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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow! awesome!!!!! 👏

plz continue soon!
waitin to knw wht happens next!
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thenarcissist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Hey guys! Here's part two. Sorry for the late update.

The Poetry Session : Part 2

Nupur's POV

Dia,where have you brought me?And why am I feeling the air in the theatre?"I said,feeling the blindfold on my eyes.

"Nupur,just walk straight.No questions."Dia was obviously irritated by the questions.

"Have we reached?"

"Yes.Just walk straight. I'll come in a minute."

"Where are you going?"

"I..um..I'm going to get some popcorn!See ya later!"

"Later?But..."

I realised that Dia had gone.

Mayank's POV

It was an hour left for Nupur and Dia to come.I checked everything a last time.Perfect.Now I only had enough time to learn the poem .I went to the table where Samrat was writing.

"Are you done dude?"

"Yes.I'm keeping it on the table.Don't forget to take it,okay?"

"Thanks Sam.I'll be ever grateful to you for this."

Samrat gave me his wide grin."Hey, what are friends for? Anyway, you are going to give us a treat, aren't you?"
"You bet!" And we both laughed.

"Hey,what's the joke?"Uday and Benji came in.They were helping me with the decorations.Uday had a paper in his hand.He kept his paper down on the table next to mine.

"Hey,shall I tell a joke?" Uday said. "NO!"We all shouted in unision. "Okay,fine,what's the need to shout!I'm going!"He left,taking his paper along with him. "I think we should leave too,benji.Anyway,Mayank has to learn the poem.

" And he needs some privacy too…you know!"Benji followed.Samrat smirked but soon surpressed his grin when he saw me glaring at him.

"Let's go now.Bye Mayank, enjoy your date!"

Now I was all alone in the room.I had never felt so calm and quiet. Except when Nupur would be in my arms, she would shy so much that she wouldn't utter a word.I smiled at the thought of her being surprised.Nupur loved surprises.She said they were like rainfall in the desert.they lightened up your boring life. Suddenly I felt a pang of guilt slip through me.She wanted me to write the poem, not Samrat. I was lying to her , and it always hurt me to do that."I'm sorry, Nupur. I promise,never again."

Sghing to myself, I turned to read the poem. The minute I looked at the paper, I got a 100-watt electric shock.
It wasn't the poem, it was Uday's food list.
Dumb guy! Can he do anything better than ruining my perfectly laid plans! Wait till I catch him! I won't leave him alive!
But will Nupur leave me alive when she finds her surprise without it's finale?

Nupur's POV

I walked ahead to find a door in front of me. I turned the lever and pushed the door open.I removed the blindfold and opened my eyes. And one thing I knew, was that when I would close my eyes, I would have captured the best sight in my life.

The room had no light, except for the candles glowing.They made the room even more radiant and serene and of course, romantic.I looked down to see a path of rose petals leading me ahead. I walked ahead, still mesmerized by my unusual surroundings. The air had a aroma of Verbena and Jasmine. I thought I smelled a chocolate cake too, and my mouth watered at the thought, but the swell wafted away and I brushed my thoughts off.

As I reached the center of the room, I realized that the room was filled with pictures of me. I don't know when they were taken, and honestly, I felt I looked like a witch in them. But I didn't care. I felt something falling on me. I saw that they were cute heart cutouts. How innovative! I couldn't help but put my hand out to catch them childishly, as if they were raindrops.

I was completely lost in the atmosphere, when I tripped on a table. It looked like a dinner table, something which you arrange for a date with candlelight dinner. I realized that I might be ruining someone else's date, and turned to walk back, when I heard his soft, but masculine voice calling my name.

Mayank's POV

I was all the time looking at her enjoying the 'artificial heart cutout raindrops', when I saw her walking away. I Called out to her, "Nupur, wait!" She turned around facing me. We stood staring at each other for a long time, trying to read each other's eyes. I could see every emotion in her pure chocolate-brown eyes,that of happiness as now she knew the surprise was for her, and that of sorrow as she had to be cross with me, but couldn't be.

I saw her curvy lips breaking out into a smile. Then I realized, that her happiness was all I wanted. Her cheeks which turned bright red when she blushed, her hands shivering with shyness when I held them in mine , her arms clinging tightly to me when it was dark,her cheerful voice in which words came pouting out like a flowing river. I loved her for all that, and I wanted it back. And nothing could stop me from making her happy.

"I want to hold your hands and walk a mile,
Don't want to miss you, even a while,
My life is so beautiful because
Dear it's you…my life
Hug me for my worries to die
My tears to dry and
My loneliness to fly
It hurts me to know
How I can sometimes be a little selfish
When it comes to you.
For god sake explain me why all these
I miss you every moment of the day
I keep me awake just to listen to you
I keep me empty just for you to fill
I keep me alive just to see you
My mornings miss you
My evenings seek you
Where were you all these years
You were there to wipe my tears."

I finished my poem and knelt down to her." I love you Nupur.Please forgive me."

She did not respond to any of my words. She just stood in awe."Nupur,are you alive?" I asked. She simply pulled me into a hug. I put my arms around her. At last I'd done it!
My guilt was finally over. I brought in the cake which I had made for her and kept it on the table." I thought I smelt cake before, but then it faded away."Nupur said.

"That's because I had taken it away. I had to do the icing."

Nupur stared at the icing. It was written 'I love you Nupur'.She turned towards me.She leaned and kissed me on my cheek. I stood dumbfounded.

"What? Even I can give surprises, Mr. Expert." She said with an air of triumph.

I pulled her by the waist." No doubt, you've won over me again."

Edited by SaJanmayUrKaSh - 15 years ago