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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 1
This part is dedicated to
My girls (Hinna, Zoya, Rakhi Di, Praty, Sanu, Nabz, Mahi, Lina)

"Are you sure you won't have any problem? I mean you know what I mean", asked Nupur from other end of the phone.
She looks tensed and worried. Her eyes swallowed due to continually crying all night. She waited till morning to talk to talk to her friends. She could have ringed them at night, but she thought it was not appropriate to ring them at 3 am in the morning, so she waited till its 10 in the morning.

"Of course not man, even Hinna has no problem with it" replied Sanam, Nupur's best friend. She met Nupur and Hinna on msn while chatting online. After that the trio became best friends. Sanam and Hinna often visited Nupur and even Nupur used to go down London to meet the both.
"you positive na?" asked Nupur once again, which annoyed Hinna, who was listening to their convosation since last 15 mins and they were repeating the same thing. She could hear them as the phone was on the speaker. Finally getting irritated from the two, she picks up the reciever to talk to Nupur.
"Nupur, tomorrow 10am in the morning, I am coming to pick you up, be ready OK?" Hinna says in irritated rather funny tone, which made Sanam gigle
"OK Hinna, calm down. I will be waiting", replies Nupur.
"Look Nupur, mujhe nahin pata ki waha kya huwa jisse tune itna bada decision le liya, But honey, think twice before you take any step and don't get me wrong. I have no problem you coming here, living with me and Sanam, but it's all about your life", Hinna says with concern in her voice.
She very well knew that Nupur must have not take this decision in hurry, but still she wanted to confirm her.
"I will tell you everything once I come there, but trust me what I am doing is not wrong." Nupur replies emotionally, having tears in her eyes.
"Ok then, Don't worry about anything. We will pick you up tomorrow morning. Bye" saying Hinna placed the reciever on the phone and turns to Sanam, who is sitting on the leather couch wearing blue jeans and a plain white t shirt.
"What did she say?" asks Sanam to Hinna, who looks bit lost after talking to Nupur.
"Nothing really. She said she'll tell us everything when she comes here", Hinna replies.
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"Wake up you lazy fellow" Sonal shouts while entering Mayank's room. "I am sick of this habit of yours Mayank. Get up it's 11 o'clock, do you mind sleeping till this late?" Sonal complains while sitting besides his bed.
Sonal lives with Mayank since last 4 years. She came to UK, at her uncle's house, but her uncle kicked her out of the house in the middle of the night. It was Mayank who saved her and brought her with him at his house. Since then Sonal lives here. Mayank consideres her as his little sister.
"Please yaar, It's only 11 o'clock," then quickly removing the pillow from his face and sits back on the bed cursing himself. He looks dashing even in his night clothes. He gets out of the bed, moving towards the cupboard while talking rather shouting at Sonal.
"Couldn't you wake me up bit earlier than this? I am so going to be late for my enrolment", he turns to Sonal, who is dressed up smartly, wearing black trouser with white blouse. "Wow, everyone is ready except me, isn't that great?" saying he gets in the bathroom for a quick shower.
"Be quick. We are waiting in the car outside." shouts Sonal from outside.
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A lady enters Bhushan house, wearing black formal suit with her hair tied in a pony. She is Mrs. Sheena Bhushan, the mother of Nupur Bhushan. She is always cares about her business, kitty party. After the death of Nupur's father, Mrs Bhushan had to look afte everything, from business to family, but she took very good care of the business but could not do the same with family. Who was family anyway? only Nupur, her own daughter, her only family, but she didnt pay much attention towards her as much as a mother should. Though it was good thing that Nupur did not go on worng way fortunately.
"Nupur, Nupur", shouts Sheena from the downstairs on top of her lungs. Hearing her mother shouting, Nupur comes out of her room and goes to Sheena.
"Yes Mrs. Bhushan, did you just called me? I thought you would not remember my name, I am glad you did." Nupur says with no emotion in her tone neither on her face.
"Nupur, how many times do I have to tell you that I am your mother." Sheena replies annoying at the girl's reaction.
"Oh really? Do you remember that?" Nupur replies Sheena right on her face, with aggresive look on her face.
"Stop it Nupur! By the way forget this. What am I hearing? You are moving to London?" Sheena asks with agner on her face.
"I don't think I need to ask you about what I want to do? and anyway You got nothing to do with my life, nothing at all. I am going to London tomorrow, and I am not asking you, I am telling you remember that", Nupur says coldly before walking out of the house.
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So guyz
Here is the 1st Part
If you still want me to continue
Please comment!
Love ZoaH

Sorry for late reply.I'm very busy now.So, But,now I have take some time for my sweet sis's ff.
Thanks for dedicating thispart to me.
Now come to the update.Update is superb dear.It has every emotion.Very intersting part.nupur is totally diffrent from ur other ff but I loved her. u nicely described the conversation between nupur and sanam.
u r described mayank is lazy fellow😆.Completely different form ur other ff .Hey what happen between nupur and her mother.Whe she was behaving with her so rudely.Suspense.U put always suspense very good😳
Continue soon dear😳..
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
nice one as usual l zoah ....... plz add me to ur pm list as well...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Hey Zoah
nice CS
do include me to your pm list and do update soon
shinz thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
it is an interesting story....looking forward to mayur meeting...!
plz add me to the pm list...!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
I toh loved it..!!!
a gr8 beginning..!!
Pm me 4 sure....plz..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

I like your fan-fiction!

Please add me to your pm list!
Thank you!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: nikki028

gr8 start dear......i lovd it.....btw sheena ko tumne nups ki mom banali???????😆.........achi idea yaar.....nywz plzz continue soon

thanks Nikki!
will cont soon!

Originally posted by: stuti123

nice one as usual l zoah ....... plz add me to ur pm list as well...........

thanks a lot hun!
will add u in my pm list!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Sorry for late reply.I'm very busy now.So, But,now I have take some time for my sweet sis's ff.
Thanks for dedicating thispart to me.
Now come to the update.Update is superb dear.It has every emotion.Very intersting part.nupur is totally diffrent from ur other ff but I loved her. u nicely described the conversation between nupur and sanam.
u r described mayank is lazy fellow😆.Completely different form ur other ff .Hey what happen between nupur and her mother.Whe she was behaving with her so rudely.Suspense.U put always suspense very good😳
Continue soon dear😳..

hey Di
thanks a ton for the long comment!
its ok about the delay
i understanf!
sooooooooo happy u loved it!
will cont soon!
399703 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: shinz

it is an interesting story....looking forward to mayur meeting...!
plz add me to the pm list...!

hey thanks a lot
will add u in pm list!

Originally posted by: yoshita.mayufan

I toh loved it..!!!
a gr8 beginning..!!
Pm me 4 sure....plz..!

hey
thanks a lot
will pm u for sure!

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

I like your fan-fiction!

Please add me to your pm list!
Thank you!

thanks a ton
will pm u!
thanks
399703 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: NabeehaFS

Hey Zoah
nice CS
do include me to your pm list and do update soon

thanks a lot hun!
will pm u!

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