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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 8
I stop, he was huffing now.
Nupur:Mayank tum bhag ke yahan kyun aaye?
Mayank:Kuc-kuch kehna tha tumko.
What in the world is he going to say to me?
Nupur:Kya Mayank?
ayank:Nupur, jab tumne woh usspe phec ka-
He starts laughing and so do I. OMG his laugh is so cute, and his dimples. Awwwww.
Nupur:I know, Gaby was like.
I made a funny shocked face. And we start laughing again. Then my phone rang.
Nupur:Hello?
Gunjan:Di?
Nupur:Oh haan bas abhi aayi.
I cut it.
Nupur:Mayank I really need to go now. See you tomorrow.
Mayank:Achha bye.
I turned to leave. But I don't know why, I looked back. To my surprise, Mayank was still there,a nd I waved bye to him. He smiles and waves back.
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I hurried to Gunjan's room. And found her in front of her dressing table mirror. The room was dark, with only one light on, and it had so many tessy bears, and all those girlie things.
Nupur:Gunjan kya hua? Tu phone pe kyun roh rahi thi?
Gunjan:Oh woh toh issliye, because mom will be home from work in any minute, and if she finds you not home, she will be angry, and I don't want her to be.
Nupur:Gunjan you got me worried.
Gunjan:Agar mein yeh keh ke bollati toh merin jhanti hoon you will say, 'I dont care' tabhi itna nataq kar na para.
We giggle by how she said Nataq.
Nupur:Acha meri drama queen, abb so jaa, warna kal late ho jae gi.
Then Dia comes, I tell you she ruins everything.
Dia:Nupur did you ask mom before going?
Nupur:Dia please, I am not in the mood for talking now.
I turn to leave.
Dia:Goodnight Nupur.
I ignore her, and went up to my room, and sat on my laptop. No one was online. I was about to close it, when I got a friends request. It was Mayank's. I accepte it. Then I got a "Hi" from two people. Mayank and that Gaby.
N-Hi Mayank, tum ghar pe? I thought tum abhi bhi party mein hoge.
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G-Nupur, why did you throw that soda on me?
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M-Nupur, tum challi gayi thi na, issliye. Aur mein jhanta tha, ke tum mujhe online hi millo gi.
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Reading Mayank's respond made me blush.
N-Woh kaise Mayank?
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G-Nupur, where are you? And why aren't you talking to me?
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M-Bas jhanta tha. Mujhe toh yeh bhi pata hai, ke tum abhi uss Gabriel se baat kar rahi ho.
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What how does he knnow that?
N-Mayank tumne kya mere kamre mein cameras laag waye hai?
M-lol Nupur, tum bhi na-
N-Mein bhi na what?
M-Bilkul ek bhacchi ki tarah baatein karti ho.
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I blsuh again. Nooooo, stop doing that.
G-Nupur talk to me.
N-Gaby I am talking with Mayank, and I'm going to go in 2 minutes. So bye.
G-Fine bye.
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N-Mayank I have to go to sleep now. Plus exams are coming, so have to study these days. See you tomorrow in school. Bye.
M:Ok bye.
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I shut my laptop. Why did I do that? Was I scared to talk to Mayank or Gaby? Why did I ignore Gaby today? Wasn't he what I wanted all along? Then why? And what is with Mayank that is so different? Stop thinking about these stuff Nupur! And go to sleep.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ufff meine abhi katam karri hai yeh parna. Awsome story. Leena. Add me in your list for the pm thingy.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
plz continue soon
and thanx for the pm
love
sana.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey My doll lina.

I am so sowie, i guess i missed your earlier update too, read the last two ones and i must say excellent work no doubt.
What is the most beautiful part about your ff is that you make me see the world from your own perspective and that of a creative child who is exceptionally wonderful.
keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
my desi girl, awesome update!
but it was short,
I'm making my part longer so you better make urs longer next time!
Please meri liye!
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Posted: 15 years ago
linaaaa such a sweet update....awww nups ko kuch kuch hota hain 😆....anywayz plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy lina
It was a really awsome blossom update
Loved it to the core
Plzzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
rocking part......... thanx for the pm,,
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lina..nice part..
Mayank was sweet to her..and now they're becoming frndz too..thats nice..
n Gunjan called Nupur home so that their mom wont be angry..lol..tats sweet..
Nupur was chattin wid Mayank..but not Gaby..nice!..
thnx 4 d PM
update soon
-aish
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey lina!!!! u upd8ed FINALLY!!!!!! after days & days & day....LOL ok ok, i'll stop all the melodrama!!!!!
as for the upd8,it was mindblowig....
nupur started to feel something for mayu!!!!!
thnxxxxx for the pm.....
up8 soooooooon......
jigi.



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