon

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks dii for replying i am so happy that u l.iked it .. ya i'll update the ff soon promise ....
lov u loads
dolly😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samratrocks

it was AWESOME

DO CONTINUE ...PLZ!!! LOVED IT.....




awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hina thanks sooooooooooooo much fot this ... u always make me blush
thanks dear so much 4 reading this ss of mine and replying so kindly....
love uuu i am so glad u liked it ..
sorry hina i can't continue it ... it was meant to be a short story ... i'll miss it terribly still life goes on ....
love u hina
and thanku 4 replying
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_monaya_fan

1st tel me wat do u xpect...............agar link nhi bheji na .......................................sochne k liye dimag nhi milegi

tu mujhe bas humeashan dhamaki hi dena .. ok sabse pehle ... i am sorry filahal maine teri update read nahin ki .. kya karun time nahi mil raha .. uggggggggggggghhhhhh
i hate studies ,,, i am dieing to read it and pakka promise i'll read soon n comment
aur haan tu sun i lov u loads
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

W O W!!! Wonderful Outstanding Work!!! 😊😊 & koi itnaaaaaaaaa bada update likhta hai kya????

main likhti hun na!!!!!!😆
It took me actually more than an hour coz main breaks mein pad rahi thi. But thanku soooooooo much for finally completing this ss. anyway, coming to the update, it was too too too too beautiful. & u undoubtedly included every emotion from comedy to romance to anger.
thanku soooooooooooo much vinu .. u r a sweetheart really love u ... thanks 4 enjoying the update and tha ks for reading it and thanks 4 commenting
Well mujhe padke bahut time ho gaya hai, lekin mujhe kuch kuch cheeze bahut pasand aayi. Like the monkey dance 😆
actually that day my brother was jumping around the house like a monkey ..so i got motivated and imagined sammy doing that.. u know na how wild my imaginations can get lols....
oh god this was truly roller coaster, then mayank gunjan hug outside sam's ward,
that was somthing i wanted in serial u know jija saali bond just like sammy and nups ????
mayank telling sam abt his full fledged improved hand and eating on his own - tht entire scene, mayank's anger on samrat when he kinda doubted gunjan's love & of course father-son reunion & of couse ofcourse the confession.
awww confession was my fav part i was just imagining it ... so wrote that
thanks vinu soooooooooooooo much 4 liking this... u rock baby ..

Everything was very nicely written. Bas ab is update ko mujhe sace karna baaki hai(i told u na tht i m actually saving ur ss).
really thanks vinu sooooooooooooooooo much lov u

loads of love
vinu


Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

superb update.just too good.

loved this update.

thanks soooooooooo much 4 liking it dear ... and relally really a big tha nks 4 replying ... lov u
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: drishti_sajan

awesome yaar dolly!!!! what an ending!!! loved it yaar!!!! it was sooo soooo gud!!!!! u write damn well yaar!!!! hope u wud hav continued this story bt the end was fantastic!!!!!! keep it up!!!

thankssssssssss so much dear 4 liking it ,,, i wanted it too conyinue but it was meant to be a short story so i stopped it there... i'll miss this one the most ...
thanks soo much dear 4 ur kind reply
lov u
dolly

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