It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 22

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi DI!
How ru!
I wish u r gud. Happy Basant!

Hi Nidha.I am well...how about U. Happy basant panchmi to u 2

woah what an update Armaan is so stupid bacharui ka mara he is jealous but not ready to admit pyaar insaan ko nikama kar deta hai and that's really funny muskaan guy one hahahaha sachi😆🤣 Armaan is too much😉 sorry for late reply actually busy in shopping and other work😛 plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

np nidha.I know ur busy with wedding preparations...thanks 4 reading and commenting😊











With Luv: ~
Nidha

Originally posted by: janu1610

bheegi jee , awesome,awesome,awesome.....

first of all put my name in late commenter list...😆😆😆but better late then never........😉

Its my request u to plz add me in ur pm list....othewise this torture would not going to end....😃

now part----->i love punk child.....i mean Armaan....I know most of us don;t like badmaash ..Its punishment to deal with them...poor padma but if he is Armaan then he should be like this only...A DEVIL😆

On the other hand i love Ridhima not'coz she is a book worm but she is like an Angel ...how Padma wish her child should be as sweet nd innocent like her but ......Alas she got gay nd devil.....kya jodi hai.........😊

Armaan nd his Chinese maths class...1,2 10 oh my God nd teacher was wrong....😆😆I love u Armaan....

Ridz almost recite I hate u Armaan in every second....poor girl....but she don't aware of facts that he try to seek her attention......but at the end his moist eyes reveal how much he care for her...

plz continue soon.....

"When I see you smile and know that it is not for me, that is when I will miss you the most."

unknown

love

ritu

Originally posted by: imshveta

Hey, Sorry for the late comment.

But loved it completely.

Armaan is so adorable. Seems quite naughty and totally confused .

Doesnt know what he is actually feeling for the girl, or does he?

But still it was very good.

Just one question. I was wondering if you are gonna show ridhima's side of story too or will Armaan carry forward the scene?

Only you can tell.

But please update soon.

Love

Shveta

Originally posted by: olive_green

Heylo Bheegi! :)

I finally got it. Bheegism or Bheegiesque as I called is the similarity I see in all your ffs that I have read that always shows the growth of the female character from a girl to a woman, and usually a stronger one if she isn't that already to begin with. This is one common thing you can pull out of each one of your stories, which I feel has to be a conscious decision in your part, that you show each time. This is just one of those things... anyways...but a very critical part of your ffs and what therefore makes its what it is, in my opinion. Which intrigues me as to how you intend to show this Riddhima. So far all I see is this fuzzy image of this cute innocent young girl holding on to a HP book and crying to mommy! lol. I'm intrigued about the young woman at 27! Intrigued to read what the feminist in you intends to shape her as :D

I wasn't going to comment on this part as I really had nothing to say, I usually reply with useless comments, that someone recently pointed out too. ( I was surprised some one noticed..lol) But anyway, the other reason - I was tempted to pester you for an update but I couldn't do so technically since I hadn't commented on this part, it would be rude to say, please post the next one soon :)..lol. But now since I can😆, Please post the next one soon :D Besides, after all this buttering...I deserve an update.😆

Originally posted by: bheegi

I like ur definition of 'bheegism'😆😆😆 UR right, most of my ffs are women centric. From that perspective, this will be my first male centric ff with a confused man as the protagonist😆
well, i am almost done writing my part...and I like butter...so I might actually honor ur request😉😃