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Originally posted by: zoya_me

awesome update...just simpy loved it....plzzzzz continue soon

Originally posted by: samratrocks

wow...loved ur writing seriously dear!!!!! plz keep writing....u r simply rocking and awesome at that!!! keep updating...

Originally posted by: princessyashika

Ok my jaan i am back from the college...the exam was nice but your update was
nicer...nicest and mindblowing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what do i say to u my jaan....
u are an ultimate rockstar!!! 👏
u know dolly dont know how do u manage this....but each and every word of your update created an image in my mind....created the sounds of the waves....the prick that samrat felt to save gunjan....the whole blood bathed accident site....u know dolly u r one writer i have seen who doesn't need a camera to display emotions...whose words and thoughts are magical enough to create a mesmerizing effect....to take us earth bound creatures to the ninth cloud!!! 😛
and just cant tell u dolly how much i loved that the part is gonna extend somewhat more.....coz as far as u r concerned...the bigger the better...rather .the best!!!!! cant tell u dolly how much i am dieing to see sammy being concious...hope he gains that soon...and shares a some words with his childhood pal!!!! so next time dolly do come up with even a longer update...and
keep writing and making us mad with your gr8 artworks!!! just remember no one can beat u in this art....and it is a real talent u have...keep nurturing it by writing more and more so that we can all go crazy over what we read...thinking is this actually possible...can something be actually so so so mindblasting!!!
Ok dolly bye for now!!! dont need 2 mention but will be eagerly awaiting your next update!!!so come as soon as possible!!!

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

doly yaar
emin itna jyda kho gayi story mein that i forget that i just put forget everything
the memory ,the drems .....
i just love it
dollyt waiting for the next part soon

Originally posted by: --Pari--

first ...let me ask u some questions........................ye san tumhare deemag me kahan se aata hain.........aur jese bhi aata ho.........how can u express it????...........I mean u know what is the best compliment to u??...............I can see each and every scene infornt o fmy eyes....................I can feel it.............and thats ur sucess!!!!!!! I can develop the entire scene in my mind.................ur way of expressing it and ur word choise, symbolization, all .................................................AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love it jaan!!!...............ok so they r chilhood frnd hun...........loved the scnne when she kiss himon forehead!!!.......blusshing.............and those old memories.....................awww too cute and januable!!!!!!!!!............loved them to the core!!!!!!!!!!!!! awwwwww m gonna kill u for not finishing it!!!!!!!.............m so eager to read the last one..............but yah on the other hand ........m saD!!!........its gonna finish!!!!!!😕😕.................m attached to it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....................I have not started Mumbai blast yet..........want to but...........study is not letting me do it................but hum bhi kisise kam nahi...........study ki to esi ki tesi😆😆😆

ha ha .......................yap me aur simi tumhari bolti badh karne wale hain...........par isme sab se zyada nuksaan bhi toh hamara hi hoga na................so program cancled.....................esa karenge ek tang vang tod denge phir likti rehna FFs bethe bethe ha ha

love u jaan

and love u simi!!!!!!

hugsssssssssssss

Originally posted by: dolly18

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww meri sleepy head ,,, lov ju lov ju lov ju ...

bas yehi kami baki thi ... ab tu bhi mujhe chaane k jhaad pe chadhana shuru karde ...

i am making my permanenr apartment above that channe ka tree ....

lols haan meri bolti tum dono ne band kar di ...

ek minute ek minute ... sam ko kiss gunjan ne ki ismein tu kyun itna sharma rahi thi??????

kya gadbad hai beta???????????

nahin nahin nahin meri tang mat todna pls pls pls ..varna jab mere ko mokamila to mein cv's ko tang se kaise marungi?????

and i love dancing on any wonderful scene b/w sajan or mayur or sayank ,,, ek tang pe dance karti ajeeb lagungi na.....lols

by pari lov u lov u lovu ... more then u can imagine,,

dolly😳