It Had To Be You (Part 11) AR ff pg 131 4/26/10

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~sumedha~

@~sumedha~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

oh di its so wonderful to read ur writing again!!!!
this ff is just so hilarious!!
i have never seen you write such hilarious stuff......armaan is such a shaitaan.....just what our pretty princess hates!!par opposites always attract!!!
then can they help themselves???i guess not!
love you di, its nice to see something so fresh and funny!
love
sumedha

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Sunaina

@SunainaTM007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

*reserved... :)

*edited*

Heyyyyyyyyyyy Bheegi !!!

wow... that was such a fun-filled, awesome, amazing, beautifully penned, wonderful and fabulous update !.. it was just sooooo nice :)

armaan and riddhima,the total opposites... their characters were sketched sooo well ! :) armaan the cute little devil and riddhima the cute little angel... i'm actually like riddhima but with a streak of armaan's naughtiness in me ;) i really like both characters but armaan's even more... its a total contrast from Pehchan and its really very nicely penned...

It's taken me 28 years to realize that all these years, it was your attention that I was seeking; your approval that I was craving for and your nod that I aspired for. this line is soooooooooo cute... aww...

armaan's mom always comparing him with ridzi and padma n his dad sticking up for him... and his is such an attention seeking devil :) loved his antics at riddhima's party !!.. shanky and his wordplay and armaan finding his new talent : jumping :D and riddhima the cute little girl... could picture them soo clearly :)

the last few lines were again sooooooooo beautiful !!.. damn good writing hun ... and i like reading it from armaan POV :)

loving it already !!...

thanks for the pm...

continue soooooooooooooooooon :)

*hugs*

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namita

@namita18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Hey di..
Finally u r back.B-):-D i missed u so much...but u r back wid bang...wat a part yaar..it was amazing..i m jus speachless...how u always do dat..huh...dat part was so cute..armaan was so cute..a typical boy,..nd ridzi is my sweetheart ..i luv dem yaar. Nd pls update soon as always i like ur all ff so much...nd really thanks for d pm
Luv u

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

di updated coment in pg 11

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Tahmina Aliya Begum

@-Aliya-

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

That was real funny and so cute. And the last part...wow cnt wait for the nxt part.

I didnt gt a pm plz cud u pm me as wel.

once agen great part.

Bye. Tahmina😉

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: arluver15
Hey di

good to see you back..........

wow interesting starts

is this story in a flashback.........or armaan telling ridhima about all the things that happend in this life.....

so shashank dont really like armaan but padma loves him....

well armaan is totaly acting like armaan.............

well di this simes a nice start but i hope that this not gona be just like the movie......

i have read the story and i did not like it very much (SORRY i know that u love this movie...)

thanks for the pm di

cont soon

i am agine gona leave is soon coz my last semestar is starting this sem i did not took lots of lod its only 5 class but 4 of them ar very very very important classes for my degree.....so wont be very much in touch with ur ff hope u can forgave me for that .....

lods of luv

nruti

Hi Nruti....good to see u back. I understand u have to go back to course work. This ff will be short so u can catch up anytime. No, this ff will not really be like harry met sally...it's different😊
armaan is narrating this story...wait and see how it unfolds. 😊

[quote=mahaklovesmayur]wow di!

awesome!

i wanna be added in its p m list too! [/quote]

thanks and welcome to this ff. BTW, i wanted to write this ff for SAJAN or MAYUR fans also but I don't know the other characters in this serial. If u can help me with that, I will post this ff for MJHT readers also😊

[quote=sri_4]

hey

this is the first FF i am reading of urs,,n its really good,,

the first part was great...

loved armaans POV..,,
[DIV]it was funny n i really liked it..

hope to read the next one..

and hoping for a PM if possible.. :)

sri:-)[/quote]

thanks sri! welcome to this ff...i appreciate u reading and commenting. will place u on PM list😊

[quote=kweekrockstar]hey bheegi
it was an awesome update
thanks for the pm
loved it
plz post the next part soon
loved armaan's ways to gain her attention[/quote]

thanks dear! I am glad u liked it

[quote=kashish]OMG...diii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u started it!! haila! i am actually in love with tihs ARmaan! ahahah! and ridzi..reminds me of my selfa lil tinny bit and more my cuz! hahah! i think i would hve been armaan if i were a guy and my cuz ridzi in the comparisons! lol...lovin the start! and the story line! hai!..the three words that i hve dying to hear all my life! i know what they are !!! =D!! cant wait to read the next parT!!!

hope u hve had a great new year and a wonderful and well deserved break! cause now ur back at IF to continue writing! ahha!!![/quote]

thanks kashish. Hope u had a great New Year too. Yes, I am more like Ridz too so I have to just imagine armaan's antics😆

[quote=lil_desi_goddess]superb sangeeta.. loved how the first part was written from Armaan's pov.. loved it!! please do continue soon![/quote]

thanks dear! I am glad u liked it😊

[quote=loveoflifeksg]Awesome update and mindblowing story and I loved it absoulotely and armaans part was so cute about the last para. Plz update soon thx for pm

love Aisha[/quote]

thanks Aisha! Yes, this is armaan's story and his POV for sure😊

[quote=olive_green]hat was refreshing and a great start....such a change from your last ff. and esp. Armaan, can't wait to read more abt him...little the devil.. Thanks for the pm.

[/quote]

Thanks Aria! Yes, this ff is less intense and more halka phulka😊

[quote=khahani]

Hi Di,

Really happy to see you back here.

Can't stop laughing, Armaan the devil, really suits his character! It took him 27 years to realize that he was all along seeking HER attention lol........ the cute and dopy devil!

This is very refreshing from the last intense one!

Tc[/quote]

Thanks Nahida. I am happy to be back too😊 Yes, this ff is more halka phulka than last one and it's armaan's POV so we will just have to guess ridz's thoughts😉

[quote=zaynoo2320]I'm already hooked to this FF! Bheegi, I'm a big fan of your writing, and I congratulate you on your new FF! This concept is adorably cute, and really different! I'm in love with Armaan's character! He seems so free, and imaginative...I love it! Amazing part, and I hope you continue soon! Would be more than happy to read more!!! Can't wait!

Zaynah[/quote]

thanks zaynah. Thanks for reading my ffs and it's good to see u here on the post now😊 Hope u will continue to like this ff. I will update on the weekend😊

[quote=masin]aww!! di...well first of all..i hope that u had a fun and relaxing vacation! and as fr ur ff... that's such a cute storyline!!! i actually didn't recieve a pm about it...back in november...so i just read the intro and part 1!! LOL!! armaan is hilariouss!!!! and omgsh..i think im becoming too forgetful at a young age....i had no idea u promised a sequel to DYM...but then again...no complains!! :D

please update this one soon...the storyline soundss awesomee!! super adorablee!!! i especially can't wait to read bout their school days: i.e. dances, prom nights, college!!! loll

keep me posted

love

Samra :)

P.S. please remind me again...what was the story of DYM?? lol...sorry...i completely forgot! :(

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Hi Samra.I had a great trip but far from relaxing😆 as it was too hectic. Actually, this story is not really a sequel to DYM so u don't need to worry. It's just written in first person like DYM- that's the only similarity😃

[quote=lilsunshine_ruv]oving the narration form armaan's POV... di.. big big welcum back and what to say.. hooked as always... hugs n tons of love... rav :D

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thanks Rav! I am glad to be back too esp with all these warm welcome hugs from the readers😊

[quote=nanthini9]Hey Di!

Lovely start to the FF. Really luv Armaan's character. I have read most of your FF n they were all great. This one also looks promising. This will be the first FF where I would be reading as you update - looking forward to the ride!! 😉😊

Luv,
Nanthini[/quote]

thanks nanthini! Thanks for reading my ffs and hope to see u regularly on this thread😊

[quote=sweet_mittal]

hey di first part is really awesome

armaan is so annoying also annoy everybody too hehe

so i wonder what will happen now

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya

mittal [/quote]

thanks mittal Yes, armaan loves to attract attention by hook or by crook😃

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bheegi

@bheegi

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver
nice...........are AN in here 2???
pls pm me when u update!!

thanks dear...I am not sure if AN will be here. Let me see how this one shapes up😉

[quote=bhavna2692]hi di!
gr8 2 see u back with a new ff.....& believe me when i say u r back with a bang!😃
i recently caught with most of ur ffs & short stories & wow!i can't find words enuf 2 describe them! right from the title[ luved "shall we dance" & "don't judge the book by the cover"] 2 the themes, everythingz totally unique & wonderful!👏 ohk....guess i hav chattered enuf....
Continue soon.....

Bhavana[/quote]

thanks bhavna! Thanks for reading my ffs. This one will be a short one too...hope to see u more often with comments. BTW, there is an AK version of this ff also😊

[quote=maanu]

hi sangeeta.......

very very beautifully written........

loved the charachterization of the story.......

the naration was amazing........

do continue soon......

thanks for the pm.....

bye[/quote]

thanks maanu! UR always very sweet with ur compliments😊

[quote=noe23]As everyone has already said, can't stop laughing 😆. And, here Armaan is complaining about brother grimms, then what should we say about his creator - the author - who is churning these modern day fairy tales and making one believe in them once again 😉.

Abhi se, Armaan and Shashank at loggerheads 😔 (reminds me of 'To Err.. parts of which I reread over weekend). Relationship equations between AR and their respective set of parents have been established. Now, waiting to see how Papa's princess falls for the prankster.

It's really good to have you back.[/quote]

thanks noe! Good to see u back. Remember i am a woman and still dream of the Grimm fairytales....😆 Let's see if armaan-shanky friction continues or melts away with time😊

[quote=blessing_beauty]Hi bheegi
im a silent reader .
I like ur all da ff's .
All of them r wonderful.
I like this one also. Da part was really very cute. Pls cont soon. [/quote]

thanks for reading my ffs and I am happy to see u here...thanks again😊

[quote=namelesssr]Already charmed by li'l Armaan's character! Now yeh dil maange more 😊[/quote]

thanks sup! So, u have switched loyalties from Ak to AR?😃

[quote=anshu]hey di

i liked it so much
that i read ak version twice

den i thot the charcter will suit armaan too well so i read it again here too
plz update soon

anshu[/quote]

Yeah this is basically an AR story- i am writing it for AK fans also but yes, the boy character is basically armaan😊

[quote=sweetaddiction]OH MY GODDDD !!!!

that was FANTASTICCCC !!!!!!!!!!!!

i loved the style of the introduction and well its ur FF so i KNOW its going to be good !

already looking forward to the nxt part !!

pls add me to ur PM list !

thanx =)

p.s.-- are u going to do a weekly update like u did for pehchaan ??

<3[/quote]

thanks sweetoo! I know i can always count on u..thanks for being a loyal reader. I will update this one 1-2t/week depending on time and reader's response😊

[quote=prasanthi]
Hey Bheegi!!

This comes as a surprise! Reading this I am sure the rest also will be fun and riot. That was absolutely enjoyable to read. :D

Armaan, the punk. RIddhima, the pink. hahahahah... it was so fun reading from Armaan's POV.

Can't wait long to read this further. Continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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thanks prasanthi! Yeah, armaan the little deviland ridz's nightmare😆 let's see what happens next😊

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#118

yay you for the update and me for finally getting to it! :) hope you I-trip was fun bheegs!

Firstly..this line..."ease her fears that her kids would one day grow up to be losers,...." am i missing something here or is it the way it reads! am confused! i like armaan..yaaaa...sucha naughty little one...grown up to still do what he loved doing back as a kid...getting the most (watever it be) of ridz! =) me likes! i had some issues with the kids dialogues though...armaan and ridz (specially her) seemed to advanced in their behavioral speech-understanding fluency at their respective ages...just slightly..but they were such fun!

its just the first part and am expecting tons LOL...update soon!

~nijaL

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@guggu

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#119

Hey Bheegi Di!!!

I loved the introduction and the first part too!!! You have got an amazing story on your hands! I can't wait to read further! Please continue soon!!!

Swatzz

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#120

Hi di How r u enjoying di its really a rocking update Armaan is a kid aur moneky omg itna jump karta hai cool aur Ridhima so sweet so I hate u turn into 3 magical words plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago

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