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archieeps

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Posted: 15 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: sanjana yadav
wow its so exciting loved it a lot
thanx for pm

Your welcome! Thanks for the review :)

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archieeps

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Posted: 15 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces
alas mayur confessed,😃,,,, loved the update and it was awesome,,👏,,,,👏,,,,,,,, no words.......👏

Hey, thanks a bunch for the review! I'm glad you liked it.. :D I'll try to update soon!

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archieeps

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Posted: 15 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: fariaa70
Amazing update.
Finally mayur confess their love.👏👏👏
👏And Benji and Uday r my hero of the Day.
Loved it.
Thanx 4 ur nice update.

Thank you sooo much! and yes, Uday and Benji always to the rescue... haha...as some of you rightly pointed out, they are indeed the desi Fred and George....lol... :)

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archieeps

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Posted: 15 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
i was jst about to sleep when i saw ur pm, n well i just had to read the chapter first! its a brilliant update!! i loved it soo much!
mayur's confession was great! tho i didn't expect it to b anything like this, it was just amazing!
n after this chapter uday, benji n rashmi walia r my heroes!
uday n benji rock! their idea is awesome!
n i can't believe im saying this, i felt like hugging rashmi!
thats a great idea she came up with!
i really hope mayur find the 4th witness soon n they get neev bak!
poor neev, annie is not at all a good mother!
she doesn't seem to know how to treat a child!
as i said i loved the updt
continue soon

Thank you soo much for the lovely review! I'm very very very happy u liked it so much :) I had to think a lot abt Mayur's confession....hopefully that turned out ok in the end...and Uday and Benji, what can I say - they always end up saving the day...haha...

Yes, Rashmi has become much more tolerant hasn't she? lol...but poor thing was bound by the ministry laws...at least she's trying to help out now! :)Hmm...the fourth witness...well you've got to wait for the next few chapters :)

And yes, Annie - the root of the problem...well her time will come, dun worry ;)

I'll try to update soon though! Thanks again!

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archieeps

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Posted: 15 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic
Ooooohhh Kainath!! Loved it so much.. i wish i could give a detail comment.. but i can't the way u write.. just makes me wanna continue.. not think and read an amazing story u have going : ) xSonia

Hi Sonia! Thanks a ton for the review! Aww...you flatter me :) Glad you like the chapter! I'll try to update soon!

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#126

kaitz.........🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗..........duniye ke saaaaaaaaare saaaaaaaaaare saaaaaaaaare thnx to u for finally givin this most awaited re-confession update............d bestest confession i've read in ny FF.....n hw wud it nt b d bestest.......aftr all its written by u........toh undoubtedly it has to b d bestest..........lovd each n evry bit of mayur re-confession........😳😳😳.........d way they started their convo....by tellin each other wht they hate them in each other..bt stil unable to hate each other.....then d way mayu xplaind who nups is actually......then tht moment when finally nups confessed 1st....n aftr tht most awaited moment in d confession...d kiss....n u xplained it super-perfectly d emotions n feelings both vr undergoin at tht time......sach mein meri aankhein bhar aayi....to c them finally 2gethr here...n sone pe suhaane ki tarah.....tht kisses he told b/w he'll nevr evr evr leave her.....
n finally hw he told n wanted nups to reduce his pain.........😳....
sach mein kaitz...thnxxxxx a zillion ton once again.....for givin these heavenly magical romantic mayur moments....🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗..................

i lovd d remainin part also....d way rashmi showd interest to help mayur gettin neev back....our rockin duo's(benji-uday) plan to trap annie.....evrythin....bt for me i lovd d 1st part the most...n its onli bcoz of tht this is my most most most fav update in ur ff.......😳🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗........plz continue sooooooooooon

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wind453

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Posted: 15 years ago

#127

awesome part
finally mayur confessed
loved benji and uday
hope mayur gets back neev
thanx for the pm
plz update soon

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Senny

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Posted: 15 years ago

#128

wow kainath i am totally at a lost of words, i am sooooooooooooo glad to see how beautifullly, sensibly and maturely you have taken the relationship of M and N forward and indeed of all the characters, we always get to see something new about them like a softer side of RW, although i never blamed her but this ministry and rules, well at times i agree that these laws if not put to proper use and lack of proper study of facts and analysis can lead to one of the most huge injustices in the world.

i lovedddddddd how N and M confessedddd and how they wanted to be in eachothers arms and wanted to get rid of their grief, awwwwww poor mayank and the way he asked nups to please stop him from thinking about him and how nups lets him cry in her arms made me cry so bad.

I am lovingggggggg RW and CJ, i am sure Vikram or someone will come up to help.

i am a big believer in destiny myself man. I loveddddddddddddddd the uday, benji and neev bits and the plans to bug Annie and the man.

i am deeply touched and respect you more and more for respecting your story, characters and their emotions. You are a genuius who is able to bring her thoughts out so clearly and with such an impact that hours after reading this i am thinking about it.

Bravo girl, keep it up!

all the best for work man.

miss ya kainath.

Edited by Senny - 15 years ago