D FIST OF DESTINY [rajeev/priyanka] fic - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
hiii....hw r u????


loved ur updt......its nice to see u here.....

dis part was awesome..

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lipi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Awesome Reet!!
So now i somewhat understand the background.....
Ah....firstly i wasn't gettin whoz Sia....then got it....it's none other than SONI!πŸ˜ƒ
So shez a tom boy!πŸ˜ƒ
Both sisters share a very nice and sweet relation!
Waiting for next update!
Sorry....i'm not able to add u to my buddy list!😭 AB KYA KARU????
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
superb update reet.roshni and sonam (Soni)has very good relation and u described thier relation ship very well.Wait for the next part dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Fledger dismissed his thoughts and assured himself that everything is fine!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Even Saket has realised that Dr.Fledger isn't fooled easily and he has seen a sparkle in his eyes!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Saket has been living with Razia for the last two years and it is like heaven to him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It has changed his life and he wished to stop his life just here!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Razia ne neend mein Soni ka naam liya!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Yeh Soni kaun hai??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

I loved the way Saket comforted Razia!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Saket has deeply and madly fallen in love in these past two years and can't think of a moment when he is not with Razia!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

He is scared that when Razia's memory comes back he will lose the only relationship he had got in his entire life!!!!!

Saket wishes that they had really shared this relationship!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲That means that they are not husband and wife!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

thank u so much shaina for reading the fic...
u r right always....
i hope u will be liking the fic
thanks again
reet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Awesome update reet πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘..........but ye kya yaar ek bhi jalak nahi hain hamre raj ki i mean saket /rex in this update .......u know i missed him so much in this update
wow !!!!!!!!......... roshini is expertise in martial arts n she is the champion in all india shooiting also
so roshini n soni r cousins........loved the bonding between the two sisters
felt sad for roshini that she lost her parents at such a small age
but thanks to her uncle n aunty they took good care of her
he..he.....he...he.....he πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† ........ sonia ahuja london aake sia bangayee n ron is her deewana.
soni is really a bubbly girl n the jaan of her sis......loved the leg pullin scene between the sisters
totally rocking update dear
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: rajeev's_reet

D FIST OF DESTINY
friends....i m starting another fic..this is also a rp fic....but dis will be a suspense thriller....cocktail of suspense...thrill...n love...and relationships....

i m eagerly waiting for ur responses.....and honest comments.....

i m giving d character sketch now.......

rajeev khandelwal
priyanka bassi
ghazal rai
harshad chopra
arjun bijlani


Prologue

dis is a story of mainly four young stars....dey also hav other friends....who were students of oxford university of London...

they all are Indians....some of dem r from india...came in london for study....some r residents of London....some came from...different parts of world....they met co-incidentally...and became gud frens....really best buddies.......dey came to oxford for derr graduation...and.....dey became. ..like a family there..

everything was going fine...until.............................
Destiny made a play wad them.......d common student's life forever changed....dies is all betas of one person .........(d character playing by Rajeev khandelwal)
he changed derr life...derr aim forever... actively or passively...he was responsible of d change of d students life.....

a mysterious character -rajeev khandelwal....wat he is...who he is...wats his real name...what is his occupation....nobody knows surely.........
d students met him accidentally...

now d students life is at stake...they r now a part of a dangerous life....part of a precarious mission...dat life has chosen for them......
they dnt know what their future lie ahead.....



Good start dear,
They all related to London, i hope it must be a different plot.
😊😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: rajeev's_reet

Doctor how did u find her'???is she all right'.???a magnetic handsome hunk tried to conceal da panic his voice''!!!

Don't worry'Mr. khan'.she will be all right by evening'..!!i can completely understand ur nervousness'. But relax''..she will okay'.trust me''

I trust u fully sir''!!!A anxious husband sighed a breath of relief''.

Dis is Mr. Saket ahmed khan a charismatic Youngman of around 28 years'.above medium hight'.barrel chest exclusively handsome '.extremely charming'.looking astoundingly royal in a glow white costly suit'..in a simple word'he is hot'''

But his face was pale'n worried''..!!
D unconscious lady lying on d bed in front of dem is his wife ''Razia''.Mrs. Razia ahmed khan ''''''''

She has a platonic beauty in her pale face''she is very young'23 years old''she is lying unconscious in d bed''

Saket bent down to smoothen d loose curls of hair falling on her face''he placed dem behind her earlobe wid a great adore'.

Doctor radland fledger noticed him minutely'''got up from his sit and patted his shoulder ''..dnt worry my son'!!!....every thing will be fine'.y r u so upset son'.???u have seen her in worser condition dan dis''she is much better now''she faces d attacks very often son''..isnt it'.???

Saket slowly nodded his head'..stiil eyeing his beautiful wife''

"Yes doctor u r right'.i have seen her in worsen conditions'..and dats y'.don't want repetition of d old days it makes me so panicked''..its been a long time she is suffering'.she had had enough doctor'.!!!I can't afford to loose her''I can't'..I love her dr''' love her more dan anything'"

"I know son'.." dr. fledger patted his head sympathetically''.she loves u too'.!!!
"God bless u my son'god bless ur love'.."

D old doctor crossed "..i will pray for u'..!!!"

Thanks dr thank u so much''its u'.for whom I hav her alive till now'inspite of so odds''!!!

U r most welcome son'but dats my holy duty''!!!i will take ur leave now'.take care son'.urself and take care of her'.!!!


I will surely do dat'.saket passed him a thankfull smile'.and said lets go'I will see u off'.

Dats okay son'.!!!....i will manage'.u stay wid her''.!!! Doctor fledger assured him''.

Saket's eye reflected gratefulness ''

Bubye doctor fledger '..take care''.!!!

Saket spread out his well gripped hand for a shake '.!!!

A surprising reaction quickly passed thru fledgers face''as he shook sakets hand
Every time fledger held dis young man's hand a unknown sensation passed thru his nerves doesn't kno y''???....!!!!..........

Doctor radland fledger climbed down frm sakets small cottage'..

Dis is a small village in Poland aviltang near d city Warsaw''.it has a very thin population'

doctor started his old fiat '..and soon disappeared in d horizon''

doctor radland fledger is a doctor of general medicine and neurologist '..he is attached wid da church of next village tanelrim'.

He knows dis sweet Indian couple from last one n half years'.
Dey r really sweet '.cute n loving''.but derr fate has played a dreadfull game wid dem ''razia is suffering from dementia''..a loss of memory'.she has no idea abut her past life before an accident in which she has lost her memory''..completely dark''and just living in her present''




Nice part,
Who is playing the role of Saket Khan? Who is his wife? R they RN?
Razia's playing by Pri i hope.
She is suffering from any disease?
πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rajeev's_reet

Dey met n accident abut 2 years ago wen dey were coming back from derr first honeymoon in Switzerland to lion at france'..derr hometown'''..on d way back dey met wid an accident dat snatched away her memory ''.

Saket left no stones unturned to'.make her fine as before'.but his and his appointed all doctors all efforts gone in vain ''he had spent all his money after razia's medication '.. but nothing cud make her well'..

Razia started loosing control on herself wenever she faced attacks'.she became wild'..and after it'everything is normal'except a mild headache'.even she cant remember wat she has done during da attacks'''

Finally all relatives started giving derr opinions loudly'.in stead of whispering between demselves '..some suggested saket to to send her mental asylum 'some suggested of remarriage'as dis young eligible bachelors appropriate candidates were ready in derr relnships''everybody wanted to rag his or her name wid saket ahmed khan''.so every ones eagerness started increasing''finaly it turned to open taunting razia'dat worsen razia's condition'both physical'n mental''.

Frustrated saket decided to shift seeing decreasing state of razia's''he decided to wind off his business and sell other properties''he thot to leave france'..and dey shifted to aviltang''a remote village near Warsaw'in Poland'''far away frm his relatives'''and known persons''

Widin a couple of weeks of shifting'one night razia faced again da attack'.advised by da neighbours saket went to da church in search of doctor fledger 'and dat was da beginning of derr frenship'

Fledger started liking dis fateless young couple'..derr childishness derr happiness da bondage of cute love between dem made fledger a feeling of sympathy n love wid da couple''.going beyond his profession'..


Fledger noticed dis Youngman who loved his wife most '.everytime wen razia suffered da attack saket went crazy'.used to do his utmost to give her a little relief'but cudnt'.to his utter despair''fledger started liking dis young Indian devoted husband'..deyy reminded him of his own wife who has passed away 12 years ago'.

But sometimes fledgers intuition sensed something abnormal abut saket''.very often'but he sensed''such as wenever he shook hand wid saket it seemed he is not a common civilian person'.fledgers 35 years of experience in his profession'gave him d idea'd grip reminds of a hawk''a warrior's hand'.

Doesn't kno y'sometimes fledger feels uncanny abut his identity''



Kuch to baat hai Saket me ye to mujhe bhi lagta hai same as Doc. Fledger,par aisa kaun sa accident ho gaya tha Razia k saath ki us is ye haalat ho gayi thi? Mujhe bhi lagta hai ki Saket kahin na Indian Army se belong karta hai but let's see.
Saket ne accha kiya ki Razia ko un sabhi negative logon se door kar diya varna na jaane Razia ka kya haal hua hota abhi tak?
nice part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: rajeev's_reet

Doctor'.!!!..ohhh so u r here''!!!welcome doctor''.we have been waiting for u so long'.!!!!

A husky masculine villager voice broke fledgers thot'''

Everything is fine fledger'.stop being ridiculous''u r sounding silly''he muttered under his breath and got involved in his circumstances'..





After seeing off doctor fledger saket dint came back to d room'he seemed somehow lost in his thoughts'..he stood there still crossing his arms on his broad muscled torso..

This doctor fledger ..regarded as d most kind person of d area '.doesnt seem to be fooled easily'.isn't it..? why I m feeling dat I have seen a sparkle in his eyes'.a question'..?
He crossed himself'.its all because razia 's illness'.she needs to recover fast'..its been a long time..she is going thru dis..

Razia 'how's she'?ohh'I forgot in all dis'.may be she has got her senses back in this time'saket hurriedly walks back inside..

Razia sleeping serenely in her bed'.cuddling like a baby'as if nothing had happened in d last night'

Saket smiles'takes d next sit beside her'..taking her one hand in his palms'

He is living wid her for last two years under a same roof'
d experience of dis relation is like heaven to saket'' for d first time in his solitary life he shared a relationship with somebody.. so deep n so close'joy' pain'love 'happiness 'everything ..

saket wished to stop his life here ' he was unknown wid social relation ships for his entire life..

he recapitulated his old days'.. No experience he could remember dat seemed to him as a good one'. He concealed a deep breath'

but d day when he met dis gal'never thought life will turn up like dis''he also can be expected to some one'a person who is desired by his wife .

he remembered d first day of London when d story started'.

Nobody could ever imagine'.destiny will play this game wid dem'.
Saket will be having relationship' he chuckled at his own thought'..no one can find any resemblance in his past and his present '..its like he has got a new life to live

SONIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII'''''''''''''..!!!!

A panicked voice breaks his trance'.. Horrified saket turns back at his wife'
who has got up on d bed erected .....sweating profusely.

She has waked up again wid d same awful dream'



Wat happened razia'..look at me....shhh'..there is nobody else nothing'.calm down''..'.shhhhhhh'.. I m here with u'don't worry'.razia'plz relax'



Razia clings to him'. stuck with him in a unknown horror'don't leave me alone plz'don't 'u wont na''??say dat u wont'.a insecure voice trembled in unknown fear '..



Relax razia'..shhh'I m not going anywhere without u'u know it na'den y r u thinking like dat'.???.saket rocks her back n forth'and rubs her back to console her to forget d dream




Kitna khayal hai na Saket ko Razia ka.
nice part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Nice update...things r started to getting more clear......luv the relation Roshni share with Soni.waiting for next part. update soon.

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