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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 2
"I don't think I need to ask you about what I want to do? and anyway You got nothing to do with my life, nothing at all. I am going to London tomorrow, and I am not asking you, I am telling you remember that", Nupur says coldly before walking out of the house.

Nupur walks out of the house, while Sheena keep shouting her name on her back. Nut Nupur is way to furious to talk or listen to anyone. She takes her car out and drives off to an unknown destination.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Mayank comes out of shower wearing black formal shirt with skinny jeans. He looks hot as ever in black. He walks towards the dressing table to grabs his watch and wallet. He wears his watch on his right hand wrist and picks up the wallet. He opens the wallet to check if her has got all his important cards or not. As he opens, he looks at a picture on the right side of the wallet. It was Nupur's picture. He stares at the picture for few seconds and feels guilt taking over him of what he did to her. She did not deserved that at all. He borke her trust, NO he broke HER.

"I am sorry Nupur! Please forgive me if possible!" Mayank says, moving his fingers on the photo and a long tear escapes from his eyes which was craving to come out since long time. The tear drops on the photo.

"Mayank! Will you please hurry up? We don't have all day you see?" Sonal's voice comes through his room window along with car horns.
Mayank quickly wipes his tears, places the wallet in his pocket after checking the cards.
"Coming guys!" that is all Mayank manages to say, before coming out of his room and closing the door behind, grabbing his jacket off the bed.

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Nupur looks furoius as fire as if she is about to murder someone. An arguement with her mother was becoming a daily habit now. Thats how her morning starts every day. Nupur is sick of all this now, She just wants go somewhere, where she is away from all this. The place where she can feel herself, where she can live for herself. The world of love, affection.

Nupur always hated Sheena. Nupur was only 8 years old, when her father died in car crash. Ever since then, Sheena was too much into business and kitty parties, so she never really had time for Nupur. Nupur was brought up by her Nanny DJ. Most of the time, Sheena lived abroad, due to business trips. The love that a mother gives to her children, Nupur was away from that love, affection. As Sheena kept going away from Nupur, the more Nupur started hating her.
That is one of the reasons of Nupur's aggressive behaviour with everyone. But the people close to her know how much she craves to get loved by someone.

Nupur parks her car in the parking lot and comes out of it, locking the car door behind. She walks out of the parking lot and walks down the stairs on the left, which leads to the inside area of beach. The beach looks beautiful, waves coming up and down. The cold breeze touches Nupur's face, sending chills running through her body.
It is morning time, so there not much people around, so it is very peaceful area. Nupur walks down the stairs and looks at the calm water, which seems as if it is the silence before a heavy storm.

Nupur comes near the water, walks inside the water. The cold calm water touches her white feet. She looks down and a silent tear escape her eye.

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"Sorry guys" Mayank comes apologising, while taking his seat at the back side of the car. He looks bit upset and somewhere in his heart, he feels guilty.
"That's ok Mayank." Says Sameer, looking handsome, in red t shirt, with black jeans.
"Ok guys, lets go! And Mayank, you know the way right?" asks Sonal from the front seat.
"No, I don't. I thought Sameer would know it, as he comes to London very often, right Sameer? Mayank asks Sameer.

Mayank, Sameer and Sonal moved to London a day before yesterday. They all wanted to do their further studies in oxford, so decided to move to London. Sameer's parents are very rich, so they used to visit London very often, so they had a bungalow there. That is the place where, trio are living right now.

"No I don't know the way. I thought you would know it." Sameer questioned back. Mayank and Sonal looks shocked hearing this.
"What? Couldn't you tell us before? How we going get there now? Sonal asks Sameer, looking straight into his eyes.
"Guys lets just follow the directions. Hopefully we should get there. What time does the enrolment start?" Sameer replies in a calm manner, looking nervous while asking about the time.
"It starts at 1 o'clock." Sonal replies, while Mayank looks lost in his own world.
"We should get there by the time. Its only 11:45." Sameer assures the two.

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Nupur cries silently, while in the side of the beach. She curses her fate, for giving this torture in her life. This is just going beyond the limit now? What the heck have I done to get this pain? I am the biggest fool on the earth to believe in stupid thing called love. It just does not exist in this world, she thought to herself. All she did was, loved someone, trusted someone more than anything else, but what did she have in return? Betrayal, broken trust, disloyalty? Why did I ever believe him? Why? She questions herself, for being the biggest idiot in the world'

Flashback:

It was nearly 5 o' clock, and it was getting dark as well due to winter. Nupur walked over to the locker room and kept her books inside. When she turned around to walk, she bumped into someone. She nervously looked up to find Mayank standing in front of her. She sighed in relief, and gave a small smile to him.
Mayank looked hot as ever, in white plain t shirt, with similar colour jeans, fitted his body perfectly.

"Hi" Mayank started conversation, unexpectedly.
"Hi" Nupur replied.
"How come you still in college? Didn't we finish at 12 today?" Mayank asked Nupur, surprisingly seeing her in college at this time when the lesson finished at 12 in the afternoon.
"None of your business mate" Nupur said sarcastically, before walking out of the room. It is very difficult explain Nupur in one word. She is mixes of every taste. She is bitter sometimes, but she can be sweetest at the same time. She is moody but she can be care free too. She is someone who is scared dream of something that she wants to come true. She knows that if she dreams about something, she wants; she is aware of the fact that her dream will be shattered as soon as she comes out her deep sleep. She is scared to imagine things, scared to be herself. She fears if someone finds out her weaknesses then they will hate her, so she covered herself with this big wall of moodiness, ignorant.

It's not that she is moody or ignorant kind of person, but she believes in keeping the emotions inside the heart. She never allowed them to come out of the heart as she afraid of the outcome; and when she let them come out, her worst fear came true.
She had this image of the moody person in the college, which she never let it washed away by anything or anyone. But there was time where she was herself, completely care free, independent, and that was when she was with her friends. She did not have to act anything in front of her friends, she could just be herself.

Present:

"I was so right. I should not have allowed my emotions to come out. I shouldn't have." cries Nupur to herself.

Happy reading and commenting x x
Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
awesome update plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
res
itni der se kyo pm bheja???
m not d first one to coment..
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hey zoah!!
twas such a nice part...
i really luvd it...
haaye..tumne dono mayu aur nups ko rula diya....
well...d part was awesum though!!
do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm... =)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
wow zoah...loved it very much.....her characterization is just superb....waiting for the next one now....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
lovely update... zoe

Dedicated to you



Last night I was taking a walk along the river
And I saw him together with a young girl
And the look that he gave made me shiver
Cause he always used to look at me that way
And I thought maybe I should walk right up to her and say
Ah-ha-ha, it's a game he likes to play


Look into his angeleyes
One look and you're hypnotized
He'll take your heart and you must pay the price
Look into his angeleyes
You'll think you're in paradise
And one day you'll find out he wears a disguise
Don't look too deep into those angeleyes
Edited by ranbir_lekha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
hey
nice update
wat a gal nupur is
omg u have shown her life so miserable
hope that will soon become a happy one
plzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
lovely,superb, update.I loved nupur .u well wrote her character.
but too much pain in her life.jaldi se sab thik kar do.
keep it up dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
gr88 prt
thanxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
well u r right........mayank looks hot in black!!!
klya kiya tha mayank ne??????
kya hua tha???????
i can completely understand nupur......
what can she do??
it's not her fault.......
wow beach!!!!!!!
i love beach.......
what the hell did mayank do to her??????
ok ther's a flashback.......
let me read it........
kaisi ho na>???
aage to kuch likha hi nahi......
mujhe lagta hai ki mayank ne nupur ka dil tod diya......
aur nupur usse isi liye nafat karti hai.....
par plzzzzzz ab jaldi update karo......
i m waiting.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Zoah
What an update yaar.
its toooo muchhhhhh good.
loved nups a lotttt but at the same time feel sad for her.😭😭😭
😭😭She leads a very unhappy life.
But whats about mayank???
why he leaved nupur alone???????
Hmmm so many Q in my mind hunny.
pls update soon and ans. all the Q.
Take Care.
😃Faria---------------------------------------

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