AR-RM-AbRidz: Dil ke Rishtey#2 pt-39-pg32/33-27/08 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Hey!!

Congrats on your new thread!!!!!!!



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Congo on new thread Nadz!!! 🤗



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congo for new thread
liked the parts on last post
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Hey guys, soooo sorry about the delay, I said Saturday but I forgot thanx to radz to remind me lolz! Btw guys im sooo sooo happy! Thank u very much for all the love and support guys! we have reached the second thread of my first full time FF😃 im so happy! im jst glad u all liked it, heres the next part😊


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=clvupT6qlmo[/YOUTUBE]

Part 31

Sanjeevani

Nikkita as usual is blaberring;

"wo saala abhigyaan kabhi itna sweet hojaata hai aur kabhi phirse kharoos" she says annoyed.

"seepak wo dawaai milli kya?"

"nahi doctor maine dekha par nahi milli" he replies.

"asuasual, tum log hamesha aise hi karte ho, kaam chor, main khud hi check karti hoon" she says annoyed and goes.

She was in the storeroom searching for the medicines when abhigyan comes there.

"ab yeh dawaai kahan hogi? I need it man" he says and she turns when she hears him.

"Yeh kharoos yahan kya kar raha hai?" she thinks annoyed "tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??"

"Oh no TUM! And remember its AAP not tum okay, im bigger then you" he says annoyed.

"Im bigger then u" she mimicks and gets back to finding her medicine while mutering "kharoos, aap… mera baap thori na hai ke aap kahoon" she says and he blocks his laughter and gets close to her, looking for is set of medicines in the same place.

"wahan dekhiye na SIR" she says annoyed, he smiles.

"Mei dawaai ka naam S se shuru hota hai and this is the S section" he informs her and she looks annoyed then jumps in joy as she finds her medicine "FINALLY" she mutters and just then they hear the door lock and lights off. They both get shocked and nikki gets frightened and holds abhigyans arm. He was just about to go shout but as she holds his hand he stops stunned and surprised by this… and the current that went through his body froze him in that position, he looked at her she was really fightened, he smiled and taps her back after a lot of struggle.

"relax kuch nahi hoga… im here… chalo jaakar dekhte hain" he tells her and she nodds, they walk to the door and realize it was locked, he shouts for a while then gives up.

"shit lagta hai chalagaya, jo bhi tha! And since this store room is far from all the wards I doubt koi bhi hoga yahan iss waqt" he infoms her and she looks worried.

"t…t…to iska matlab… hum…uh…yahan???" she gulps and he smiles and settles down next to the door leaning on the wall.

"hmmm… no choice" he grins, she looks irritated.

"Urrggghhh try to karo" she says annoyed.

"kya try karoon?? Im so tired me paas faaltoo ka time nahi hai to sceam at NO ONE okay, umhe try karma hai to karlo" he tells her and takes his phone out to call but realizes that since sanjeevani is sooo strict with rules only emergency calls are allowed, now he didn't wanna look like a full by calling ambulance or police so he starts playing a game on his phone irritating her further…. Nikki keeps knocking and shouting hen finally gives up an gives AG a killer look…

Ludhiana; In the garden;

Armaan-riddhima

At night armaan and ridzi sat in the swing outside… head on head, arm in arm, both staring in space…

"basket"

"hmmm"

"tum kya soch rahi ho?"

"humaari life ke baare me what else" she says casually, he gets up with a jerk.

"what about it?"

"itna shocked kyun ho rahe ho?" she asks annoyed.

"nahi… wo main… bas casually" he says embarrassed he himself didn't know why he was getting hyper.

"main bas yeh soch rahi thi ke humaari shaadi ke baad hum kahan rahenge?"

"What do you mean kahan rahenge? Obviously mere flat me duh"

"Oh ya… main soch rahi thi we shud buy a nicer and bigger house, you know like fairy tales…" she says dreamily and he feels bad.

"Hmm fairytales, but… mere paas abhi itne paise nahi hai basket, I mean ghar ke liye you know" he says and she feels bad and guilty.

"nahi armaan mera wo matlab nahi tha, ghar hum abhi nahi future me lenge…" she says but armaan was still upset, ridz holds his hand "uh… main wo… armaan tumhaara flat lovely hai, main to future ke liye…"

"I understand" he smiles and takes her hand and kisses it "ofcourse humaare kuch bache vacche hojaayein phir to we will need a big house to yes we will buy one okay" he says and she smiles.

"bacche vacche?" she asks with a raised eyebrow.

"haan I love kids"

"wow you love kids aur main suffer karoon acchi baat hai, to tum vaise kya karoge bacchon ke maamle me?" she asks with a grin.

He looks at her confused "main unke saath kheloonga, unhe jo chahiye hoga doonga… I'll…"

"Haan haan aur kya karoge?? Tum baby ka nappy change karoge, uska dood banaoge" she teases.

"Nappy… no way, nappy nahi basket"

"you have to" she says and gets up.

"No way basket please" he begs her.

She laughs and teases him, he chases her for a while then catches her from the back and they both stop… they feel nice but a current flowing through them, he kisses her cheek and she blushes… he whispers in her ear "will you marry me?" he asks again and she blushes.

"ofcourse" she says with a blush and he smiles.

"good to, tumhaare dad se kaun baat karega? Cause don't even expect me to do it" he leaves her and recalls his bitter words.

"Unse baat main khud karloongi, but lets not talk about all that right now, itne time baad we are one… I just wanna be with you… only with you" she says and they share a eyelock, she looks down after a while and hugs him.

They have a long passionate hug… it starts raining.

***********

Rahul-Muskaan

Muskaan was in her room, she was looking at her image in the mirror and smiling… blushing thinking about rahul… she looks at the taawiz he had given her before she left Mumbai. She kisses it "love you rahul" she says and hears a voice behind her.

"so I deserve the kiss na?" he says naughtily and she turns shocked.

"Rahul?? Rahul tum yahan?? Oh god pappaji ne dekhliya to problem hojaayegi, jaao na" she keeps talking so he goes and puts his finger on her lips.

"Shhhh… koi problem shroblem nahi hoga" he teases and she makes a face "muskaan… yaad hai jab maine pehli baar tumse confess kiya tha?" he smiles and she blushes and nodds… "aise hi sneak in kiya tha" he laughs and she blushes.

"Haan aur mujhe rulaadiya tha" she says and he smiles.

"Tum to har cheez pe roti ho" he teases "cry baby"

"tumne mujhe cry baby kaha??" she makes a face and he smiles, he holds her hand and takes her away.

"rahul koi dekhlega, kahan le jaa rahe ho??" she asks, but he pulls her out of the room and sneaks out.

"rahul pappaji" she almost shouts as she sees him, he pulls her in the corner with his hand on her mouth… they share a cute eyelock, he gets closer to her… she blushes… he gets closer and closer…

"rahul pappaji dekhlenge" she says and he grins.

"to dekhne do… tum meri hone waali wo ho" he winks and she blushes.

"MUSKAAN" he calls and rahul moves away with a jerk she laughs.

"ji pappaji?" she runs out and rahul gets annoyed.

Delhi

"wow bhabhi aaj to aap bohot extra khoobsurat lag rahi ho…" her sister in law teases and she blushes.

"thanks"

"waise bhabhi, papa aur mamma aapko waise bhi aapko pasand karenge" she says and abhimanyu comes in.

"haan meri ridzi hai hi itni khoobsurat ke pehli nazar me hi pyar hojaaye" he says as he comes and sits next to her and holds her from the shoulder, she blushes.

"oye hoye bhayya, ab bhabhi aagayi to chutki ko to bhool hi gaye hun, not fair" she teases and ridzi blushes more.

"oho meri chutki jealous horahi hai?" he says and goes to her and starts tickling her and playing with her like children they laugh and play while ridzi smiles at them…

After sometime:

"so aaj tum itni khoobsurat kyun lag rahi ho?" he teases and she blushes "let me guess, uss kiss ka glow right" he winks and she blushes more, he again sits and holds her from her shoulder.

"tumhaare mummy papa haan kahenge na?" she asks worried, he smiles and goes close to her and strokes her hair behind her ear and kisses her cheek.

"Tum mera pyar ho riddhima… koi kya kehta hai mujhe koi farak nahi parta" he tells her and she smiles.

Ludhiana: AR

It starts to rain, ridz looks up and smiles, armaan and her both enjoy the rain for a while then a moment comes when he gets totally smitten by her beauty… her hair wet, water drops on her face… they both stare at eachother for a while and then he comes to her, close and kisses her cheek… then they both close there eyes and get closer… finally he presses his lips with her… they have a loooong passionate kiss… (by now the rain had stopped) both of there first, finally when they move out they both feel embarrassed, she looks away blushing and he smiles at her, HIS FIRST KISS… he had saved it only for her, his dream girl!

He goes next to her and makes her look at him by the chin, she blushes and he smiles.

"tumhaari pehli kiss?" he questions and she blushes.

"hmmm" she nodds and he smiles.

"really?" he teases and she runs away blushing then after running a little distance she turns back to a smiling armaan, she blows a kiss to him and he catches it and blows one back, she catches and puts it in her heart… he smiles.

RM

After her dad leaves she goes to find rahul, he was sitting upstairs at the terrace. She sees him sitting there and blabbering.

"jab dekho koi na koi aajaata hai… uske pappaji ko bhi issi waqt sab kaam yaad aata hai? He thinks annoyed, she smiles and goes to him.

"ek kiss dene me bhi itne nakhre" he says annoyed and she blocks her laughter and goes to him from the back and hugs him, he is totally taken aback by this gesture… he turns and looks at her confused, she smiles.

"sorry" she says and he smiles.

"raat ko buddhu ghar ko lauta" he teases and she pinches him then turns away.

"jaao mujhe baat nahi karni tumse huh" she turns away and he laughs.

"just kidding yaar" he says and she looks irritated.

"haan last time bhi tumne mujhe ghadi kaha tha" she pouts and he laughs.

"Sorry" he goes and hugs her from the back.

"nahi chaiye" she says annoyed and he kisses her cheek.

"Sorry" he says again and she gets embarrassed.

"rahul, koi dekhlega" she says blushing.

"to tum meri hone waali wo ho" he says.

"hone waali wo???" she laughs and he smiles.

"waise ab meri kiss tumpar udhar" he says and she blushes.

"chalo abhi do, mujhe udhaar dene ki aadat nahi" he teases and she blushes.

"whatever" she says with attitude and starts to walk away but he catches her hand and pulls her back, now they were very close, he was grinning naughtily and she was blushing a lot.

"meri kiss" he says grinning and she blushes.

"aur kabhi" she says teasingly and moves but he pulls her back, now her back was facing his chest… he kisses her cheek again, he puts her hai back and kisses her neck… she closes her eyes inhaling the heat… he stops and moves away, she looks at him surprised.

"jaao muskaan… apne kamre me jaao" he says and she looks confused "tum itni khoobsurat lagogi to main apne aap ko loose karloonga" he says and she blushes.

"I trust you" she says and holds his hand, he looks at her with passionate eyes "but I don't trust myself" he says and she smiles.

She goes close to him, tip toeing she kissed his cheek, he smiles and they share a eyelock.

"I love you" she says and they hug.

AbhiRidz

"tumhe koi ki tension lene ki zaroorat nahi okay" he tells her "tum mere liye sab kuch ho, I love you and no one can separate me from you" he tells her and she blushes.

"thanks"

"pyar me no thanks and no sorry okay! Pyar me aankhein hi sab kehdeti hain" he says ans she smiles.

Later his dad comes…

"abhimanyu I didn't expect this from you, abhi yeh middle class larki no way! Isse humaare society me kitna mazaak uraayenge log you know" he says annoyed.

"ofcourse abhi how can you think about this? Tum jaante hona Mr. mehra ki beti Mishti se tumhaari baat chal rahi thi"

"Dad wo middle class larki mere liye life hai! I love her and I don't care aaplog kya sochte ho! And mom mishti ke saath baat AAPNE chalaayi hai and I am not bound to follow that okay! Abhi aap bahar aakar usse except karo warna…."

"Abhi sochlo, uss larki se shaadi karne keliye tumhe yeh ghar yeh jaayidad chorni hogi and I don't want that" he says.

"dad if you don't except her I don't mind leaving this house and your money" he tells them angrily.

"ya right do din me thak jaaoge, itne paise kamaana aasan nahi hai! Pocket money ke bina tum kuch nahi ho"

"dad I am a qualified doctor now and I don't need your pocket money, I can afford to look after my wife" he says angrily and starts to leave but stops at the door and turns to his angry and arrogant parents "agar aap kuch waqt nikaal kar jhooti much sirf meri khushi ke liye usse except karlenge to mujhe accha lagega" he syas with tears "itne saalon aapne mujhe kabhi wo pyar to nahi diya but sirf yeh ek cheez karke you can repay all that! Please, main aapse kabhi aur kuch nahi maangoonga, just this one thing Riddhima ko khushi hogi" he says and leaves with tears, Ridzi is worried there outside and so is shashank getting hyper why his parents went directly to the room… abhi comes outside with his face down.

"abhi sab theekh to hai na?' ridzi asks worried.

Armaan-Riddhima

Riddhima is in her room blushing, she was tossing and turning when her phone goes beep-beep, she looks and reads it's a message.

A: kya kar rahi ho?

R: doh raat ko son eke ilaava aur kya karoongi?

A: accha I thought you were thinking of me!

R: yaa right mere paas bohot time hai na

A: ab jhoot matt bolo I knw you were thinking of me and thatuh… Kiss

She blushes: wo main… okay ya I was, btw hum sanjeevani kab jaa rahe hain?

Armaan gets a lil upset: sanjeevani? But I was fired!

R: come on armaan you know Dad! You have to come!

A: no way! Im not gonna come, tumhe jaana hai to jaao

She reads it and gets annoyed "kya itna bhav khaa raha hai? She calls him.

R: armaan u have to come, sanjeevani is our life man

A: basket you knw main apni insult nahi se sakhta, I will do whatever I can but not in sanjeevani.

R: okay heres the deal dad tumhe khud call kare?

A: I don't care

R: armaan nakhre matt karo okay

A: whatever (he smiles, so not bothered anymore, he had his basket)

They have a long chat about it but armaan doesn't agree.

Rahul-Muskaan

Muskaan recalls all there moments from the day they met and her wierd dreams… she blushes but then she remembers the part when he's father refused to except armaan, which meant she also wasn't welcome! She feels worried and bad… "she wouldn't ever want to separate a mother from her child! She couldn't marry rahul if his parents didn't agree! She thinks with tears in her eyes.

Rahul sat in his room and recalled there moments on the terrace, her kiss… he was sooo in love! He couldn't live with out her but now what, when he returns to Mumbai then what?? How would he fight with his god like parents, he had always respected them all his life, even promised his mom her choice bahu but then his love… they have to understand his love! "Otherwise…." he thinks upset.

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Okay guys, I hope you njoyed it! I know it wasn't great as usual lolz but I hope u liked it! If you did hit the LIKE button and do leave a comment!


Luv u all🤗

Nadz😳

Edited by nadz_J - 15 years ago
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Thanx that means soooo much😃 hope it doesnt dissapoint u😳
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LOVED IT TO THE CORE!!
Your writing just keeps getting better and better every update!
Can't wait to see more twist and turns...
RM have upcoming trouble to deal with...
I am adoring they passionate relationship..."Rahul is so in love"
A-R are cute..Abhi and Niks are well depicted as well
Update Soon and keep ROCKING!
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hey dear awesome and great part
love all the romantic scenes b/w couples
pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon
love ya
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this was great!! soo cuteee and romantic!!

continue soon please!!!
<3 Sab
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So Sweet & Romantic Thank You for this part,

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