~the bride-to-be~ AR/AK/RM/AA pt3 pg11

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monika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

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simran1285

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

WOW Hinu 3 in 1!! Ek lo do muft....I love it!!

The intro was great can't wait to read more.

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Sunaina

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Posted: 15 years ago

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heyyy hina !!...

a new fic... cool.. !! :)

hmm... the title is interesting... and so is the first part...

muski, the hyper and anxious one.. and riddhima the calm one, trying to find a way to sneak inside... that was nice.. their convo was cool :)

rahul, a model...hmm.. never thought of him in that role.. gonna be interesting to see him in that role ;) and his convo with ridzi was nice :)

armaan and kripa... umm...together, as in a couple,.. hope not... her bossy nature was cool :)

and then AR face-to-face...awaiting the next part to see how she reacts ;)

and this part had AA and angad mssing.. when will they come into the picture...??.

btw..me liking this fic already... and hoping for a daily update ;)

thanks for the pm...

continue soooooooooon :D

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 15 years ago

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Reine

@Reine

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

hey Hina di,

I really like this!

Armaan with Kripa? He is not getting married to her right? LOL I dont think he is. haha

Nice part so far. Waiting for your next update which I hope will be tom. :D

Thanks for the PM!

Cheers,

Sakshi =]

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

thanks so much guys
your comments made my day
and like i had promised i have wrtten up the next part and will post shortly :)

thanks again

luv
Hina

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Harjot.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Ohh! I LOVED IT!! So excited to read ahead!! Armaan-Kripa are getting married!! I'v always thot they'd make a good couple. LOL Ridhima's character is soooo funny and awesome and Muskaan..LOL Rahul..a model...cool!!

Update soon....waiting for Angad's entry.

PM me whn you update!

Luv,

~JOT~

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Robin

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

:D yay!
wicked concept di...not quite sure what the relationships are yet...but its pretty exciting!
a wedding exhibition?! never been to one...not sure it would be my cup of tea lol but with these 8 couples thrown in, im sure im gonna love this!
looking forward to it :D

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Hi!

I am Prasanthi. (ps introducing myself.. coz you seem to have forgotten me. so...)

That was a cool start! Loved the Armaan's qustion at the last.. hahahaha. Are you sure that this will be mini... as in MINI?😲 Anyway I am here to stay for however long.

Please do count me in for further reads.

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Hina

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Posted: 15 years ago

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part 2:

" just ignore him Muski ..." whispered Riddhima and hurriedly pulled Muskaan through the doors... although tempted to convey her rage across ,she tried to keep calm and avoided looking back at him ...
" Armaan !!! " reprimanded Kripa ... She had always worried over Armaan's lack of tolerance when it came to injustice of any size and kind...
" Kripa, didnt u see she cheated her way in ? " Riddhima heard him and so did Muskaan...
" dont even think of it Ridzie " Muskaan could sense her irk rising and feared she'd get into an unnecessary row...
" jerk ! why can't he just mind his own bl**** business " she hissed
" Ridzie yar ,dont let him ruin the mood now..." Muskaan steered her away from him
" arrgh some people ! ... I really pity that girl with him, poor thing doesnt realize what she's getting herself into... " faking a sympathetic pout she watched the couple walk hand in hand in the opposite direction ...
" dont talk silly Ridz , what do we know about them and why are we even discussing them ? " Muskaan's undivided interest in was the catwalk gre stronger by the minute
" u're right Muski ,he's just an attention seekeer and its best we dont give him any ...we have better things to do ..." temporarily cooling her temper ,she followed her best friend's advice and marched towards the catwalk ....

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" Armaan ,can we please get on with what we're here for ? "
" but Kripa ..."
" Armaan . please ? " she requested earnestly making him forget all for the moment...
" hmph ! yeh ok , lets find Angad then... "
" do u remember his stall number ? "
" sweetie, just call him ! isnt that easier? "
" ok ! "after a brief chat over the phone,she signalled towards the direction they needed to go in...

The event was already buzzing with anticipating brides and grooms working towards making their wedding the best ...the exhibitors had left no stone unturned in catering to all their needs right from the theme to the venue ,food ,entertainment ,photography and the works ,it was all available under one roof ...

While passing through a busy aisle , Armaan stopped abruptly
"Krip ,I think I just saw Atul ...but what would he be doing here ?" he wondered
" duh ! " was her spontaneous reply
" yeah I know... " he retorted " I know its a wedding planning place but ....champ ? here ??? " something seemed out of place ... but for the moment she couldn't care to know ...
" ok lets do this, u go join Angad and I'll find Atul ? " he proposed hoping she'd agree
" fine ! " she did and added "but dont be late , we have a lot to do today... "
saying so she made her way to Angad 's stall ... Angad Khanna ,a photographer by profession and a dreamer at heart ...Armaan's best friend and confidant....

~~~~~

"hey Atul " Armaan cheerfully greeted his long lost friend..
"Armaan ? ...its so nice to see u man, where have u been all this time? " Atul was delighted to see him there...
" wow champ, u've done so well for yourself, marketing director Atul Joshi eh ? " reading his business card ,Armaan patted Atul's back with appreciation ...
" yeah it was hard work but I'm glad I could finally make it to where I had always wanted to be... "
" thats great mate "
" so tell me what U do? and whens the big day ? u were gonna invite me werent u???
" haha ! of course champ,how could I not invite u "
*beep* beep * " just a sec" he pulled out his mobile from the back pocket
" Kripa ? ... alright ,I'll be there in two ticks " ending the call he said " champ I gotto go for now ,but I'll be back soon? ... got your number ..." waving the card he looked for the right way ..
" yeh no worries, gimme a buzz when u can and ....say hi to Kripa... "

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"Ridzie, can we please drop it now ? u know he was right , we did cheat to get in didnt we? " the grudge had unfortunately returned within moments of shooing away
" why do u fail to see that there was absolutely no need for him to poke his nose into matters that didnt concern him ..." Muskaan was getting tired of her complaints...
" yeah but .."
" but what Muski ?"
" umm the show...yeh the show is about to begin Ridz! ..." she had faith that the change in topic would work
" excited ? " she asked
" of course Muski, afterall Rahul's my b..... wait ,hang on " she stopped by a photography stall
" what now?"
" just a minute babe... is that too much to ask?"
"ok make it quick, I dont wanna lose the front row view ..." peering at the stage and the dense crowd around it ,Muskaan patiently waited for Riddhima...

"wow ! this is beautiful..." fascinated by the skills of the photographer ,she browsed through the entire collection ... being a photographer herself , she could appreciate the art and creativity in the displayed pictures...
" Ridzie the show begins in just ' 5 mins' ,hurry up now or we can always come back later " yelled Muskaan
"Muski I'll join u in a bit , save a seat for me please ? " Riddhima couldn't take her eyes off the pictures
" ok bye" Muskaan didnt think it was worth wasting any more time and off she ran to grab a good spot for herself and her distracted friend ...

~~~~~

" darn this customer ! why did she have to come now ! " grumped Angad watching someone closely observe his 'summer weddings' collection ...her face partially covered with her long silky tresses
" umm,I can cover for u if u like ... " offered Armaan
" u sure ? "
" yeh go ahead, I'm not much into that glamour stuff anyway ..." Angad didnt want to miss the chance to click some shots of the fashion show to add to his latest collection
" thanks Armaan, you're a star ..."
" yeh yeh ,cut the cr** and tell me what to do if she asks about something..."
" umm just get her to fill in this enquiry sheet and we'll contact her soon ?"
" yeh cool ! "
"I'll find Kripa then " he said collecting his camera
"yeh do that and make sure she returns happy and content..."
" I can only try ..."

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"Amazing !!! absolutely gorgeous ! " she browsed further through the album
" thanks " he smiled taking false ownership for the compliment ....
" err can I help you at all ?" he asked as instructed and noticed something familiar ...the pair of thick rimmed glasses reminded him of someone ...
" no thanks I'm fine..." she replied ,her head still dug into the thick sheets of the metallic album
"hmm ok ..." he shrugged and let her be alone with the pictures for a while...but soon his patience ran out and he started to query more

" so... when is the wedding?"

" 7th of January " she muttered

"Congratulations !"

" yeh thanks " she answered keeping it limited to mono syllables

" .... and err ... you...are the bride- to- be? "

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cheers for all the comments guys and thanks a lot for liking the concept
hope the picture now is clearer than before...
Happy Birthday Lakky !

love u all
315 nutterz

plz press the 'like' key if convenient 😊

Edited by hinanaziri - 15 years ago

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pickytg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

RESERVED HAI JI YE!! hmm hmm hmm!<br>

hehehehhee...okay JUST heard abt the new rule...so here goes, mera unedited comment hai, jo pehle mere spot main tha:

AGAIN third spot, zindagi bhar ka rog hai yeh :D (edited: hahahaha, chalo aik shikayat to door hui) hahaha, hinz apki ridz to meri tarah puri dheet hai :P but me likes tons, chalo dekhte hain aggay kia hota hai...i enjoyed it, a lot :) billkul mere type ki fic hai :) muaaah!!

Kiran!!

Edited by missypatel - 15 years ago

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