NEW MaYuR FF! ~pyaar ke lamhe~ UPD8 Pg41 part7!!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayurarti

plz plz plz update soooooooooon and pm me


sure will hopefully today!
Ashna😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

plz cont soon

and pm me!


sure i will
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: hgrhr

hey

this sounds like a good read..!!
do continue soon..!
and add me to the PM list..!


thnx i sure will
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

nice intro plzzzz continue soon.....plzzzzz pm me😳


thnx kk hpoefully i will soon
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi
Good start.
Hope we will enjoy it
Keep it up and pls do PM me


thnx i m sure u will
Ashna😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nupur= N Mayank=M Ranvijay=RV Gunjan=G Samrat=S Shilpa Aunty= SH Dia=D Benji=B Uday=U blue= past Pink = present

Part 1 A broken Heart

N(thinking)- Aaj meri zindagi ka sabse bara din hai, kyunki aaj mein apni naih zindagi shuru karne jaongi, 😳😳😳wo bhi uske saath jisko mein bohut pyaar karti hu. 😳😳Aaj mein itni khush hu ki mein shabdo mein bayaan nahi kar sakti,😳 pur pata nahi kyun mujhe bohut gabrahat ho rahi hain😕. Aaisa lag raha hai ki kuch galat hoga😕😕😕- nahin nahin aisa kuch nahin hoga, Nupur tu kuch zyada soch thi hain.

G- Nupur!!!!!!!!!!!😡

Nupur snaps out of her thoughts to see Gunjan standing there with her arms crossed and a confused look on her face.

N- h-han Gunjan di aap ne b-bulaya kya?😲😲

G: Nupur!! Mein tujhe paanch(5) (holds up five fingers to indicate) Baari bulaya hai!!😡😡😡 Kaha kho gaye thi tu??!!😡😡😡

N(hesitates to tell Gunjan di her thoughts, but then she thinks it will unnecessary worry Gunjan di so she decides not to)- nahinwo😕😕''' kuch nahin😕''. Wo '..actually''. m-meri pehli baar shaadi ho rahi hai na'.. to bus'. To bus thori gahabrahat si ho rahi hai😳.

Upon hearing this Gunjan starts laughing and Nupur's hesitation look dissolves into an angry one, as she narrows her eyes.)

N(very angry)- Di!!!! Kyu haas rahi ho??!! Its not funny!! 😡

G(still trying to control her laughter)- sorry wo actually tu ne itni stupid baath jo kayedi!!😆😆😆

N(now completely furious) ' maine kya kaha??!!!😡

G- Nupur tub hi na! shaadi sabkhi pelhi baar hi hothi hai genius saath baar nahi!!😆

N-oh(her face flushes embarrassed😳 and a tint of pink caresses her cheeks and she doesn't know what to say) m-mera yahi matlab n-nahi tha😳 (she whispers)

G(finally stops laughing and looks at the time and her eyes grow big😲😲) Nupur!! Hum late ho jayenge tujhko tyaar bhi karma hai!!😲😲😲

A while later when gunjan is getting Nupur ready Nupur senses something is wrong so she decides to ask her

N- di! Kya hua??😕😕

G(hesitates)- k-kuch bhi t- tuo nahi!😕

N- u sure na?😕😕

G- ha baba!😊😊

N( knowing that Gunjan is lying, but wanting for her to tell on her own)- thikhe 😊

Then Gunjan's phone rings and she glances at it to see Samrat as the caller. Gunjan says to Nupur that she will be right back and runs to her own room in the big Mansion.

G(answering the phone)- hello Samrat! 😲😲

S- han Gunjan mujhe neeche milho paanch minute mein😕😕

G(worried)- sab thik to hai nah Samrat!😕

S: nahin! Sab galat hogaya! 😭😭

hope you love it!!!

Ashna😳😳

Edited by tvgirl21 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it's superb ashna. per mayu kaha hai. i m waiting 4 mayur first meeting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
it's wonderful
continue soon
i hope nupur doesn't get married to ranvijay!
pm me when u update
i'll add u 2 my buudy list to make it easier 4 u
Edited by mjht_fan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsome update yaaar
this is very interesting
i loved it
keep updating soon
cant wait to read the next part
tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Ashna,
Lovely part.
So nups going 2 marry RV? Oh no?????
But Sam told gunjan that there will b something wrong.
Mujhe lagta hain RV ne shaadi ke liye mana kar diya.
If its happen then it will b really a good news 4 us
Keep updating.
thanx 4 ur PM

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