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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
congo on the new thread!!
Reserved.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
NNAAAAAAAAHHHIIIIIII
kainathhh u cantttt do thiss to neeevvv
o myyyy jaaaaaaaann
thaaaatt pooorr kidddd!!!
whtt didd he eveerrr do to anyyonee?????
awwwwww naawwwwwwwwwww
*starts sobing uncontrollably*
i hateeee mayankk or beingg soooooooo careless!!
awwwwwww kainathh do sumthnggg
dontt lett my neev my shweetiee pie suffer tooooo lawwng!!
mwaahhzz
sindhya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33

Hey kainath,

I am soooooooooooo glad that you have updated yaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyy.
But no no this can't be happening, omggggggg please say neev is fine. Kainath you have left us hanging in the air, oh noooooo when we would be ever get to know what will happen.
Coming to the update bit by bit, i loveddddddd Vikram's surprise and even more sweeter and fun was sonali's immediate reaction and oopsie the boys were around in the office, thankfully nups came to save the day for vikram and sonali hehe.
i loveddddddddd the coversation between mayank and CJ, she definitely seemed to be cross examining him rather just being there for a friendly visit as she claimed to have come for.
I really like the way mayank accepted that he loves nupur.
awwwwwwww the mum and nupur conversation was just the best , yay even Nupur has accepted that she lovessssssss Mayank. The conversation here was one of the most heartfeltttttttttttttt one ever man, i loveeeeeeee shilpa and i am truly proud of her and also of nups who would stand up and fight for her love, go girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awwwwwwww mayank and neev must be looking so cute both sleeping on the couch.
But now came the heartbeat stopper, what will happen, i so hope neev is fine.
This will certainly gave a very negative impact on the status of MN as neev's parents, though it will be unfair to compare annie and mayank as neev's parents on this basis but this incident wouldn't be taken lightly, i am so scared for neev and the repurcussions of this incident even if neev is fine.

pleaseeeeeeeeee tell us na that neev is fine at least.
amazinggggggggggg update kainath, keep it uppppppppp.
Do write soon,
Hugs.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
hey hun
congo on the new thread
the update was as always rocking, loved it to cores!
I hope nothing happens to Neev, i love that kid sooooooooooo much!
cont soon =D
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Hi,
I just read your story from start to finish on one go and I have to tell you that its really really awesome...

The chemistry and passion between Mayank and Nupur..
The care shown by the gang towards Nupur...
The one-in-a-million-museum-piece Sonali... 😆
Shilpa's great conniving mind.. 😉

and best of all,
NEEEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVVVV 😃
He reminds me sooooooooooooo much of Calvin (as in Calvin & Hobbes) what with his insistent questions and curiosity, his attachment to his stuffed dino, his penchant for mischief, his 'dislike' towards girls fearing cooties, 'kissing is yucky'...

Did I tell you that I just love him... 😃😃 I can just imagine Mayank and Nupur running behind Neev when he does his shaitani...

And when he asks how do babies come out of their mummy's tummy I was immediately reminded of an episode in Calvin where he asks his dad the same and his dad says that they buy them from Sears and assemble them but Calvin was bought at a special reduction sale from KMart... 😆

Keep going and good luck!
~Yeti

PS: Please dont hurt Neev....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Aww kainath
Again an awesome update.
Liked every single bit of it.
Loved mayu-CJ,Nupur-Moms Conversation.
But the sadest part was neev faced an accident.
Oh no i hope he will be fine.
plz dont do any harm with this little angle.
now i m very anxious about the action of DMP.
If they consider these incident then it may provide a bad impact on custody of neev by mayank.
but hope everything will b fine soon
Plz update soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
great part plz cont soon cant wait
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

congo on the new thread!
will comment later

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omg is neev gonna b ok???
stupid cute adorable kid!
did he have to go on the bike?
i really hope he's ok
here i was soo excited abt the coming confession
n then this happened!
anyways brilliant updt!
loved everything
ur a fab writer
eagerly waiting to read ahead
plz plz continue soon



Thank you soo much! Haha...stupid kid, definitely - but poor lil tyke was just curious :( Anyway...you'll find out soon what happens next :) I'm uploading the chapter soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: isha93

u r one of the most amazing writers i have ever come across. I am litterally about to cry thinking about what is going to happen to Neev and why do I get the feeling that because of this accident Neev's custody will be given to Annie. Please dont let that happen but plsssssssssss continue soon because i am dying to find out what happens next:)



Hi! Thank you soo much for the compliment! I just try my best to entertain all u amazing readers :) Aww...don't cry! Not to fret, you'll find soon enough what happens to Neev, Mayank and Nupur...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

first of all congratz on the new thread 🥳
secondly...yet again you've given us another flawless uodatee....
it was so awesomeee!!!!!!!!!
mayur love each!!! dey jus need to confess!!! 😳
awwwwww neev......plz dont let nythin bad appen to him!!! i loveeee him!!! annie better not win the custodyy... i hope this brings mayur closerr and not distance them...hope neevs okay!!
overall amazin updatee!!!
xxx



Thanks a ton! :D Of course Mayur love each other madly, fools just need tell it to each other, not just the rest of the world...sigh...all in due time, all in due time :)

And I'm posting the chapter soon, so you'll find out what happens next! :)

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