It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10 - Page 13

Hi bheegi di.

And u know what? This is like my best birthday present to me. Simply ADORED the first part..ofcourse because of AR both. They are a riot…really and….especially Loved the chemistry between Shashank and Armaan …WOOOHHH!! Protective Daddy(30 yrs old all grown-up) against Packet of mischief -To-be-future-son-in-law(5 yr old kid) (reminds me of Uttpal dutt- Amol palaker's Jodi in Hrishi da's movies) Wow!!!! …….It's fultoo FUNNNN!!! 😆 Enjoyed every bit of it.

Here again, the Mallik boy charms are not all lost I see. Atleast, it works on Padma, if not his own Mom😛..and our Ridz being the perfect child- everyone pet- cry baby…Still I like her for all those reasons😛 Lastly, AR and their Preferences as Kids…This definitely took me back to my days growing up, which I proudly declare ….I was groomed to be Riddhima but turned Armaan (aka Fun plus Trouble….. Basically fun for maself and trouble forrrr…….. 😉

To make it short- I'll just say..I m totally Smitten by this. I could so Imagine Armaan –Riddhima like Saif –Rani from Hum-Tum. GOD !!!!! I simply Love THEM…and by far Armaan much much very much.⭐️😳

Sorry for the late reply..I m reali caught-up these days.Plzz continue soon.

Sai.

Originally posted by: simran1285

Ah, Bheegi finally I have been waiting for you to continue this. The intro was a blast but part 1 was a mega-blast. Awesome update. Loved how you went about explaining it from the beginning. I guess Armaan has always secretly has feelings for Riddhima.

For some reason this story reminded me of The Swan Princess...I could picture Armaan and Riddhima like young Oddette and Derek singing the song "this is not my idea of fun"

Loved the update. I know it's too soon to ask but I hope you post the next part soon.

thanks simran....now i have to go back and read the swan princess😃 Yes,armaan is the confused guy in this ff- unlike other ffs where he is always sure of his feelings and ridz is not😳

[quote=sumedha]oh di its so wonderful to read ur writing again!!!!
this ff is just so hilarious!!
i have never seen you write such hilarious stuff......armaan is such a shaitaan.....just what our pretty princess hates!!par opposites always attract!!!
then can they help themselves???i guess not!
love you di, its nice to see something so fresh and funny!
love
sumedha[/quote]

thanks sumedha! I am trying a new genre here- self depreciating humor through armaan's narration. Hope u all continue to like it😊

ommggggg ur a gret writer, u noe tht???=P

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

*reserved... :)

*edited*

Heyyyyyyyyyyy Bheegi !!!

wow... that was such a fun-filled, awesome, amazing, beautifully penned, wonderful and fabulous update !.. it was just sooooo nice :)

armaan and riddhima,the total opposites... their characters were sketched sooo well ! :) armaan the cute little devil and riddhima the cute little angel... i'm actually like riddhima but with a streak of armaan's naughtiness in me ;) i really like both characters but armaan's even more... its a total contrast from Pehchan and its really very nicely penned...

It's taken me 28 years to realize that all these years, it was your attention that I was seeking; your approval that I was craving for and your nod that I aspired for. this line is soooooooooo cute... aww...

armaan's mom always comparing him with ridzi and padma n his dad sticking up for him... and his is such an attention seeking devil :) loved his antics at riddhima's party !!.. shanky and his wordplay and armaan finding his new talent : jumping :D and riddhima the cute little girl... could picture them soo clearly :)

the last few lines were again sooooooooo beautiful !!.. damn good writing hun ... and i like reading it from armaan POV :)

loving it already !!...

thanks for the pm...

continue soooooooooooooooooon :)

*hugs*

thanks sunaina. This ff is def a more halka phulka one. i am glad u have liked the characters so far....wait for more armaan antics in next part😊

[quote=namita18]Hey di..
Finally u r back.B-):-D i missed u so much...but u r back wid bang...wat a part yaar..it was amazing..i m jus speachless...how u always do dat..huh...dat part was so cute..armaan was so cute..a typical boy,..nd ridzi is my sweetheart ..i luv dem yaar. Nd pls update soon as always i like ur all ff so much...nd really thanks for d pm
Luv u[/quote]

thanks namita....all ur wonderful comments are always a big inspiration for me😊

[quote=tarm]That was real funny and so cute. And the last part...wow cnt wait for the nxt part.

Originally posted by: missypatel

yay you for the update and me for finally getting to it! :) hope you I-trip was fun bheegs!

Hi Nijal...good to 'see'u back. Yes,my trip was fun but hectic

Firstly..this line..."ease her fears that her kids would one day grow up to be losers,...." am i missing something here or is it the way it reads! am confused!

no, it's just reflective of the typical Indian mindset that unless ur kids grow up to be doctors or engineers, they are losers😕...that's armaan's mom's way of thinking😕

i like armaan..yaaaa...sucha naughty little one...grown up to still do what he loved doing back as a kid...getting the most (watever it be) of ridz! =) me likes! i had some issues with the kids dialogues though...armaan and ridz (specially her) seemed to advanced in their behavioral speech-understanding fluency at their respective ages...just slightly..but they were such fun!

yes, Ridz is a precocious kid for sure and if u keep this in mind, this would not be a surprise😊...trust me on that one as i work with kids all day😉

its just the first part and am expecting tons LOL...update soon!

hope i can fulfil them this time😃
~nijaL[/quote]

[quote=enigma_swati]Hey Bheegi Di!!!

I loved the introduction and the first part too!!! You have got an amazing story on your hands! I can't wait to read further! Please continue soon!!!

Swatzz
[/quote]

thanks swati! Hope u will all stay glued...keeping my fingers crossed😊

[quote=nidha1983]Hi di How r u enjoying di its really a rocking update Armaan is a kid aur moneky omg itna jump karta hai cool aur Ridhima so sweet so I hate u turn into 3 magical words plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm[/quote]

thanks Nidha...i am well. How about u?Yes, armaan the monkey and ridz the angel😊

[quote=ttimpy]oo too cute for words bheegi............love the devil child Armaan but he sure was a nuisance in the party for shanky..............wonder what his relationship with muskaan would be like..............im reaaaly reaalyy looking fwd to reading his antics in school and college.................

[/quote]

thanks ttimpy. yes, armaan is going to create more problems for sure in next part also...let's see how

[quote=ammy-ridz]

Hi bheegi di.

And u know what? This is like my best birthday present to me. Simply ADORED the first part..ofcourse because of AR both. They are a riot'really and'.especially Loved the chemistry between Shashank and Armaan 'WOOOHHH!! Protective Daddy(30 yrs old all grown-up) against Packet of mischief -To-be-future-son-in-law(5 yr old kid) (reminds me of Uttpal dutt- Amol palaker's Jodi in Hrishi da's movies) Wow!!!! ''.It's fultoo FUNNNN!!! 😆 Enjoyed every bit of it.

Here again, the Mallik boy charms are not all lost I see. Atleast, it works on Padma, if not his own Mom😛..and our Ridz being the perfect child- everyone pet- cry baby'Still I like her for all those reasons😛 Lastly, AR and their Preferences as Kids'This definitely took me back to my days growing up, which I proudly declare '.I was groomed to be Riddhima but turned Armaan (aka Fun plus Trouble'.. Basically fun for maself and trouble forrrr''.. 😉

To make it short- I'll just say..I m totally Smitten by this. I could so Imagine Armaan 'Riddhima like Saif 'Rani from Hum-Tum. GOD !!!!! I simply Love THEM'and by far Armaan much much very much.⭐️😳

Sorry for the late reply..I m reali caught-up these days.Plzz continue soon.

Sai.[/quote]

thanks sai! Good to see u back. Belated Happy Birthday to u...hope u did something special. Yes, they have a love hate relationship like most couples do in stories😆 Hope i can create some novelty here...will keep trying😊 I love old Hrishi da movies too...they really have their own charm😊

[quote=iamthebest]ommggggg ur a gret writer, u noe tht???=P

woooooooooooooowww
itss reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cool
loved it
update soon
thanks for pm

That was really interesting.

Originally posted by: agrima2009

woooooooooooooowww
itss reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cool
loved it
update soon
thanks for pm

thanks agrima!😊

Originally posted by: imshveta

That was really interesting.

I liked your first FF too but never commented. The style of writing seems to be same in this one too but there is a lightness about the story, so i guess I will definitely like it more . It seems NOT SERIOUS. The start is good. I could almost imagine myself in that birthday party.

Keep going. It looks promising

Please add me to your PM list.

Love

Shveta

thanks shveta! yes, this one is not going to be intense as both my readers and myself needed a break from seriousness😆 I guess everyone has their style of writing- it's hard to change completely😊